Name: lizzyop reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 02:37 am
Oooh, poor Draco, my heart is bleeding for him, that someone robbed him of his "package of red silk and freckles" :(
AAnd, why would this fic crash? I am quite sure that I'm not the only one arund who adores it :))
Good luck, keep on, still fab, Liz
Name: moerae reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 05:49 pm
I remember this fic from the first time around, except I didn't remember it's name, and felt this long lost connection with the fic!:) Great job so far; except I don't know how you are going to give it a happy ending. Here's a thought: she was articificially inseminated as a back up for Potter, so maybe if he failed they would have another hope, and who better to do it than the Weasley girl? I am giving Harry a bit of credit here. See this way everyone's problem is solved! I'm sure you are going to throw us through the grand canyon, what with cliffies and trenches along the way...I must confess i'm looking forward to it!
Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 05:07 pm
i like it. i like it. i like it. all i want to know is who's is it? is it really that hard of a question? thanks for updating!
Name: Marcia reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:20 pm
FW,
I just do not understand why you're hesitant about this story! It isn't remotely close to crashing and burning. Where's your insecurity about it coming from? I love it!
This chapter is very well written and the phrases, images are a joy to read. I love your use of the language. As for the plot, dying to see you pull it out of the hat much as Harry did Godric's sword in the chamber. Write faster! [and update The Slytherin's Witch too...still tired of it?]
xxxooo!!!
Marcia
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:10 pm
No crashing and burning here my dear fallenwitch! I love your works and this included. The whle notion of Ginny being in a place where she believes her and Draco are together and being very much in love with him while Draco knows that time has passed and feels hurt is very interesting. I'm dying to know who the father is as I still cling to the hope that it is Draco (I don't know how - thats your job!). :) I liked the snippets of jealousDraco thinking that the child might be Harry's.
Name: Calise reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:07 pm
Is it maybe possible that those close to Ginny feared for her and did something to her that made the baby she was carrying grow at a later date. I read it once in a "bad" fic and wondered if fully explored and done correctly it it would turn out good. Either way I adore your fic.
-Calise
Author's Response: Hmmm...that's a new idea, but not one that we will be using here. Isn't it amazing what we can twist and turna situation into when we "need" to? Thanks for much for your review, Calise, and I'm glad you are liking this one! -fallenwitch
Name: daisymama reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 03:58 pm
Yay! I can't tell you how happy I am that you are updating this story! NO WAY is this story crashing and burning. You know how much I enjoy your writing, and I think this is such an original and interesting storyline. I cannot wait to see where this story is going. Just one question.....does anyone in the Order know where this "safe haven" is?
Author's Response: Great question! Nope, no one but Draco knows about it. Well, Ginny and Draco now! -fallenwitch
Name: Embellished reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 03:57 pm
"Do I look like I need saving?" Yes, Draco, yes, you do. But denying it won't help one little bit.
Yet another maddening chapter from fallenwitch. Do you write with the sole purpose of torturing me? If not, you do a very good job of it. And what's worse is I know things are bound to get worse before they get better. If they ever manage to get better. Anyway, thanks for the update, even if it *is* maddening!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 03:34 pm
Poor, Poor Draco. naughty Baby! Let them get some snogging in! And her baby must be UBER-strong. I don't think My hubby can feel mine kick that hard and we snuggle ALL the time! ;)
Author's Response: Nah, not uber-strong, just uber-fictionalized for my purposes. Hope you will forgive that, but I couldn't help myself! Thanks for your review, Jess! -fallenwitch
Name: lemondrops reviewed
Breaking His Goddamn Heart on Apr 23, 2006 03:01 pm
as i reread your response to the past reviews, it facinate me greatly; what DID happen to Ginny and her screwed up memory (was she living under a rock or something??) meanwhile it still give me shivers to think about what might have happened... o.O
Name: lemondrops reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 02:57 pm
Wow, I don't know if i should say i love it or just plain hate it. I came to enjoying it at chapter 3 and then the rest of the chapters (4-5) just threw me off...
p.s. overall, i really enjoy the fanfics you write, please update on 'along came a wizard'
Author's Response: After reading your review, I posted a revised author's notes at the top of the chapter to clarify my story line. I hope that helps if confusion is the issue. If you just hate this story, that's okay too! I'm a bit ambivalent myself.
I'm still working on the next part of Along Came A Wizard. Don't know when I can get another chapter out. Cheers! -fallenwitch
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 02:36 pm
AGh! More angst! Good job Draco, nice wall-hole. I especially liked the "The Slytherin dove for his pregnant package of red silk and freckles, wrapped his arms around her considerable waist, and wrestled her gently to the ground," part.
Author's Response: Thanks, that one was rewritten two seconds before I hit the "add story" button! - fallenwitch
Name: Marcia reviewed
Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 02:33 pm
Leapt out of my seat with joy!! Printing and running off to read...xo!
