Name: prim_a_prim reviewed
Waiting for Answers on Apr 29, 2007 12:26 am
please update the story.. i really enjoy t and can't wait to read the rest of it...keep up the good work !!
Name: Katie reviewed
Waiting for Answers on Apr 10, 2007 03:47 pm
I need the next chapter. Please hurry.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
3. Train Rides and Sorting Hats on Jan 30, 2007 01:19 pm
In canon, when they are sorted, it goes last name, then first. Malfoy, Arianna, not Arianna Malfoy. Good work so far though.
Author's Response: Sorry that I missed that. Excuse my blunder. Thanks.
Name: Harry22 reviewed
Waiting for Answers on Jan 30, 2007 12:47 pm
Damn, I love this story, and damn you for writing something this good. It is amazing, even though I've found quite a lot of mistakes in grammer. It is also a bit confusing if you ask me. Try to be a little on the clear side? Alright? I expect better next time. Good Girl.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story, I think... I will try my best to make it more clear, but I am not sure what you mean. I have many people reading this story both on here and who I live with and they are all following it. Do you think you could possibly explain a bit? I will update again soon, and I hope that one will be up to your specifications.
Name: Katie Phillips reviewed
Foreboding Questions on Dec 22, 2006 07:32 am
I loved it, you have to finish it and fast. If no one else reads it, i will. Please hurry, i'm dying.
Author's Response: I don't want any of my readers to die, especially ones that are as interested in the story as you are. I am currently working on the next chapter which I just recently had some inspiration for. I don't know when I will finish the whole story though, so please be patient with me and keep reading.
Name: prim_a_prim reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 25, 2006 08:17 pm
please don't give up on this story...
i'm wishing the best of luck for you...
hope you update this story asap.. i'm dying here...hahaha...seriously..
Author's Response: Don't die. I have hit a bit of a road block on deciding exactly where I want the story to go. One decision can totally change the entire plot, so I have to be careful. I'm glad that you are enjoying it and hopefully I will post again soon. Hang in there until I update. I don't want to lose a faithful reader. : )
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Foreboding Questions on Oct 08, 2006 05:43 pm
What happened? WHy do Draco and Harry still hate one another? what exactly happened with Ginny that Draco doesn't want to have anything to do with Harry?
Author's Response: In due time it all will be revealed. You find out bits and pieces here and then but you will know everything eventually. I promise.
Name: Serenitey reviewed
Foreboding Questions on Oct 08, 2006 12:23 pm
that was mean! so therefore great job! i enjoyed it muchly. accolades *salutes*
Author's Response: What was mean? *grins sheepishly* I am very glad that you like it.
Name: Theresa reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 05, 2006 04:12 am
I just started reading and am really interested to see where you take this story! I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are picking up on the story. I don't think I even know exactly where I am taking this story at this point, but we shall see.
Name: Mollie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 02, 2006 10:05 pm
Good chapter. I can't wait to see what becomes of this. I wish that she had ended up in Slytherin, but oh well. I love how protective that family is. I think that is awesome. Anyway, please update soon!
Author's Response: I know a lot of people who wish that she had ended up in Slytherin. Just wait to see what she does with her Gryffindor standing!
Name: prim_a_prim reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 01, 2006 07:40 pm
please please please please please
don't give up on this story..
please please please please please
Author's Response: Ok, enough begging. Just wait patiently for the next installment. I have some pressing papers and tests but after that everything should be fine.
Name: siamese213 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 01, 2006 12:54 pm
Please don't give up on this I thnink it is very good
Author's Response: I don't think I will give up on this story. It just may be awhile until I update because of a stupid thing called college. I'm glad that you like the story though. : )
Name: gaudium reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 30, 2006 01:12 pm
Hey now, don't give up on the story unless you don't have an ending planned out. That's always a tricky situation, writing 15 chapters and then going "Uh oh, I don't know what to do next." But if you've got a plan, it should be just fine.
It sorta seems to me that maybe you should break the action up a bit more - maybe a paragraph from each person's POV. I get a little confused when it goes back to the previous night and it doesn't really say.
