Name: prim_a_prim reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 25, 2006 08:17 pm
please don't give up on this story...
i'm wishing the best of luck for you...
hope you update this story asap.. i'm dying here...hahaha...seriously..
Author's Response: Don't die. I have hit a bit of a road block on deciding exactly where I want the story to go. One decision can totally change the entire plot, so I have to be careful. I'm glad that you are enjoying it and hopefully I will post again soon. Hang in there until I update. I don't want to lose a faithful reader. : )
Name: Theresa reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 05, 2006 04:12 am
I just started reading and am really interested to see where you take this story! I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are picking up on the story. I don't think I even know exactly where I am taking this story at this point, but we shall see.
Name: Mollie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 02, 2006 10:05 pm
Good chapter. I can't wait to see what becomes of this. I wish that she had ended up in Slytherin, but oh well. I love how protective that family is. I think that is awesome. Anyway, please update soon!
Author's Response: I know a lot of people who wish that she had ended up in Slytherin. Just wait to see what she does with her Gryffindor standing!
Name: prim_a_prim reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 01, 2006 07:40 pm
please please please please please
don't give up on this story..
please please please please please
Author's Response: Ok, enough begging. Just wait patiently for the next installment. I have some pressing papers and tests but after that everything should be fine.
Name: siamese213 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Sep 01, 2006 12:54 pm
Please don't give up on this I thnink it is very good
Author's Response: I don't think I will give up on this story. It just may be awhile until I update because of a stupid thing called college. I'm glad that you like the story though. : )
Name: gaudium reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 30, 2006 01:12 pm
Hey now, don't give up on the story unless you don't have an ending planned out. That's always a tricky situation, writing 15 chapters and then going "Uh oh, I don't know what to do next." But if you've got a plan, it should be just fine.
It sorta seems to me that maybe you should break the action up a bit more - maybe a paragraph from each person's POV. I get a little confused when it goes back to the previous night and it doesn't really say.
But, my dear, I'm eager to see what Damon does to Evan...so you *can't* stop now ^_~
Author's Response: Yes ma'am. Thank you so much for the review. I am trying to figure out a way to get as many people's points of view in without making it confusing. I don't want to just randomly jump to a different person in the middle of a scene either. It will take some work, but I'm getting there. I think. : )
Name: Inbred reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 28, 2006 05:37 am
Really enjoyed this chapter. Things are heating up between, well, everyone. I really like how you have 2 stories going on, and also how you include everyone's point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks Inbred. Nice to know that you still read my stuff.
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 07:54 pm
DON'T YOU EVEN THINK OF GIVING UP THIS STORY!! I AM SO HOOKED IT IS UNBELIEVEABLE!!! DON'T STOP PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Ok. Ok. Now breath and relax. I am already thinking of other ways to continue this story, so please relax and give me a little time. Thanks for the review!
Name: katie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 05:05 pm
this is a great story! i love all the protective cousins and brothers. you really should continue, i'm hooked!
Author's Response: See what I said below. I don't know why reviews sometimes post twice.
Name: katie reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 05:05 pm
this is a great story! i love all the protective cousins and brothers. you really should continue, i'm hooked!
Author's Response: I will do my best to continue with the story when I get time. I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much for the review.
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 01:16 pm
yay! Slytherins are destroying Gryffindors in all the classical canonical goodness! Death and destruction to follow.
Author's Response: You enjoy seeing the death and destruction too much I think. : )
Name: green_m_n_m reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 27, 2006 07:57 am
No! Don't give up on this story! It's going very well and your plot line is advancing nicely. Please continue and soon!
Author's Response: I will try to write again soon, but the first month of my semester is rather difficult. I will update as soon as possible though. Thanks so much for the review!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Aug 26, 2006 07:26 pm
WHY GIVE IT UP? I think you should start to add more of the parents with the children. Why is it Harry and Draco hate one another and how was it that Harry and Draco felt it necessary to combine forces and defeat Lord Voldermont? How did Ginny fit in the equation? What does it have to do with the children? Why does it matter that Ginny was protected and that Draco is always there to make sure that Harry doesnt do anything to Ginny?
Don't give it up, just start to look to the parents to explain say on the holiday in whichthey celebrate the defeat of LV and as the parents celebrate a fight break ouut btw H&D and Ginny has to resolve and the children have to go to their parents and get the whole story told to them.
Author's Response: I will answer all the questions in time. Thanks for the review. I'm really glad that you like the story.