Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 21 on May 17, 2009 07:13 pm
I totally hear Ginny's confusion over the situation. Trying to figure out where her feeling start and Draco's begin could really make her confused.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 21 on Sep 09, 2006 04:51 pm
~WOW. I just love it.~
Name: Jaden Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 19, 2006 05:58 pm
Where are updates??? Aagghhhhh! Love this chapter, such a cliffie, omg I hope she marries him! ha ha
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 19, 2006 05:28 pm
Okay, new update time! Come on, up and at 'em! Pleeeeeeaase?!
Name: Siri reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 14, 2006 12:36 pm
Dear Peki,
I just want you to know how much I like this story, it is one of the very best Draco-Ginny-stories I have found! I check every day, hoping for a new chapter. Keep up the good work - and thanks!!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 12, 2006 06:44 am
Your writing just gets stronger with every chapter. I love this twist/new development. I like how Ginny is becoming a little more like Malfoy (snapping at the house elf) but I do worry about her relationship with her family. Great job!
Name: Dooki reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 10:30 pm
SHOCK! *in shock* but good shock.
Name: Maelyn reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 04:21 pm
I was thinking proposing is what he would do... I think she will agree to it, but maybe not for the right reasons- just like he isn't asking for necessarily the right reasons. She's right- there is something between them, and maybe along the way they will figure it out. I think they genuinely have come to care for each other but would rather die a painful death than ever admit it. So, that could hinder things slightly ;)
Great chapter! Need more SOON!!!!
Name: Corra reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 02:09 pm
Awww I love it! Gah, this fic is like my crack. I agree with her decision to wait and think about it; she'd be burning a lot of bridges with that one little word, "yes." I hope she does say yes!! I know our favorite redhead will work it out. Oh, and I love Draco in this chapter - he's not one for mushy sentiment (and neither am I for that matter). I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 02:07 pm
Wow, even though I suspected Draco would twist the contract that way, I wasn't sure you would actually do it! I adored this chapter. It was so sweet and real. You could have just made her give him an answer but the fact that she chose to think about it, makes it more realistic. I loved when Ginny imagined how he would react to a "no" but then wondered how he would react to "yes"- what a sweet line... I'm desperately hanging off the edge of my seat for her answer- I hope it's a yes! Now *that* would be an interesting twist and I'd love to see Ron's reaction!
Name: Lottie reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 11:49 am
Yay! It's sounding good so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Draco is so entertaining!
Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 09:36 am
i don't want her to say yes because that means the story would end sooner and we don't want to see that happen. i love your story and thanks for updating regularly.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 08:47 am
Hmmm...I am intrigued by the way you've characterized both Draco and Ginny and their angry, passionate, hissing attraction for each other. Of course she wants him to tell her he loves her, but in keeping with the tenor of their relationship, she tells herself and him it doesn't matter. I will stick a toe out over the edge by wondering what the fallout of this engagement will be (because I believe she will say yes - with her family practically shoving her towards him). Is Draco using her to further his goals for his father's release from Azkaban? Yes. Will he fall in the web he's cast for her and find himself head over heels "in love" with her and actually go through with the marriage? One can only hope. And what about this thing with Pansy? He needs her help as well, and while he has genuine warmth and affection for her, I do not believe it is along the lines that Pansy wants it to be. That part of him is already given to Ginny, whether or not he knows it.
On another note, I love the way you've portrayed Draco's relationship with Pansy. It's real and complex and many layered. She doesn't serve the usual one dimensional shrew that we've all seen too many times before. Her relationship with this older wizard is brilliant.
Speaking of brilliant, Draco's messy room was brilliant and befitting the Draco you've created. Somehow, things haven't quite turned out the way his parents had planned. He's in the middle of this mess but finding his way along quite nicely. How fitting that he chose that place to propose to her and that she found it "cosier" and more revealing of the true Draco than any other place in the Malfoy house.
I am also enjoying your writing. It is clear, concise and well-paced. So, that is what I have to say after 22 glorious chapters! I apologize for not reviewing earlier, but in my own self defense, I hopped on the train late - at Chapter 19 to be exact! - fallenwitch
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 07:56 am
Wow. That was amazing. Very very cool! I know she's got to say yes! He can't be joking, not about this!
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Name: Black Alnair reviewed
Chapter 21 on Apr 11, 2006 07:29 am
Wonderful. I had wanted her to say yes but I think the delay was well done. It provided some great insight to Draco's character and a better transition to 'that' stage. Absolutely great chapter.
Author's Response: :-) Thank you! I'm very happy with how this chapter turned out, personally, so I'm happy you liked it, too. And I think we all want her to say 'yes'...but that doesn't mean she will, of course *g*