"Then, he would suddenly remember how miserably he’d treated her and her friends at school all those years ago, and he’d experience a sudden hitch in his confidence…."...Hints of a regretful Malfoy perhaps? Marriage ceremonies are notoriously hard to write. How do yo keep them fresh? How do you meet expectations"when shippers have been playing out the moment in their heads? Intresting take on the elements. What does wind do to fire? Wind causes it to grow larger, hotter, and more dangerous.
Oh, this is a wonderful story. Please update soon and don't keep me in suspicion. I love it.
Oh that is so sad. I wish that you would just make them fall in love right now.
I used my detective skills to hunt down this story on another site. I couldn't stop reading! It was amazing, and I think you succeeded in your mission, especially with the ending that you had! I felt so depressed the entire day after reading it :(
ha right after i left that review i googled it and found irt : ) i loooved it. i cried : ( haha im such a loser
i'm liking this a lot. can't wait to see the sparks fly! please do continue.
I'm completely hooked on this one, loving it so far!
That list of points is interesting, Just how many of her "conditions" will be rescinded over the year if any? Course, Annie, you can guess how I feel about "I am not changing my name" P.S. Still waiting on your present to come back.
So far so good. This is an interesting take on arranged marriages and I'm looking forward to your next update.
Oh, famous last words. I'm glad to see the update.
i love this story. some people were saying they were happy its posted on this site too. what other site is it posted on??
Author's Response: Oh no! If I tell you, you'll go over and read it all there and never review here again! But...if you're really interested I suppose I can be forthcoming. It's finished at Checkmated (www.checkmated.com). If you read it all, let me know how you like it!
I think this is a nice start to an arranged marriage fic, so I'm really looking forward to see where you're going. Good job.
Oh goody. I love this story. Please update soon! (Ahh...the plot thickens...)
I like it! The plot is good, as is your writing style...
Hey! I see you've posted over here too! Yay! I've got to say it's wonderful to see this story going up over here. It reminds me of the first times I read it over at CM. -sigh- Good times, good times. LOL
Talk to you soon, TM
Author's Response: Hey there--what are you doing over here? Thanks for the "review." I'll have to stop by WN and leave one for you!
Please update! I loved it! Only one thing that was confusing...in the beginning, you spelled Weasley "Wheezly". Was that to show that the spelling had changed over a period of time, or did you just make a mistake?
But I still loved it!
Author's Response: No, it was to show that the spelling had changed over time: lots of names have done that--evolved from their early spellings. Thanks for reviewing!
Please update! I loved it! Only one thing that was confusing...in the beginning, you spelled Weasley "Wheezly". Was that to show that the spelling had changed over a period of time, or did you just make s mistake?
I saw this story on another site and never read it because ... well, the name was lame, or so it seemed. Something nudged me to read the first chapter here and being an impatient person, I went back and read the whole thing, and I'm just floored. I won't state any particulars because I don't want to ruin it for anyone else, so I'll just say: BRAVO! Thanks.
Author's Response: "The name was lame." OK, I'm laughing! Thanks for giving it a chance. I'm glad you're floored, and I'm glad you let me know! :D
omg you gotta update soon plzzz im dying to know whats gonna happen next. Its a very interesting plot, not cliched in the least. Good job!!
Author's Response: Will update tonight, if possible.
Ooh finally you decided to update this story here !!! Good because it definetely deserved to be here, temple of D/G stories :-) Well, just a piece of advice to everybody : you really really really (that's three times) should read this !! Keep up writing D/G you're good at it !
Author's Response: Thank you for that accolade!
Wow. It's great so far! I can't wait for more! And you know grammar! I'm so happy!
Author's Response:Yeah, good grammar makes a difference between a readable story and one that's just...distracting, doesn't it? I can't vouch so much for my proficiency with commas: they've always been the bane of my writing existence.
Thanks for you review.
I can't say much either except this story does belong here. People are going to like it. Heck, I even wrote a little fanfic of your fanfic. I sent it to you Did you get it? I am also known as EJAU on another site.
Author's Response: Wow, you wrote a fanfic of this? I am totally floored. What a huge honor! No, I didn't get it. Did you Owl it? I haven't signed into the forums in 2 days: maybe it's there. I'll go check and see.
This is a very excellent start. I can't wait to see where you take them.
I love the idea of the story. Very nice and sneeky...can't wait till you post again. Hopefully soon!