That was pretty good, it would be MUCH better if it was finished.

 PLEASE WRITE MORE!

STT was HERE

Hahaha! I'm chortling as well.

I've got to tell you, I just finished clearing the fics waiting to be validated in the queue, was putzing around and ran across this story. Man, am I ever glad I read it!

I live for snark, and your Ginny has the perfect amount. Her will had me giggling like a ten year old girl. This fic is an absolutely perfect balance of sheer insanity and drollness. Straight to the favorites list!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I absolutely adore your fics, you cant imagine how much a compliment from you means to me!

Im glad you enjoyed it! 

Wow, she is crazy. And I never heard of chucking someone.

Author's Response: Ahaha. She's a teenage girl. Yes, she's slightly insane, haha. I believe "chucking" someone is the english term for breaking up with/dumping them. :) thank you so much for reviewing both chapters! :) I really appreciate it.

hehehehe. Love it!

oh my gawds, i'm laughing like a loser. nicely done :) pls update. i also just read your other story. it was really great. keep it up and update soon please. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Author's Response:

im so glad you enjoyed it ! thank you ! :)

Oh that was just beyond entertaining. I am ever so looking forward to what happens next.

Heh, this is amusing. Writing in first person can be difficult, so good on you for your first time out. The tense shifts are a bit jarring though, so perhaps you could find a way to make them a little more seamless? Otherwise, I'm liking this and am eager to see where you go with it!

Author's Response:

thanks for your review ! i'm sorry if you found it jarring or if it pulled you out of the story for a minute :(

i really am trying my hardest, and i'll try to watch out for tense shifts more often. thank you so much for reviewing !

I've confess to reading this fic a total of 3 times! The first time, I ended up intrigued but confused. The second time, I cheated and read your reviews & responses BEFORE I read it, and then expended much energy making sure I understood the damn thing. The third time was a charm. I laughed and hooted my way through the glorious thing - maybe even outdoing Ginny herself at the end! I NEVER read something more than once so why 3 times? I don't know. I was intrigued by your use of language. Very witty and quick - so quick that when I blinked, I missed something crucial. I liked that. I also thought it was a bold move to go for a humorous fic your first time out. Now that I've almost created a fic out of this review, I will sign off. Good job! - fallenwitch

Author's Response:

your review means so much to me, as you are absolutely my fanfic hero. i LOVE your fic, and the fact that you appreciated mine just sends me into pure giddy-ness. im so glad you enjoyed it. also just to clear it up, i am not bold, i am safe. humour is the only thing i know. i can't spin amazing, never-before seen plotlines (like you), so i tell a cliched story and hope people are laughing too much to notice. lol (i think its working :grins evilly:). - fluff ducky

First half was standard goodbut  second half oohoo hehehe  v v v v g =)


Author's Response: thanks!

Hilarious! And I like how you did the exact opposite of the 'test'. Instead of Draco saving her, he falls down on top of her, very funny.

Author's Response: thanks. i get really sick of the whole, "ginny almost cracked open her skull, but luckily malfoy caught her" thing. and then they gaze into each others eyes adoringly before he shoves her away or something.. it really bothers me when i see it constantly.

post-its are muggle... um maybe if you made them magical never lose their stick post-its...

also try to remember show don't tell.  your ginny tells us how she she feels we don't see it. because of this you writing doesn't flow. 

one solution to this is not writing in first person. there are a lot of pit falls to first person because the writing starts to sound repetitive, which in turn can make the characters sound younger.

i hope that this is helpful.

ps if you want clarification on some of my points email me (lima_crew@yahoo.com) 

Author's Response: Thank you for your advice. I'm not going to change my story from first person to narrative, because that's how it was before, and it's funnier this way. however, your absolutely right about showing, not telling. i'll try to do that more as i continue to write. thank you.