Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 23, 2006 01:43 pm
hey, please continue this fic! it is really intriguing and well written. great job!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 11, 2006 11:20 am
I really like the plot of this story but the story itself seems dis-jointed and fragmented.
It may just be because of the fast pace of this first chapter, but I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like the plot so far! :) I can understand your thoughts on the plot seeming dis-jointed and fragmented, I think it become a bit more smooth in the future. (or at least I hope so)
Name: Me reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 11, 2006 04:41 am
Ooh. Very interesting. Please update. More.
Good flow- so sad that Luna died though.
Please update, like I said again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I'll try to update soon, and I'm glad you liked it.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 10, 2006 07:05 pm
ok, so far i am hooked. i assumeyou have a good angle, i cant wait to see what comes next. like are the boys going to take advantage of her?
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I hope I end up having an angle that's to your liking, it's a little bit out of the ordinary. :)