Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Feb 17, 2007 08:28 pm
So Draco was somehow ...feeding... off of Bellatrix? Interesting.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 25, 2006 02:25 pm
I'm more intrigued by this story than ever, but also extremely confused. I am fully confident, however, that it will all come together in the end. I can't wait to see what will happen. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Haha, well, hopefully I can pull it all together in the end. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: mo reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 24, 2006 12:51 am
STILL LOVING IT, write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've stuck with it!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 23, 2006 04:02 pm
Well.
That was unexpected. Bella is pure, unadulterated E-VIL. Worse than Voldemort, I think.
So she did something to him, gave him something with that kiss, right? Ick. I would not presume to guess.
But I'm hoping for a happily ever after. Or at least a 'no one that I love dies' ever after. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I was creeped out by Bella when I wrote this! But what the plot demands must be fulfilled... Thanks for reviewing!
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 12:12 pm
Wow. I'm surprised at what happened. I think it was good. I have no predictions but I do hope that Draco took enough energy from Bellatrix that she will die. I'm hoping but I'm not sure you would take her out this story just yet. I like how you incorperated Alice in Wonderland, too. Hope you update soon! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for a thorough review! I didn't really expect anyone to guess the strange workings of my mind but it's nice to get feedback to check if I'm leading people down the wrong road! As to death...well, next chapter!
Name: ablaze reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 09:50 am
OHHH I CANT WAIIT! I adore this story ;; brilliantly written! Keep us posted, wont you?
Author's Response: Haha, of course!
Name: die Loreley reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 12:50 am
Loved it! Keep on writing, please! (p.s. Bella makes me wanna puke too!)
Author's Response: Yeah, I was disturbed writing that part! I was like...uh, should I do it, should I not...but in the end, I had to for the sake of the story.
Name: babigurlchels reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 10:59 pm
I really like this story... I would like to see what happens next soon!
=)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter is coming along...
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 06:29 pm
This is more than just a read as I had seen it before. Reading this is more of a study now and not a boring one. The complexity of the thought in the characters is at first seemingly simple but if you read into it more you understand alot and at the same time nothing because I dont have the full knowledge of their thoughts... I think that Draco is a balance of dark power and light power he needs both to be well I think that Ginny makes him feel good because she is light where his aunt was dark. He takes from Ginny and has now taken from his aunt. I dont think Draco can handle it at this point he needs but like Ginny said their doing everything they can for him but is it enough?
Author's Response: Ah, a very thorough analysis but don't worry, I won't make it too hard at the end! Hopefully everything will be explained. In writing the next part, I've been going back over the story again to make sure I get all the threads back together! Haha, it's gotten to complicated for me even!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 04:53 pm
OMG, Draco's a Dementor! He's just given Bella the kiss! Wait, that doesn't have anything to do with Alice in Wonderland, does it?
Well, you have just forced me to break my month long promise not to read any fanfic until NaNoWriMo was over. Who cares? It was a fabulous, glorious chapter. Two more chapters? Is it possible? Is Draco an Alice-like character, confused and pushed around and in the end the one who emerges from it all after turning the world on its head? And Dumbledore? Is he the King who pardons everyone? Isn't he the one who told Draco he had a choice - he could use his powers to heal or not as he saw fit? That he could be whoever he wanted to be? Obviously, I have no freaking idea of what is going on but will doggedly hang on until the end.
Thank you for updating one of my favourite fics! How noble was that? Draco falling on the sword to save Ginny's life? Did he just save his own by being willing to give up his life for hers? Same bat time. Same bat channel... I'll be here!
Author's Response: Haha, that's the funniest comment I've had in a long time. Gosh, Alice in Wonderland is disturbing enough without any *kissing* involved!
Name: sillysun reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 02:17 pm
I just read through everything you've got so far and wanted to say how much I like it. Will definitely look forward to more - you have a nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like it!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 11:51 am
oooh
I just started reading this and it is vair good...
well written, and the like. the plot thing is vair exciting ;)
can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for reviewing! Haha, great choice in fandom name
Name: Audrey reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 10:55 am
OMG! YAY!! You've updated :D I'm am sooo happy, wonderful chapter..the plot is thickening and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please keep on writing and update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm *finally* getting around to the next chapter. Hopefully, it'll be out soon!
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 20, 2006 06:46 pm
I had my guesses all along that Bella was messing with the poor kid.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah. Bella is a crafty one!
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 20, 2006 05:10 pm
Wonderful chapter. I have been reading since the beginning, but only now have reviewed. I love the Alice in Wonderland connections, and the illustrations are very good as well. You can write and draw! I have many questions that I know you will not answer, so I will wait for the next 2+ chapters, and then bug you!
Natasha
Author's Response: Well, thanks for reviewing! It's always good to know there's more than 10 people reading this!
Name: Cheezie_Biscuit reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 20, 2006 03:56 pm
my guess is that by taking part of her, he's tainted himself bcuz bella is impure...
Author's Response: Well, breathing the same air as her would taint anyone! Thanks for guessing but I don't want to reveal anything!