Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: chocolate_snow reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Sep 10, 2008 01:10 am
This the second time i'm starting your fic......i just love the concept......it would have NEVER occured to me.....i really love it.....totally awesome!!!
Name: silver rose reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jul 24, 2008 04:14 pm
you have no idea how many times I've read this....hahaha...please update soon...I'm so desperate for the ending..seee!...my sad face ;(..soon to be x_x....(lol)
Name: tinamarie reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Mar 12, 2008 12:42 pm
Oh my gosh, this sounds like it is going to be a fantastic literary ride! I can't wait to click on next!!!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Feb 05, 2008 02:09 pm
I love this story but I noticed that it's not completed...please update!!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jan 21, 2008 08:51 am
This is such a great story. I love it!!
Name: MissMarie66 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Aug 13, 2007 09:20 am
i looovee this story!! what happens next......?
Name: Lewis reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jul 12, 2007 09:25 pm
wow...you have clearly delineated how the world (even HP) isn't black/white. I've always appreciated the HP world as a lighthearted read where the good guys always win but this brings the characters into a completely different light. Great development.
Name: citrusabby reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jul 07, 2007 06:44 pm
Long chappies and heavy dosages of D/G goodness make me a Happy Kid! I'm so thankful that this whole story happened on FIA.

:)
Name: sunshineneeds reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jun 22, 2007 04:24 am
hey! i love this story! tis amazin and i cant wait for more. its just so deep and very well written. but i agree with some of the other comments and thus feel the need to say that a little more Ginny Draco interaction would be gooood to read :-)
Name: Marie reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jun 06, 2007 12:58 pm
WOW amazing as usual..i read this when it was updated but i guess i forgot to review. i love this story its completely enthralling and i can't wait for more!!!
Name: citrusabby reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 31, 2007 12:36 am
Hello! May I tell you how much I've enjoyed this chapter along with all the rest? I'm relieved that there is some sort of apprehension on Ginny's part. And now all I have is to wait for the next chapter!

P.S Really appreciated that you set up a blog for the story.
Name: jhaycita reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 30, 2007 08:45 pm
Great story trough and trough, I have enjoyed reading it so much.
But as much as I love D/G together I can't see how they could end like that, so much stuff has happen. Ginny can understand Draco's motives but I don't see how she can forgive him, even if it wasn't his intention what he did led to her family being killed.
And let's not forget how he threaten all her friends.
I don't know it just hard for me to understand, but I'm looking forward to seeing how you resolve it all, whatever you do I'm sure it'll be great.
Keep up the great work!

Xiomara

PS: Sorry for my sloppy english, it's not my native language ans some times my ideas get lost in translation.
Name: nataliana reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 29, 2007 01:26 pm
Quite simply spellbinding!
I check this link twice or three times a day hoping balefully that you will update!
Its an amazing story with a premise that was bound to suceed from its concception.
I thoroughly enjoy the realism that you give to both canon and non-canon characters. Each of them is done so well.
I particularly like the underlying tensions, secrets and inexplicably cryptic conversations throughout. Each add to an ever growing addiction for more more more updates.
You have a wonderful style which I have found to somewhat lacking in D/G lately. Your expression and phrasing perfectly encapsulates exactly the emotions and situations the characters are faced with.

I hope that your updates are speedy and your ideas flow quickly. You have certainly re-kindled an interest in this ship as well as reaffirming that there are some wonderful writers out there in FF world.

Thank you for providing a welcome respite from reality on general.

best wishes
Name: anonymous reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 27, 2007 10:22 am
wow i love this story!! please update soon the suspense is killing me i just want them to be happy again! the angst is killing me.
Name: mysticmemories reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 27, 2007 05:11 am
hahahaha...even tho i'll be giving away a bit of info...my mom's name is sita! funny how that turned up here! i really like ur story tho..read it on mugglenet and was absolutely delighted to know that you have a lot more chappies posted on here!! YAY!!
Name: cams_09 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on May 11, 2007 05:18 pm
Funny, touching and wonderful in all ways.
Name: adali reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Apr 25, 2007 06:33 pm
I'm definitely interested to see where you're going with this. You've done a wonderful job of catching attention with your first chapter.

Two things I will point out, though: I think you meant 'subsequent to their registration', rather than 'posterior to registration', since registration doesn't really have a front and back. Second, 'which consists in the permanent expulsion' would make more sense if replaced with 'penalty; that is, permanent...' or, if you must use 'to consist', 'consisting of' (terribly sorry, but it's one of my least favorite verbs, and even having a least favorite verb is just to weird, so...)

Anyhow, I shall now toodle back to the story.
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Apr 16, 2007 06:13 pm
interesting!
Name: vickiez reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Apr 16, 2007 01:10 am
new chapter, please! i am dying here!

Author's Response: It's with the betas, I promise! I'm dying here too, but for other reasons... Did you see how much it's raining?
Name: bridgetmalfoy reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Apr 09, 2007 03:04 pm
absurd!
Name: MissMarie66 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Apr 07, 2007 08:47 am
I LOVE this story and i can't wait to read more!! please update soon!!
Name: cams_09 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Mar 18, 2007 03:12 pm
love it. no questions asked.
Name: crimsonpetals reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Feb 28, 2007 03:06 pm
Oh and I forgot to mention - it really shows how much effort you've put into this story. I love all the background information about mythology and etc that you incorporate into the fic. I love that. Also all the characters are very real and 3-dimensional with a full range of human emotions/instincts, which is the mark of a truly great piece. Once again, lovely.
Name: wishbear reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Feb 22, 2007 09:55 am
The way Draco is inthis chapter, almost made me forget i was rooting for him. the way he loses himself in the anger is simply to real. and the weasly's deaths were all so poeticly heroic. You couldnt help but feel their every pain. i am reminded of a phrase i once saw--Gryfindor, bluring the line between brave and stupid every step of the way.
Name: cams_09 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Feb 12, 2007 02:59 pm
Draco's portrayl interests me a great deal.
The fluff and simplicity that's often times laid as the foundation of shallower stories certainly hasn't been incorporated into "Hesperides' Apple". The plotline is refreshing. I'm patiently waiting for the relationship between Draco and Ginny to mature into love. Your story is worth the wait. I've been checking regularly for updates and I'm glad to see that your story is still going on strong. Do continue ^_^
-cams_09
ps: the title of your story is certainly very interesting: i've done some research on that ;)
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