AGHGH. What a cliffie. You are too cruel! ;) (Though I adore that I got two chapters today! YAY! ;))
Ginny must go with him... she will won't she? Oh, her Gryffindorness she's going to want to save Ron or Hermione. UGH! Perhaps she'll drag Draco along. I know you don't do fluff... but I think I may just die if Draco dies. (okay... I might be exaggerating a bit... but I'd be terribly dispondant for days! ;) )
That was lovely. Draco expressing his feeling to Ginny was very touching. What's wrong with Ginny? Does she feel the need to stay and fight the opposition like her brother and Harry?
I tried to review, will it appear shortly or has it gone to the void forever? No matter, I'll do it again, because I really really like this story. As a said before, I am now substituting this version of Ginny's "first time" for my own in my memory; mine wasn't nearly as fabulous. I loved how Draco asked Ginny for her fantasy of her first time and then did it, that was just flat-out erotic and wonderfully woman-centered. I also howled with laughter over the "I'm the worst Death Eater ever" bit. Just completely top drawer all round, thanks so much!
For some reason, even after the site had been pulled back up, I culdn't pull up stories, and so I was forced to watche helplessly as your stoary was updated and I was completely unable to read it. Now that I can, I just wanted to tell you that it totally ROCKS, I'm serious I could never come up with a plot this good. I eagerly await the next chapter, Ginny's answer and the knowledge of whether or not there will be a happy ending, *on her knees* "please let there be a happy ending.
Keep up the excellence, ISBS.
P.S I was never any good at it. I’m a rotten Death Eater; probably the worst one there ever was, I suppose. I’ve never been able to do it properly. I couldn’t rape you. I couldn’t kill Dumbledore. I couldn’t even torture Granger.”- That line, for some reason made me laugh for almost an hour
PPS Have you ever read the Artemis Fowl series, you might like it, and for some reason it strikes me as the type of book you would take a make completely darker than it acutally is.
poor draco... what about snape though and bella. i am afraid that things won't go smoothly for our star-crossed lovers. in fact, i am sure of it
You are the evil Queen of Cliffies..! I love this fic so much. I about died over the break when the site was down and there were no updates.
It's ok Draco, if Ginny won't go with you I will..and I even have red hair!
well now to get off the couch... (haha the little freudian joke...)
hmmm... what now for our love birds?
*lower lip quivers and eyes fill with tears* They could! He could! He could totally change and they could be happy in the South of France!
... Right up until Voldemort found them and killed them. No way he'd just let go. And even if he did, Bellatrix wouldn't. *whimper*
Guh!
That is all. ;)
hmm, somehow i don't think things are going to go as smooth as draco would like. this update was so yummy and delicious and it just added to my already great birthday!!!
This was absolutely excellent! Though, it was rather mean to stop there! I'm hoping she's not going to turn him down - I don't think she will, but I guess we'll see. Either way, I don't think it's going to work out quite as simply as Draco is making it seem right now.
A dream, another dream, I don't believe it!! I don't mean the whole fic, I just mean this chapter. It CAN'T be true. He can't really love her? He can't really be ready to run from the Death Eaters?? I don't know what to say...on a constructive level, this chapter was mostly smut, so I don't really have anything useful to say. But for the fic as a whole, I'm very surprised by how benign Draco is (if you can call a person benign). Usually in your fics he is very dark, and very much capable of evil, so it surprises me that this Draco can't cast a Cruciatus, and has such an all-encompassing weakness. I actually think it's closer to canon this way, but don't think I'm not expecting a huge twist. Because I am.
PS-- You said you'd write a short fic of the hidden HBP moments? I'll consider it that old reward fic I asked for, even if it's not! :-D
Oh man! My damned internet didn't work all of yesterday, and I didn't get to have my dose of D/G, but your two wonderful chapters made up for it. The smutty scene was so sweet, although Ginny admitting she loves him appears to be a bit too soon? Perhaps suffering from Stockholm Syndrome she is?
I am dealthly afraid of what is going to happen to the two of them now that they are planning to live "happily ever after" by running away, but something is going to stop them. Who will find out? Who? WHO?
YES! Her reply should be YES! But, this awful part of me has a feeling there is something we the readers do not know and that they are not going to live happily ever after as perhaps Draco is imagining.... but, I still hope they do! :) Great chapter!
Great chapter, of course.
But what I really want to know is does Ginny really love Draco? Or is she just saying that?
Well, Draco finally got him some Ginny-love. Does she really love him? Would she abandon her cause to be with him? Was she ever allowed to be useful to her cause in the first place? I don't know. I just don't know.
Hooray for naught bits! Hooray for more things to ponder while I wait for the next chapter. Good job!
Oh, you did not just leave that there. For some reason, this seems worse than most of the other cliffhangers you've left in this story, probably because I have a sinking feeling that I am not going to like the answer very much. Ah well. Anyway, the sex scene was really quite lovely.
Brilliant! That has to be one of, if not the, best writings of Ginny losing her virginity. I am so glad you had Draco say he loved her......I don't know why, but I really liked that. It was great, and I cannot wait to see where this ride is going.
Oh wow, really, she could wrap him around her tiny finger if she wanted to at this point, no?
Great! Ginny told the truth! Draco was wonderful in helping out Ron and letting Ginny inside his rough interior. I am worry about Ron doing something foolish. He may want to save Hermione because he does care about her. Hopefully, he won't get hurt in the process or Draco won't get caught in letting the prisoner go. What danger lurks ahead for our characters?
Just got around to this story today, it's rather wonderful. I was thinking that "Ron" is really Harry, but now that the love potion theory has been revealed, I'm thinking not... or??? Anyway, very creative and well done, looking forward to the next.
I have to tell you, I love this story. It has to be one of the best characterizations of Draco I've seen - he didn't become some fluffy bunny, but he's not a callous bastard either. Love it, love it, love it.
So so good! I liked the little mention of the Essay of Doom. It was a nice touch, even if it did lead to an evil cliffhanger. That's ok, though; I'll get over it. I'm a little curious as to Ron's reaction as well. There was just something about it that seemed a little off. But maybe I'm reading into Draco's thoughts too much. Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! xoxox
I like how you put in the stuff about Hermione dosing Harry- totally believe it could have happened and am REALLY hoping to read in the 7th book that it did. NOW GET US THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! :) Please :)
It's nice to see your and Creamtea's theory put into a story context. That essay stuck in my head weeks after reading it, and it' s interesting to see how you think it might play out if it were true.
I wonder if someone came to talk to Ron about Draco. Maybe Snape or Bellatrix or anyone, and told him to be on the lookout for Draco. Maybe they told him to do what Draco said, but alert them, in exchange for Hermione's safety, because I don't see how Ron could bear to leave Hermione on the train without him there. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter, nice job.