Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Shock on Apr 10, 2009 02:10 pm
ooo please write the next one soon! i really like this story
Name: Night_Merr reviewed
Shock on Aug 07, 2007 08:45 am
Wow, I love it!
Name: DragonFlame13 reviewed
The News on Jul 27, 2007 08:30 am
It's a good start but I have one nit-pick. I don't believe that they wouldn't have pulled Ron out before hand and let him know.
Other than that is a unique storyline. And Ikinda like it.
Name: holly black reviewed
Shock on Jul 06, 2007 06:19 pm
i have a feeling that ginny isnt going to be the only that commited suicide but thats just me
Name: zenophile reviewed
Shock on Feb 12, 2007 01:06 pm
this fic is great! i knew she wasnt/isnt dead! draco is fine the way you have portrayed him. kool! hurry and post soon ive only just caught onto this fic!
Name: Blanchefleur reviewed
Shock on Apr 28, 2006 12:56 pm
I like the story, it's interesting. Hope you keep on writing, i'll like to see how it ends. So far it's good.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 05:35 pm
This chapter was really good. I think you filled Draco the perfect amount of indifference/feeling. His mood swings seem to be very appropriate. Just really well done! AND I KNEW Ginny wasn't dead -- I knew after the headmaster said someone had 'tried' to commit suicide but now I'm sure of it with her in the hosiptal wind instead of a morgue! Can't wait for more! ;)
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 03:20 pm
Draco's fine. If he didn't know ginny except in passing then I would have said he was definitley OOC; though its obvious that there was a little sumthin sumthin.
I could wait for an update.. if I had to ;)
anyways, sent you an email about the beta thingy. let me know if you got it or not.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 02:53 pm
There was a minor grammatically error in your last sentence of some kind. But I like this story. It's lovely really. I agree with your betas, he's not too indifferent. Firstly, he's in shock. And secondly, he's used to masking his feelings, so he's using that tactic. He doesn't want to show himself how painful this is for him because he doesn't think he'll survive reality right now. All he can do it live in a mindless dream world until the real world is not so painful that it could kill him. Or, at least, that's how I see it here.
Name: Meg reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 02:27 pm
Well, I hope she's dead. If not, I'm very disappointed in the way you've handled this. No one says that a body has been found unless the person is DEAD. So if she's still alive on the other side of that curtain, than shame on you because its a cheap and unfair way to manipulate your audience, and I will stop reading. However, if she's dead, then I am curious to know all the details surrounding her death. Will await the next chapter. Thanks.
Name: shadieladie reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 01:33 pm
No. I agree with your bata, however what will he do about her death; is the real question
Name: Mione23 reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 09:53 am
This is really good! i liked it and i thought it was really good..I don't think you made Draco too indifferent he's fine, IMHO. I have a question though, if Ginny died then why would the school keep the body in the hospital wing if she was dead? why not send the body to the Weasleys? UPDATE SOON!!
Name: marquesa reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 07:38 am
Indifferent? no, not at all, but some other things bothered me about this chapter, you didn't get a sense at all of any grief coming off Bill and even snape wouldn't smirk at someone who had just lost their sister.. maybe you're concentrating so hard on the main characters that you are letting the more minor ones slip, draco was spot on though, I thought, but in the first chapter Dumbledore would never have announced Ginny's death in the great hall without taking Ron aside first and telling him privately, that would never happen, its almost too cruel, having said that I am eagerly awaiting the next instalment..Good luck with it
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 07:16 am
Wow. I don't think she's dead. I think he thinks she is, because he wasn't listening before, but I don't think she's dead. NO! She can't be! (oh, and your Draco was fine. Totally *normal* reactions for a healthy if a little neurotic individual.) Good work! I'm very sad to hear there won't be another chapter out soon.
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 07:00 am
I don't think Draco's indifferent at all. You clearly explain his thoughts and feelings throughout; just because he's trying to keep his composure doesn't mean he isn't felling anything. I think you're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm wondering, about how many chapters do you think this will have?
Name: kara reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 04:23 am
ohh i like it!. its def a original plot. keep going with it
Name: kara reviewed
Shock on Apr 27, 2006 04:23 am
ohh i like it!. its def a original plot. keep going with it
Name: Kisou reviewed
The News on Apr 25, 2006 12:01 pm
This is a pretty original plot. I hope you do it justice. It's really hard to tell from a first short chapter, but that was certainly a good start.
Name: Mione23 reviewed
The News on Apr 25, 2006 11:27 am
WOW!! it was good! please update soon!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
The News on Apr 24, 2006 06:23 am
Wow, a tremendous start! But you haven't stated that she is alive or dead, just that she tried to commit suicide and that her body was found, not that she had succeeded in killing herself, so I'm guessing that Draco ran out of the room before Dumbledore could let them know that Ginny was in the hospital wing, right? Please don't let Ginny have succeeded!
Name: Nectaris reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 02:44 pm
This is marvelous! I especially liked it that Potter isn't involved. I don't have anything against Harry, but it's always HIM and no one else ever gets to do anything... Did you mean to make it a round robin?
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 02:17 pm
love it.
you have a great writing style.
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 01:53 pm
Oh my goodness, that was intense. I think you're doing an impeccable job of unfolding the plot and the pace is absolutely perfect. I know this because I am filled with an overwhelming sense of anxiety and dread- which is fine! I'll be desperately awaiting the next installment.
Name: Akire3 reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 01:45 pm
OHHH, thats so sad, and what is the key all about. Can't wait till the next chapter!! and good job :) :) :)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 11:42 am
Is she actually dead? It seems a little like they moved her body to the hospital wing and that she's just injured... Dumbledore did say that she 'tried' to commit suicide -- not that she actually did... Anyway... this was a really good beginning... I'm trying to wrap my head around a sobbing Draco -- but it works for me! Can't wait for more!