Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: caughtinmyownworld reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Aug 11, 2014 12:27 pm
Oh my God. I've never hated Draco this much before >:(
Name: Draconus324 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Jun 08, 2010 09:41 pm
Youu pushed alittle to far with the last few chapters of this story.
while draco overpowering neville is fine, hermione is pushing it and ginny to boot is over the top. between hermione's knowlage of oddball spells and ginnys temper one of them would have held him off, even if only for a minute.

Author's Response: That's a fair concern... However, Hermione hasn't been using magic in a 'fighting' setting for a long time and did obviously not expect Draco -- why would she have had her wand at the ready? As for Ginny, Draco does not overpower her so much as he threatens her -- would you risk the lives of your friends, and maybe the chance of raising your own children, by failing to control your fiery temper? I know I wouldn't!
Name: Tatiana reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 22, 2010 09:40 pm
Well, I have to say you succeeded in creating an atmosphere like the one in Gladiator. That's one of my favorite movies, and that one scene is a particular favorite of mine (perhaps because it makes my emotions go on the roller coaster of their lives). And I believe you've created that feeling.
I love the Draco you've written, and I can't decide if this scene makes him sexier than hell or scarier than shit. Maybe both. Your skill is marvelous, either way.
Name: Lewis reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Jul 12, 2007 08:14 pm
oh no...poor poor Dean:(
Name: raven_dark reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on May 21, 2007 02:07 pm
you did justice allright... it's bloody awesome!
Name: mikey reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on May 12, 2007 05:26 pm
great plot. cool development.
Name: winkysmiles reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Apr 11, 2007 04:11 pm
ahhh.. i must read more haha..its really good!!! I LOVE it!
Name: abs reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Apr 09, 2007 11:12 am
Ohhhh god. You HAVE to keep going. I just finished and you have to keep going soon soon soon. FANtastic.
Name: sweetness150 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Apr 08, 2007 09:10 am
cant be bothered to sign in but just wanted 2 say i re read all of it coz its just soooooo good

desperately waiting for and update :(

and just so u know i have and thefreedictionary.com open, needless to say you are adding to my vocabulary lol

luv the story, my fav on this site
Name: darkloveangel reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Apr 04, 2007 04:37 pm
HEY!! omg this is soooo good....PLEASE write quickly!! please!!!!!
luv Theresa
Name: vickiez reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 31, 2007 04:31 pm
please keep writing. i am in love with your story.
Name: iinfinityplus1 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 31, 2007 12:12 am
Ahhhhh, update! I've been waiting for aaages, I can't wait!

Author's Response: I'm soooorrrryyyy I don't have the next chapter written yet! My suggestion is feast on Peki and Hearts Cadence's updates, because they're definitely worth more than my could be, until I have time to finish my chappie + send it to my lovely betas + correct the chappie + post the chappie. Thanks for the enthusiasm, though!
Name: brownieyes7 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 22, 2007 05:45 pm
WOW this fic is incredible. i absolutely adore it! please write more soon! your characterizations are wonderful...draco is horrible in just the right way. and ginny's just great. really, this is one of the best fics i have read in a long time! keep up the amazing work!!
Name: fanfictionfreak reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 14, 2007 01:09 pm
its been awhile. [not trying to rush you or anything] im just wondering whats happening next...im bad at cliffhangers. srry!
Name: felicitas reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 09, 2007 02:55 am
Love the story. But Draco is in some place too dark for me to enjoy it properly. I know that when you love someone, you are willing to do anything if you that someone is threatened. And Draco´s been deceived, his wife ran away with his unborn children, and he´s angry. Still to even say that he would kill Hermione´s son, even if I really know he wouldn´t do that (he´s too fond on kids right now), makes him really creepy. I hope beyond hope, you have really thought this through (I know you had) and that he´ll come back to his happy place and work things out with Ginny (ASAP...I can stand those two angry at each other, but when one is oppressing the other, that really anguish me a lot). It doesn´t seem that way right now and I´m kind of begging you to tell me it´s going to be ok at the end... PLEASE??? My favourite scene: Ginny breaking things all over the place because she´s jealous and Draco taking the mirror of her hands.
Name: karinaa93 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 05, 2007 01:11 pm
UPDATE!! I love it and I NEED MORE!!!!
Name: sdog reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Mar 01, 2007 12:55 pm
please please please update another chappie! i love this story...
Name: crimsonpetals reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 28, 2007 03:00 pm
Oh I want to read more!!!! This story is soooooooo amazing. Most original I've read on her. Beautifully written and provocative and needless to say - addictive. Lovely, angsty, UST-ish - everything I love. Great fic - update soon (or I'll die)!
Name: henal214 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 25, 2007 05:53 pm
I just discovered this amazing story last night...and I am done with it already. I absolutely adore it, so much so that I cannot go without 5 minutes of thinking of the charactes. What do I love the most? It's human. Ginny nor Draco are one-dimensional. Ginny is out for revenge. I like that you didn't have her magically fall in love with him, forgive his errs, confess her schemes, and have them live happily ever after. I also adore how Draco, althouth attached to Ginny, isn't blinded by love. He is who he is. In the last chaptere, when he threatened everyone that Ginny loved, I believed it. He would kill them if he had to.
I also want to applaud your diligence with the history and mythology. I'm actually learning a great deal, and couldn't be happier.
Please update as soon as humanly(perhaps magically) possible, as I menioned before, every 5 minutes I wonder what will happen. You cannot make me wait too long, my life will seemingly stop, and I have midterms at the moment.
Once more, I adore this story....

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review :) I'm glad to see that you interpreted everything as I hoped readers would in my wildest dreams! While I'm aware of the short-comings of my characters and the excessive facility of some developments, I am planning on going back and working on these--though I have to finish writing the story first, right? That being said, I have midterms, too, and I haven't written much in a while. Hopefully Spring break will originate one or maybe two chappies :) Once again, thank you very much for taking the time to review!
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 24, 2007 07:36 pm
incredible story! i always like a story with a plot and this one is great! i can't wait for more to come
Name: Shwadi reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 22, 2007 06:33 am
Oh my oh my!! lool I've read all of your story in about 3 days, successfully hogging the computer:P Its a fantastic story! my gawd draco is a scary dude!! why doesn't she just kill him in his sleep?! ...pls dont do it i want to read more!! Great stuff nd keep posting:D xxxxxshwadixxxxxx
Name: Jessica Malfoy reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 18, 2007 07:42 pm
Wow! I have never seen Draco written like that. I could picture that whole scene in my mind. it was awesome. Keep up the good work!
Name: citrusabby reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 16, 2007 12:30 am
Things are not looking well for Ginny, but I'm glad she's back in his arms.

Brilliant, as always.
Name: betsym reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 15, 2007 02:26 am
nice chapter....please update soon
Name: Ananyamous reviewed 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Feb 14, 2007 03:39 pm
Aaaah! Draco's so.....I don't know. Creepy and cruel. It's frightening. Still, as always, can't wait for the next update.
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