Name: Nectaris reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 19, 2006 05:27 pm
*blank, horrified expression with jaw dropped* But he just...But she...There's no...WTF, mate but I'm confused. Can't wait to see the explanation for THIS. :)
Name: Nectaris reviewed
His Newly Realized Hell on Apr 19, 2006 05:20 pm
I don't care about warnings, it has to be said.
DAMN IT!!!! I'm not even to the third chapter and he's already been ripped to shreds twice!
Author's Response: Touché, Nectaris! I laughed so hard that I fell out of my chair and had to stop writing the next chapter of Along Came A Wizard to respond to this glorious review. In my own defense, as a psychiatrist, emotional gore doesn't bother me in the least. Nope, not a problem. However, physical gore - punching and kicking and bone breaking and knife wounds make me soooo sick to my queasy little stomach! There's a reason I never became a surgeon! Loved this review so much. Thanks for making my day. -fallenwitch
Name: gotsnape reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 18, 2006 02:51 pm
I like the rewrite of this story very much. There is more clarity. It doesn't jump around with the plot, but still remains just as jumpy and anxious as Draco feels. It comes across very clearly. Events happen very quickly in this story. It leaves me feeling just as breathless and confused as the main characters. I am dying to find out what has truely happened. I have a suspicion that Draco is the one who has been in a suspended life, not Ginny.
So, do I win the big cookie?
Love ya!
Author's Response: Yep, you get the big cookie with ice cream, chocolate sauce, whip cream, and a cherry on top. Thanks for everything, gotsnape! Without you, this fic would have been dead in the water. I hope this effort at resuscitatio wasn't for naught! -fallenwitch
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 04:54 pm
Of course we're still here lol. I like the twists. Tres interesante.
Author's Response: Good, I wasn't sure if you would find it intriguing or just plain irritating! -fallenwitch
Name: WG reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 10:42 am
Himmm... interesting... fab stuff.
But as much as i like this; i absolutely adore 'Along came a wizard' - pleasee, o pretty pleaseee do update that story!
Author's Response: Oh, I know. I know. I know! Along Came A Wizard is still a priority, but I'm wrestling with the tenor for the next part. Don't want to start posting until I've got it right. It ain't quite right yet - sorry!!!! -fallenwitch
Name: shadieladie reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 10:14 am
BUT BUT I don't understand!!! was some taking polypotion of him? was she raped???
Author's Response: Well, we don't know. Keep in mind that her memory stopped while they were still in a relationship so that's all she remembers. She doesn't remember the start of the War or anything that came afterward. -fallenwitch
Name: chuya reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 08:57 am
I spotted the phenomenon again ^^. I've been reading Along Came Wizard too, and I'm amazed that I didn't spot it over there!
On a more serious note, the amnesia is back! But I think it's better this time, and less painful for Draco. Ginny is just as confused as he is and they'll be working towards answers together.
Author's Response: Isn't it a crack up how no one sees it, and it's right out there in the open? Yes, the amnesia is back. Thanks for your interest! -fallenwitch
Name: Jenna reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 08:16 am
CLIFFIE!!!
ahhhhhh..so who is the father?? and why can't Ginny remember anything!!!!!
ahhhh!!!!!
wonderful story, please post soon!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for your review! -fallenwitch
Name: lizzyop reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 08:08 am
OOOh, evil, evil, evil! How could you do that? :) I mean no I have no chanbce whatsoever to get to know who's the father of that baby until she remembers everything!!! Wow, you are good!
Hehe, I am so evil...still laughing like mad and it's not even funny! :) hehe, I enjoy this far too much!
Well, it was great, fab chapter:)
Love, Liz
Author's Response: Well, we are now venturing out a bit further than we did last time, but alas, no answer on that baby yet! So glad you are enjoying it this time around as well! -fallenwitch
Name: passion reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 06:22 am
eeek! a terrible cliffhanger!!who is the father???!! what happened?? so many questions!!! update soon please!! love your fic by the way...loved the way you wrote it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, passion. Well, I think it might take us awhile to figure out who the father is. I hope nobody kills me! -fallenwitch
Name: Marcia reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 17, 2006 06:15 am
"Still here?" Of course we're still here! It's a great read. Keep going, please. [time turner, maybe...polyjuice, too creepy to consider...]
xo,
Marcia
Author's Response: Hi Marcia-
Still going. I hope this one holds up okay. -fallenwitch
Name: starry_laa reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 09:39 pm
*Eyes wide open in shock*
Well, her revelation has left me near-speechless. Definitely poses a few questions- and I thought the answer was going to be an easier one! So she's either delirious (as well as suffering from amnesia) or someone has been posing as Draco, which would be creepy!!
Ah, you always leave us in suspense!
You don't have to do Ginny's POV- you're doing a great job as it is!