I expected this was coming, but not so soon. Her actions from last chapter told that she wasn't telling him the truth. Draco is in way over his head now.
That was so deliciously hot. My favorite line: "Can I watch?". Nice! I think Mynuet can cancel the bus she has chartered for us....because this lovely little hike you're taking us on (with it's seemingly non-cliffhanger endings) is getting us there quite quickly! Great job!
I feel really twisted saying this, but in an odd way I hope that the curse works on Hermione. Not to the extent that she loses her mind, or suffers horribly, but just so that Draco is able to get some kind of credibility with the rest of the Death Eaters. After the end of the sixth book, I feel like he's lost so much of it, and to go through all of this trouble - torturing Hermione and what not, throwing 'Bella' out before she got a chance to have her way with him - and not end up with anything would be awful.
I have a sinking feeling, though, that he won't be able to summon up enough hate to go through with the curse.
Anyway, Happy New Year! Thanks for the new chapter.
Splendid! I haven't enjoyed a new fic like this in, well, years. Good on you.
Can't wait for the next chapters!
GAH! What horrible news will Snape bring to the meeting? What does Ron want Ginny to remember? Did Ginny lie about her experience? I need to know! Another tantalizing chapter. I'm aching for the next one!
Great two chapters!! Happy New Years and keep writing it is coming along wonderfully!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
I so like this! Is Ginny lying to Draco about Harry? And who said this didn't end with an evil cliffie? I am so worried about Ron and Hermione, though I usually ship H/Hr. where is Harry? And what will happen to Draco once Snape comes to know of his failure? I am so afraid this will turn out to have a disastrously sad end, and I can't bear sad D/G stories. There, I have offloaded. And did I mention that you are an incredible writer? I have read all your stories and am waiting for you to update Jewel of the Harem.
Oh dear, the idea that Draco's happiness is really a cliffhanger is slightly frightening... I won't think about it too much!
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. The plot is very creative. Your Draco is also one of the more complex and intriguing I've read.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Oh my God!!! I can't stop gushing my thanks to you for making such a wonderful story!!! How do you do it? I mean, it just seems so real, it just goes so deep! I've read what feels like thousands of stories about Draco and Ginny, or Draco, or whatever, but your version of Draco Malfoy and Ginny Weasley seem to top the lot. I mean, I thought it would be impossible to write about Draco and make him sound exactly as he does in the book, as I thought it would with any character! But when I happened to stumble across this masterpiece I found that it is possible and I love it! It's like JK's writing and your own mixed together! AAAAAAACK! I LOVE YOU!
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okay, now that was sad. they love each other and you just gotta torture hermione huh!
lol, i'm just joking. i'm really glad you finally mentioned hermione now because i was wondering about her. :)
now i'm wondering about harry. HAR HAR HAR.
You have such a brilliant mind, but awful in keeping us in suspense. I kept cringing thinking about what ending you were going to lead us into, now I'm curious. Ginny seems to have warm up to Draco's talents and ideas. She seems to have a secret or two that you keep avoiding. I thought we might have some hindsight but Draco went and behave like a gentlemen(in not going all the way). I can't wait to find out if Ginny had another lover. And I hope everything turns out OK for Ron and Hermione in getting help. Your wonderful in updating so quickly! Have a safe and Happy New Year!
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Happiness? Of course that can't last! The reprecussions of not being able to get the information out of Ron and Hermione will no doubt come into play. And Ginny seems to be altogether too compliant. It makes me wonder if she has something up her sleeve. Ah, well. I guess I will just have to wait to see what is to come.
another great chapter, as usual, but one line just made me crack up:
“No, I don’t,” Draco said. “Male Malfoys usually don’t. It’s a family trait. Do you mind?”
does that mean that female Malfoys have chest hair? It sort of comes off that way.
Oh it so very much IS a cliffhanger! Draco's happy, sure, but he still doesn't have any information, and I can't imagine that either Bella or Snape isn't aware of his botched torture attempt and will be coming around. Ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. You're evil.
As long you update regulary, I don't mind your cliffies too much; Draco's in trouble...will it be Snape or Bella?
I also think that Ginny is actually a virgin...suspected it from the beginning. Good chapter, Draco almost swoooned *snicker*
I really love the way you write Draco - powerful and vulnerable at the same time, but with a twist thrown in that makes him irresistably evil. I guess it just feeds into my penchant for messed up men, but what can I say. You write very well. What gets me is that so far this Draco definitely seems the most normal of all, so I really wonder what must be coming. I see how that is a cliffie, I mean Draco isn't a person to be all normal and happy for long, now is he?
Aaagghhh! I now christen thee as "Queen Anise of the Cliffhangers". You are surperb at the cliffhangers..... consistently, every chapter. That is a compliment, not a complaint. I only wish there was a bit more of interaction between Draco and Ginny after the, um, *cough*, reward. I would love to have a bit more insight as to what Ginny thought about that whole exchnage.
This is certainly building in intensity. Is Draco ever going to be able to crawl out of the pit he's dug himself? His Slytherin way of loving is so utterly sad in its violence.
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Another great chapter! I am now addicted to this story, and I think it might be my favorite story of your's now. I love you characterizations of Malfoy. However the fact remains that these cliffs are killing me!
Noooooo...please, I beg you Queen of Cliffies, no more, I can't take it anyway. You have very nicely created conflicting emotions inside me; Draco isn't a nice guy, but I like him anyway. But I can't like him in this chapter 'cause he is nasty and selfish and cowardly. But he is also extremely sexy, ane he has no control (so I delude myself), and that makes it very Shakesperean and romantic, how one can't change one's destiny. Now i'm babbling...It must be the fall from that cliff without a parachute
Those cliffhangers...they me everytime; thank god another chapter is already updated! I love how the story is so perverse...it would have been interesting letting Bella do more, but we all know little Draco couldn't stand that. Wonderful
The tension keeps getting tighter and tighter with each chapter. This story is very good. I like the interaction between Draco and Ginny. Draco conflicting emotions between what is right and what is wrong. Yes, you are evil leaving us hanging at the end, but wonderful in updating quickly.
Malfoy's a naughty little boy, isn't he? Of course, he IS 19, so you really can't blame him. He's just in need of some Gin-love. =D And, from the looks of things, Ginny might not need any persuasion to give some love...
Hmm, I wonder if Ron'll start singing like a canary now? Hah. Of course, there is always Bella, she'll make him sing, probably just to get her away from him. I know I would.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I imagine it'll be as good as the others have been so far. So long as you
stay away from those cliffscontinue to write.