Reviews For Mummy's Story
Name: ronlover reviewed I've Seen Those Eyes on Jun 03, 2006 05:03 pm
I like it! Though, personally I think Snape is still good. lol. Update soon!

Author's Response: -stays silent- ^^
Name: Kisou reviewed I've Seen Those Eyes on Jun 03, 2006 12:31 pm
"a hint of friendliness that I can’t help but admire." How old is Rose again?

I liked the wall though.

Author's Response: I guess I'm not perfect. I thought I had gotten a hang of this 'young girl' thing, but I guess I still stick things in that don't quite fit. That should be taken out, but I don't like editing stories after they've been posted (unless it's spelling). Thanks for pointing that out -- you're totally right, it's definately not good. I'll keep an eye out for that -- or things like that -- in the future. Thanks!!
Name: Aunt Annie reviewed Never Forget on May 31, 2006 08:46 am
Hi, I really wish you would update, this is really a good story, please update soon

Author's Response: I realised that I'd responded to every review but this one... it's a chapter or so late, but I'm responding! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm posting more asap!
Name: Mj reviewed Never Forget on Apr 28, 2006 01:57 am
He will come back, won't he? Even if he doesn't it's still a great story. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: ^^ I will!
Name: Kisou reviewed Never Forget on Apr 26, 2006 09:20 pm
I was reading the other reviews, and even though I kind of said this already, I just wanted you to know you're not that far off. I have a younger brother who's seven right now and he reads astronomy books (The kind you'd get at a planitarium for adults who don't know anything much about the subject.) for fun as bed time reading. He actually reads better than my sister who's two years older than him. Some kids really are just intelligent.

Author's Response: Wow, that's impressive. Good for him! So look at Cissa that way.
Name: Kisou reviewed Never Forget on Apr 26, 2006 09:17 pm
I think this is good. Interesting, certainly. I keep stopping and trying to figure out if it's believable that she's seven. And most of the time, I'm not sure. She seems a little more intelligent then some seven year olds but not all of them. Some kids are naturally brilliant, and she certainly has good genes for such. Keep checking yourself, because it's so easy to slip in to your normal voice, but you seem to be doing a wonderful job of it currently.

I liked Luna. She's highly amusing. And she's my favorite character in the books. (Draco second and Ginny third, of course.)


Author's Response: Those are my favourite three characters. Along with Sirius Black and the other Marauders. ^^ Thanks, I will check -- I've read all my chapters a million times. xP
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Never Forget on Apr 25, 2006 02:45 pm
Ministry of Magic? Was she meeting Draco in Knockturn Alley? And did he perhaps go to the ministry to clear his name or something?
I'm so bound by your story!
Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's awesome! ^^ I can't answer those questions without giving away plot, except that I answered in a Response earlier on why Ginny's going to the Ministry... it's nothing big, just to visit family. And Knockturn Alley? We'll hear more about this later. x.o
Name: Meg reviewed Never Forget on Apr 25, 2006 02:56 am
Little Cissa is quite the child prodigy, isn't she? Not only is she Slytherin sneaky, she also reads and deduces things like a MUCH older child. 7 years old? Come on.

Still, a sweet story that I am enjoying. Carry on.

Author's Response: Yeah... considering I'm pretty much double Cissa's age, I'm working reeaaaallllyyyy hard to think like a seven year old. I've written later chapters and I think she sounds a little younger. But... to make me sound more like that all-amazing-knowing author (x.o), yes. She's a little genius. xP Thank you for the review!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Never Forget on Apr 24, 2006 04:51 pm
I love your little Cissa. I ADORE your Luna. I think my favourite line was,

"I need him to come back. I need him to make Mummy happy."

Yes, he does need to come back to make Ginny happy! I' be happy too! ;)

Author's Response: Ginny does deserve to be happy!! I'm glad you love the characters. Good characters can make even a terrible plot a good story. I love Cissa, too!! xP Thanks for the review!
Name: shadieladie reviewed Never Forget on Apr 24, 2006 04:47 pm
what? why would she go to the Ministry of Magic?

