Name: Mrs Alfred reviewed Life As You Know It on Aug 26, 2006 01:54 pm

"...it didn’t madder..." Spelling mistake. It should be *matter*.

"...lonely in her old age." "She did not look at all her 47 years." What? (!!!) 47 is elderly? If you want to be an old woman at 47 years of age, be my guest. Your happy, active, productive friends will laugh at you as they launch new companies, change careers, and chase (and catch(and enjoy)) men. But if you choose to be celibate, and sitting in a retirement home at 47, go ahead.

"...since then had not missed a single day of work." This is impossible. Children, especially non-verbal ones, get sick all the time. They can't let the parent know when they are starting to get sick, or where the pain is. No, the parent only finds out when there is a high fever, stubborn cough, and/or requisite diarrhea. That is if the child is helpful. The worst is when they just scream from pain. They can't say that their tummy hurts, or that they fell and broke their arm, or have a headache. If Lisa truly did not miss a day from work, then she is a neglectful, cruel, horrible mother.


Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out my careless mistakes. Maybe “older age” would have been better, hm? Glad to learn of your parenting philosophy. Keep in mind that vacations do exist as well as weekends. It is quite possible that Amy/Amber occasionally falls sick during these times. Lisa also has a trustworthy babysitter; one would assume that she knew how to care for a sick child.

Name: ronlover reviewed Life As You Know It on Jun 02, 2006 06:43 am

I love this story!!!!!!!! Please Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Will do!

Name: Jessica reviewed Life As You Know It on Mar 30, 2006 02:55 pm

I LOVE IT! i love Draco's personality. He is a great character in this. I normally don't see Draco as a full out charater, but this story is wonderful. Nice Job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree with you about Draco, but I am doing my best to keep him in line. ;)