Name: beckysue2 reviewed
Mile High on Jun 02, 2006 12:44 pm
Hahahaha! That was great!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Mile High on Jun 02, 2006 12:25 pm
This seems a little bit Mary Sueish. Sorry if it's eally not, but I have a warning light that goes off at every mention of perfect looks. I'd stay away from them. You don't need gorgeous people to have gorgeous sex necessarily.
"I was born 23 years ago… ok 25 years, but who’s counting? I’ve been blessed with flawless looks, bright brown eyes that seemed to be the color of milky chocolate at times, and masses of wavy red hair, one of the many things I’m grateful for, being a Weasley."
And, you said "and" at the wrong time there. It should be after the "grateful for" not after "times".
Author's Response: It's not intended to be a Mary Sue, but I agree, you don't need gorgeous people to have gorgeous sex, but I felt that my readers needed an insight on how she looked.
I'll have to disagree with the 'and' bit. Read it aloud the way you said it should be... it doesn't sound right.
Thanks for reviewing!
Name: bigreader reviewed
Mile High on Jun 02, 2006 07:07 am
Man that was an AWESOME STORY! I loved it, the ending was absolutley PERFECT. Even without Ginny's reply the ending was perfect because it lets readers imagine what they want Ginny to say. Absolutley wonderful story, instant favorite! xD
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you very much!
Name: bigreader reviewed
Mile High on Jun 02, 2006 07:05 am
Man that was GREAT. The ending was absolutley PERFECT. It made me laugh out loud! The ending is perfect even with out her answer because people can imagine what they want Ginny to say. Absolutley wonderful story, instant favorite! xD
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you very much!
Name: cassie reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 09:26 pm
that was hot but...what a bastard! hahaha
Author's Response: A very hot bastard
Name: cassie reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 09:19 pm
that was hot but...what a bastard! hahaha
Author's Response: A very hot bastard
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 08:42 pm
That would be when Ginny smirks and responds with, "What? You didn't know you just screwed a Weasley?" Or perhaps she should mention that as she gets off the plane and walks away...
Anyways, Great story! I loved it! :)
Author's Response: I was about to make a continuation or something, but then I though best I'd leave it to your imagination ;-)
Name: Lareen reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 07:40 pm
Ouch! Now that must have really hurt!
Author's Response: But atleast she had a great time right before...
Name: dramaqueen872005 reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 07:15 pm
OMG that is hilarious! Poor Ginny, and Draco's a bit of an ass! lol.
Author's Response: He is an ass, isn't he?
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
Mile High on Jun 01, 2006 05:36 pm
ooo Draco you bastard! I would've slapped him for that lol! any ways, this was a delightful piece of work. Good job!
Author's Response: lol, I would've killed any guy who would say that to me after what had happened.