Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: Anya reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 25, 2006 12:49 am
Well, well... Some of the reviwers did'nt get it right... The pale witch wasn't Blaise, but one and only Shehzin, while Blaise went to Gringotts, and now I just understood why they are so perfect for each other.
I'm worried about Narcissa though, if Neville, Luna and Hermione came up with a possible cure, or else, an enhancement of the effects of the Luna Nevillum, on the Harpy pox, that means she would have a chance, if it wasn't for Malfoy's pride. Draco will have to swallow that in order to save his mum, but will he? Or maybe it will be Ginny saving the day, by using it to cure her in-law?
And about the Tawaret amulet, I think the other reviwers got it wrong as well. Probably Ginny doesn't know wich goddess is that, only thinking about it as an object of her brother, that "coincidentaly" helped to ease her sickness. But she didn't even give it a second thought.

Author's Response: They are perfect for each other, aren't they? We'll also find out they're a perfect match for the Malfoys: conniving but attached to the people they come to admire and care for. As Neville said, the cure is going to be put on the market quickly and, hopefully, en masse. Draco will just have to live with the fact that the profits for the cure will go to Muggle-borns and half-bloods. You're absolutely right about the Tawaret amulet, it was instinct rather than conscious decision that made her go for it. I tweaked the chap a bit so that it is clearer, but thanks for explaining it :D Thanks for the looooong review (and all the ones before that!)
Name: susie reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 08:02 pm
ughh, please dont tell me that was blaise at mungo's. haha update soon!

Author's Response: well, no, it's Shehzin. She's the one who can shift her appearance. I'll update as soon as I can :)
Name: somewhere over the rainbow reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 07:37 pm
Great chapter!
Deducing from the last two paragraphs, it seems like Draco already knows his wife's true identity...no? Interesting development. Can't wait for the next installment!!!:)

Author's Response: Thank you! No, he doesn't know her identity. He just figured getting her pregnant after she's put so much effort into NOT getting her pregnant will force her out of her shell, that she'll make a mistake--one that Blaise will be forced to report.
Name: Akt5us reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 07:33 pm
Loved the chapter! I can't wait to see how Draco will reveal it to Ginny and how she will react. I wonder how Draco will act when Ginny gets home-he seems so excited!
And, who isn't up for sex with Draco as revenge? giggles
Will this go on to the after the birth?
So, Neville and Luna are going to do what with the cure?
I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well he isn't going to tell her just yet. Waiting for the right moment, I suppose. (It'll come, don't worry) I doooon't think this will go on to the after birth. Maybe it will. I'm trying to think of a suitable ending here and ending with a birth is so typical. I'll see how creative (or not) I can get. Neville and Luna are going to make it available to everyone--Draco just won't be the one financing it. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!!
Name: tess reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 06:51 pm
yay!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE SONNER THANKS!! LUV TESS

Author's Response: lol unfortunately this may take a while. I'll do the best I can, and I'm glad you like it :D
Name: ana_delia reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 06:07 pm
i just have to say that i love your story it is very interesting and you're one h**l of a writer btw i thougt it was really cuz that you mentioned uzbekistan in the chapter cuz i am from there and when i read that part for some reason i was really happy lol your story rocks but please keep narcissa alive it would devastate draco cuz he seems like such a mama's boy and i really don't like seeing draco upset cuz bad things happen when draco is upset lol

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, I'm very flattered. About Uzbekistan, I've never been there, and the documentation I have is so scarce I'm afraid I wouldn't do it justice. Would you mind if I ran a few paragraphs of the following chapter by you so that you can tell me whether it's realistic, completely absurd, and maybe give me a few additional details? Draco's going to be upset, but not about Narcissa, I can tell you that much...
Name: WG13 reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 06:06 pm
Sorry to point this out... but u have to correct the following:

"The Potters and Sirius Black had ensured that his vault was well furnished."


Author's Response: can you not say "well furnished"? it's definitely a Gallicism on my part apologies for that, but I'm afraid I don't know what the correct term should be. Feel free to tell me, and thanks for pointing it out!
Name: WG13 reviewed 13. Good tidings on Aug 24, 2006 06:04 pm
Fabulous chapter. You managed to get so much of information into this chapter... and yet it flows so well...

Guess Ginny knows that she is pregnant huh... that's why she is using a Tawaret amulet... how come she hasn't brought it up with Draco yet?

Also, now that the 'pale witch' following Ginny has witnessed her reunion with Neville... how soon will Zabini get to the bottom of things?

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. again, it appears I'm going to have so rewriting to do: Ginny doesn't know (how could she even imagine, after all those contraception spells) that she's pregnant. In a way the amulet found her rather than she found it. Zabini will get to the bottom of things very, very soon. In fact, we can assume he's there already. Now all we have to wait for is the moment when he finds himself forced to tell Draco the entire truth... Thanks for reviewing!
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