Name: Nice reviewed
Retribution on Jan 10, 2006 06:28 am
i like where it's headed. it should make for a wonderful and interesting read.
Name: eli reviewed
Retribution on Jan 09, 2006 08:33 am
I love this story already. Please update soon!
Name: emvee reviewed
Retribution on Jan 09, 2006 03:13 am
ok, where's the rest?!?!?! lot's of potential, a good beginning plot twist and a wonderful starting point. can't wait for the next chapter. keep going!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Retribution on Jan 08, 2006 06:52 pm
Hmm...interesting. I'll wait to see how it unfolds.
Name: Lottie reviewed
Retribution on Jan 08, 2006 05:21 pm
Wow! She's going to cause some trouble! I love it!