Name: nacilme reviewed Epilogue on Jan 25, 2019 06:15 am

oh man... I love this fic so much! I lost count of the many I've re-read it so far. but I guess I'll never get over Harry Arthur. Harry. Arthur. that's just... idk... just... not. lol

Name: The King in White reviewed Epilogue on Apr 07, 2017 10:57 pm

Great fic

Name: Paranoid_Schemer reviewed Epilogue on Aug 25, 2011 01:50 pm

So I know its been a while since this story was finished but I thought I should leave a review none the less.

Thankyou so much for taking your time to write this!!! It was a great read, I actually began reading this story about 2 yrs back but I was wasn't able to finish it then bcuz life gets in the way. Imagine my surprise and excitement when I was able to find it again after graduating from college, and now having had the time to read it without interruptions. I just loved the whole storyline you developed and was thrilled by the greek/egyptian mythological references (being a fan of mythology myself). You tied everything in so nicely and made the story unique and truly yours, considering that the elements used were not your own. I also enjoyed the way you wrote Draco and Ginny's characters, had his character been more developed in canon that's how I would have imagined he have turned out. I really appreciate when authors take the characters and develop them into their own ideas but keep them as close to canon as possible, you did that superbly :) Over all i have nothing but praise for this story and am extremely grateful for fics like this, that keep the reader's interest in fanfiction alive. I've been reading fanfiction for a long time now and am extremely grateful for pieces of gems, just like this one, that are still out there :) Take care and once again thank you for writing this! =D

Name: thistattooedbody reviewed Epilogue on Feb 13, 2011 12:20 pm

Let me begin by saying I did like the story overall.

However, it was littered with grammatical errors and inconsistencies and at times seemed unbelievable. She fell for him awfully fast, didn't she? Considering how little time they seemed to spend together.

At times, the story was tedious and somewhat repetitive. There were about four chapters I had to force myself to read, unable to absorb myself into the story.

Also, you used some words that seemed like you looked them up just for the story. Someone once told me, don't use words you're unfamiliar with when writing, because the readers can tell. If those words were already in your vocabulary, then my humblest apologies.

In regards to the pregnancy with the twins. It was somewhat unbelievable with some of the things she was doing, being as big as she would have been and off balance that pregnancy brings.

Anyway, I'm sorry if you take this review badly, it was not intended that way. Hopefully everything will be fixed with the rewrite you spoke about. Good luck on future stories!

P.S. Perhaps you should look into another beta whose strong point is grammar :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it overall. My story was betaed by two people, so if you have any grammatical suggestions, please feel free to make them. Implying that I may not have known the meaning of the words I use is hardly justified or polite. Occasionally I do use words whose original meaning has evolved in recent years or that are rarely used in the contexts in which I use them, but I assure you that I usually check before leaving such words in the story. Lastly, please note that this is a 400+ pages story, written over the course of several years; inconsistencies are bound to have arisen, and I do apologize for them. I simply do not have the time to go back and correct them all.

Name: sweetness150 reviewed Epilogue on Jun 24, 2010 03:26 am

ahh I just re read this from the beginning and it was so amazing. I just love the end, the hapiness they ended up with and ofcourse the way you brought in the way the wizarding world was changing. Now gin can have harry as part of her life.

Epic story, just amazing!

Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Epilogue on Jan 09, 2010 09:26 am

I am delighted and yet sad that I have only just been able to find this story. I must admit that as the last chapters were posted I overlooked them for some unknown reason. Alas, it was my loss.

You've written a beautiful story here, I love the characters, their relationships with each other and the inventiveness of your own characters too. I don't know what else I can say to convey my love for this story except for the fact you've made me proud to be a D/G fan as IMO we write the best of stories.

Well done, and good luck for anything else you come to write
xx

Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Epilogue on Nov 27, 2009 10:29 am

this was a great story! i'm so glad you finally finished it! great job!

Name: citrusabby reviewed Epilogue on Sep 24, 2009 04:21 am

I loved the ending. The epilogue was nicely done and wrapped up the story perfectly. If only there was a sequel, but I suppose it's good to leave certain things to the imaginative mind! (Nausicaa and Suleiman, anybody?)

Feel a slight sense of loss now that Hesperides' Apple is completed because I've been keeping up with this story for a whopping 3 years! Nevertheless, I look forward to reading more of your newer fanfics. I am confident wouldn't disappoint.

All the best in fandom and real life!

Name: cindy reviewed Epilogue on Sep 18, 2009 06:09 am

omg!i am so happy right now!i was so glad u updated after 2 yrs and now the story's over with the perfect ending.i really,really loved this story and it is one of the best stories i have ever read!beautiful!looking forward to read more of ur works.thanks for this update.truly,totally loved it!

Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Epilogue on Sep 17, 2009 08:04 pm

yay for update! at first i was confused about the "four little malfoys", but then i got it towards the end. good job, ogygiasylph. this truly blew me away. :)

Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Epilogue on Sep 17, 2009 02:32 pm

*sobs* Its over...NO!!!! I loved it. This was wonderfully fun ride. I loved your take on the characters and your development. I really hope to see some future out takes or can I just imagine Suli and Nausicaa together. So glad that all that she fought for, she won and that she and Draco reached this part in their life. Happy writing on your future projects. :)