Name: DragonFlame13 reviewed
The News on Jul 27, 2007 08:30 am
It's a good start but I have one nit-pick. I don't believe that they wouldn't have pulled Ron out before hand and let him know.
Other than that is a unique storyline. And Ikinda like it.
Name: Kisou reviewed
The News on Apr 25, 2006 12:01 pm
This is a pretty original plot. I hope you do it justice. It's really hard to tell from a first short chapter, but that was certainly a good start.
Name: Mione23 reviewed
The News on Apr 25, 2006 11:27 am
WOW!! it was good! please update soon!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
The News on Apr 24, 2006 06:23 am
Wow, a tremendous start! But you haven't stated that she is alive or dead, just that she tried to commit suicide and that her body was found, not that she had succeeded in killing herself, so I'm guessing that Draco ran out of the room before Dumbledore could let them know that Ginny was in the hospital wing, right? Please don't let Ginny have succeeded!
Name: Nectaris reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 02:44 pm
This is marvelous! I especially liked it that Potter isn't involved. I don't have anything against Harry, but it's always HIM and no one else ever gets to do anything... Did you mean to make it a round robin?
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 02:17 pm
love it.
you have a great writing style.
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 01:53 pm
Oh my goodness, that was intense. I think you're doing an impeccable job of unfolding the plot and the pace is absolutely perfect. I know this because I am filled with an overwhelming sense of anxiety and dread- which is fine! I'll be desperately awaiting the next installment.
Name: Akire3 reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 01:45 pm
OHHH, thats so sad, and what is the key all about. Can't wait till the next chapter!! and good job :) :) :)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 11:42 am
Is she actually dead? It seems a little like they moved her body to the hospital wing and that she's just injured... Dumbledore did say that she 'tried' to commit suicide -- not that she actually did... Anyway... this was a really good beginning... I'm trying to wrap my head around a sobbing Draco -- but it works for me! Can't wait for more!
Name: shadieladie reviewed
The News on Apr 23, 2006 11:21 am
wow that's CRAZY! wow my mind is in over load what happened... where's the back story!!! hurrry up I want to know NOW!!!!!