Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Genesis on Jul 17, 2008 11:58 pm
Wow, I'm impressed. This is really well written.
Name: ogygiasylph reviewed
Genesis on Aug 07, 2006 03:13 pm
What a beautiful style. Your sentences flow, rich and pregnant with meaning, without being too dense or long. The picture is masterfully painted, the tossing of the paper with the Horcrux location intense. I'm off to read more, but I just thought I would take a few seconds to praise a chapter so worthy of it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and of course, the kind words. I personally think it's a bit ironic that my English teacher/professor used to threatened to flunk me because I had trouble with sentence structuring and the like. Maybe I finally figured out what she was trying to knock into my thick head! :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Genesis on Aug 05, 2006 05:18 pm
~WOW. You have a great writting style.~
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Genesis on Jul 01, 2006 10:37 pm
Ah, don't we all know that feeling of betrayal. Very well written. I only found minimal grammatical errors (teensy tiny ones that are inconsequential, really), which is a rare treat! I hate it when my stories have them and it seems as though I can never eradicate them. I'm off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'll use spell check, betas, you name it and it's fine. Yet the minute I send it in for approval by the Cabal, I find at least one error of some sort. I give up! :)
Name: Kaitie reviewed
Genesis on Jun 23, 2006 08:33 pm
I like it! I think it's a good start with many options.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Genesis on Apr 25, 2006 05:54 am
I am hooked on this great story. Is it possible that there is going to be a love triangle here starring Harry and Draco and GInny? Was Draco there on the bed? LOVE IT
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it. I wasn't planning on a Harry-Draco-Ginny, but you never know!
Name: chuya reviewed
Genesis on Apr 23, 2006 05:55 am
Argh, cliffie! I love this story :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sorry about the cliff hanger, I really didn't mean to do that.
Name: girl reviewed
Genesis on Apr 19, 2006 03:47 am
hi is this a one shoot? if there are more when are u going to update ?
please soon
Author's Response: If everything goes according to my plan (which it never does), I should have the next chapter up on Friday. Or Saturday at the latest.
Name: Mary reviewed
Genesis on Apr 18, 2006 10:33 am
oh, wow!!!
wonderful beginning :)
hope you keep on writing...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Considering that this was my first story I've written, I was just a bit nervous on what people would think of it.
Name: meeaz reviewed
Genesis on Apr 18, 2006 08:41 am
interesting start. please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks! Give me another day or two and the next chapter will be up.
Name: WG reviewed
Genesis on Apr 18, 2006 04:30 am
Great start... and man do u know how to welt ones appetite... can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I can get the next chapter sometime before the weekend...but I'd advise you not to hold your breath while waiting.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I can get the next chapter sometime before the weekend...but I'd advise you not to hold your breath while waiting.