Author's Response: To see her family. Ron, Harry, and her father all work there, and she was previously informed that her family who don't work there are going to visit. So it's pretty much a Weasley reunion. ^^
Name: flame_kitty reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 10, 2006 05:24 pm
Oh no! Draco asked Ginny to meet him didn't she? What's going to happen! And how is Narcissa Rose going to take the news that her father is an ex-death eater?
Oh dear! Update soon!

Author's Response: Since Cissa was born after Voldemort was killed, the whole Death Eater thing doesn't really mean that much to her. She doesn't really understand how dangerous Death Eaters were, how dangerous Voldemort was -- so how she's going to take it is a lot lighter than you think! And you'll see what was in the letter. x.o
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 10, 2006 05:17 pm
Aw! SO sweet! I can't wait to see what your next chapter brings!

Author's Response: Hopefully you'll see soon. x.o Chapter three is in Queue.
Name: Mollie reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 09, 2006 07:24 am
Oh, this is a really good email. And it is interesting to see a story told from the perspective of a child. Anyway, please update soon.

Author's Response: A really good email? xD Lol, you mean story, right? It's okay, we all make typos. xP I'm having fun writing from Narcissa Rose's perspective, so it's nice to hear it's good like that! I thought of writing it third person, but now I can't think of writing the story any other way!
Name: Nectaris reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 08, 2006 11:27 am
Ack! I want to know! I really like this. I wasn't sure about the context but it's really good told like this. Please keep writing.


Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's good! More is coming soon!
Name: anonymous i reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 08, 2006 11:16 am
i love this... and i so want to know what's in that letter... please have draco come back! :)

also... how old is narcissa rose?

Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter! x.o Narcissa Rose is seven years old, though I know at times she acts older... she's very smart and very mature.

Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter! x.o Narcissa Rose is seven years old, though I know at times she acts older... she's very smart and very mature.
Name: Biteys reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 07, 2006 09:06 am
I am loving the story. I can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! Chapter Three is in Queue!
Name: sapphirehoney_929 reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 06, 2006 09:40 pm
oooohhh, i can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Chapter Three is in Queue!!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 06, 2006 09:25 pm
OOOH. I'm intrigued... What does theletter say? Does Draco know about little narcissa? YAY for updates! ;)

Author's Response: -zips mouth- You'll see!!
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed To Know Your Name on Apr 06, 2006 08:40 pm
What a snoop for a kid... Hehe, she's a definite mix of Draco and Ginny. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, she can be very Draco-y. I'm glad you think she's a good combination of the two!
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 06, 2006 11:04 am
Please continue this story! It was so sweet and sad! I loved it!

Author's Response: It's always nice to read that someone loved your work. ^^ I am continuing it, chapter two should be up soon.
Name: shadieladie reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 06, 2006 06:43 am
aw that's sweet

Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks for the review! :3
Name: Aunt Annie reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 06, 2006 01:44 am
I was glad to see this wasn't a one shot. I'm glad there will be more, its sad, and sweet, please continue it. It really has good potential.

Author's Response: Originally, I wrote it as a one-shot, but then I decided that I liked the idea of continuing it more, and since I have nothing else to write, I've written more! Chapter two should be up soon.
Name: sapphirehoney_929 reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 05, 2006 11:04 pm
so beautiful yet so sad! i wish draco could come back!!! thanks so mucuh for sharing this, it's great!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! More to come soon. :3
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Do You Still Love Him? on Apr 05, 2006 08:17 pm
SO SO sad... why can't he ever come back for her? This was brilliant! Thanks for sharing! ;)

Author's Response: He can't come back, because he's still a wanted Death Eater. More on this in later chapters. ^^ Thanks for reviewing, more to come soon!!
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