This was somewhat of an improvement on the last chapter, but it still has the shadow of the discusting things that happened on it. I did like the present from Narcissa and Ginny's reaction to it. But, to elaborate on what I said before, I would have prefered that we kept Ginny in character in relation to Draco. I mean, she would like the presents, yes, but I kind of expected either a little more embaressment about them, or a scolding for thinking too much about money. The whole "this is too much" thing fit but it would have been said by anyone. Ginny is someone special and she deserves to react as such.

Author's Response: Gah, there's no pleasing you! ;) Just kidding. I know, I really do need to keep Ginny more in character. I just always want to make her react the way I would, but that's bad, you're right. Keep on me about it; something might just sink in.