This is sad... but deserves a sequel!

Ahhh! When I read the author's note I thought that all three parts were done! I love it! Update soon. I adore the way you made them friends at such a young age before people can be prejudice, and the Hercules comment is just adorable.

Hey! Lovely fic. I just loved it! But where's the other part??

Hurry up and update! :)

Oh! *chokes up* I think this is one of the only stories in which I've cried...just a little. Draco's such a sweetie! "I'll love you forever and ever." Ginny's so sweet that I just want to be little and play with them!

You have a grammar problem here:

"Their sons, all of the them, had a different suit that were proper and elegant."


Okay, what's there age here? I'd say you have to make them at least a few years older before this will be at all believable for their age. Six year olds (is that right) don't do things quite like that. Mostly I think it could have worked if they're kind of copying someone except for the "you're cure". Somehow that really didn't work for me.

But it was a cute story even though it's not really realistic.

Author's Response: Oh, the days of my youth. I wrote this -- I think -- three years ago without a spell-checker and about a year after I actually started writing anything. I look at it now and cringe a bit, so I can see why you're pointing out my mistakes and I completely agree with you. Thanks for being honest -- I'm debating on whether I should rewrite this so it's at least a little bit plausible, but I doubt I have the patience, attention span or time to. Anyway, thank you, again.

wow, you really need to update soon!!
Please tell me that he doesn't lose the locket!

Author's Response: thanks kitty! well, erm *sighs* we can't be too sure about the losing part.

I love the start to this story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks muchly! <3

It was nice seeing all the Weasleys as kids, they were all sweet though I don't get why Ron was portrayed as weak.
Draco was sweet too, though I feel for him

Author's Response: I loved writing the little Weasleys. Yeah, Ron was portrayed as a little weak, but it seemed Ginny had a good control over him. it was just a stage I guess. =P Everyone lurvs little Draco!