But, my dear, I'm eager to see what Damon does to Evan...so you *can't* stop now ^_~
Author's Response: Yes ma'am. Thank you so much for the review. I am trying to figure out a way to get as many people's points of view in without making it confusing. I don't want to just randomly jump to a different person in the middle of a scene either. It will take some work, but I'm getting there. I think. : )
Name: Inbred reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 28, 2006 05:37 am
Really enjoyed this chapter. Things are heating up between, well, everyone. I really like how you have 2 stories going on, and also how you include everyone's point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks Inbred. Nice to know that you still read my stuff.
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 07:54 pm
DON'T YOU EVEN THINK OF GIVING UP THIS STORY!! I AM SO HOOKED IT IS UNBELIEVEABLE!!! DON'T STOP PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Ok. Ok. Now breath and relax. I am already thinking of other ways to continue this story, so please relax and give me a little time. Thanks for the review!
Name: katie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 05:05 pm
this is a great story! i love all the protective cousins and brothers. you really should continue, i'm hooked!
Author's Response: See what I said below. I don't know why reviews sometimes post twice.
Name: katie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 05:05 pm
this is a great story! i love all the protective cousins and brothers. you really should continue, i'm hooked!
Author's Response: I will do my best to continue with the story when I get time. I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much for the review.
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 01:16 pm
yay! Slytherins are destroying Gryffindors in all the classical canonical goodness! Death and destruction to follow.
Author's Response: You enjoy seeing the death and destruction too much I think. : )
Name: green_m_n_m reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 07:57 am
No! Don't give up on this story! It's going very well and your plot line is advancing nicely. Please continue and soon!
Author's Response: I will try to write again soon, but the first month of my semester is rather difficult. I will update as soon as possible though. Thanks so much for the review!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 26, 2006 07:26 pm
WHY GIVE IT UP? I think you should start to add more of the parents with the children. Why is it Harry and Draco hate one another and how was it that Harry and Draco felt it necessary to combine forces and defeat Lord Voldermont? How did Ginny fit in the equation? What does it have to do with the children? Why does it matter that Ginny was protected and that Draco is always there to make sure that Harry doesnt do anything to Ginny?
Don't give it up, just start to look to the parents to explain say on the holiday in whichthey celebrate the defeat of LV and as the parents celebrate a fight break ouut btw H&D and Ginny has to resolve and the children have to go to their parents and get the whole story told to them.
Author's Response: I will answer all the questions in time. Thanks for the review. I'm really glad that you like the story.
Name: Inbred reviewed
4. Rememberings and Letters on May 03, 2006 04:37 am
Yay! Really, really good job. I can't wait to read more. I always enjoy reading about when they all grow up and have kids, and this is definitly the best of those I've read (and I'm not biased at all :-)
Author's Response: Oh, Inbred, I am so happy to hear from you! Glad you like it. I hope you like what I plan on adding once the site is allowing that again. Of course I haven't quite written that yet, but oh well.
Name: Casey reviewed
4. Rememberings and Letters on Apr 27, 2006 12:36 pm
oooooh! i want to know what was in ginny's letter! i like how you show draco's love for arianna in this chapter.the flashback was a nice insight into d&g's relationship that i thought we wouldn't get because the story starts out w/ them already togeher. update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. I will reveal what is in Ginny's letter soon enough. The next chapter is in the works, but it still may be a little while before I post it. Thanks so much for the review!
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
4. Rememberings and Letters on Apr 23, 2006 03:14 pm
Great I love it!!! I liked how they got together!
Author's Response: I was hoping that someone would appreciate that. I was trying to think of a new way to bring them together without totally changing one of their characters. Glad you like it and thank you so much for the review!
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed
4. Rememberings and Letters on Apr 23, 2006 02:24 pm
personally I love it.
I like how it focuses on both the g/d relationship, and that of their daughter.
update soon!
Author's Response: I will try to update as soon as I possibly can, but finals are coming up really fast and there is this nasty little thing called an english paper that the plot bunnies keep distracting me from. So glad to hear you "love" it. Thanks so much for the review!