Name: Tatiana reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Mar 22, 2010 09:46 pm
I love the line in this chapter, where Nacrissa is defending Draco's behavior to Ginny: "Well, he's always been a jealous boy...". I think it exemplifies wonderfully the full extent of a mother's unconditional love, as well as shows how deeply this characteristic is ingrained in Draco's personality. After all, if you're mother willl admit you're guilty of it, well... And you did such a brilliant job introducing Draco's side of the story in a sympathetic light to both the reader and Ginny. Two thumbs way, way up.
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Jan 02, 2008 05:12 pm
how sweet...and horrifying!! I hope it all turns out well. I really like how you portrayed ALL the characters in this story. You really are an amazing writer.
Name: Anonymous reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Jun 14, 2007 06:47 pm
You're a brilliant writer. So far you've already made me cry. This is such a great story, thank you.
Name: update reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on May 12, 2007 05:27 pm
updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate
Name: LeticiaSlytherin92 reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on May 02, 2007 08:03 pm
I love it! next chapter plz!
Update soon!
Name: wishbear reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 25, 2007 10:54 am
loved it.
it is simply marvolous. i can wait for the update (and mabe a happily ever after? pretty please? all the stories these days end with death. while beutifuly ironic its kind of getting old. but moving on) im glad narssisa is back on ginnys side. the two of them are amazingly well done. not to mention draco *sigh* Update soon! and i looked the clause bout the coral reef.
Name: That Iz I reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 24, 2007 05:56 pm
I'm glad you updated. This story is so... captivating! I understand your knowledge of bounding Ginny to Draco by announcing her being a Weasley. Except, Draco plays a dangerous game sharing that with the public because there are so many who would be thrilled to toy with Ginny.
Another thought, I loved, and I mean, absolutely filled with giddy the way you portrayed Narcissa. Just the fact that titled a chapter for her made me so happy. Umm, I thought you're Narcissa seemed to fit the Narcissa in RK Rowlings 6th book. Slightly desperate but still true to her morals (as shown by her hatred with Ginny being a blood-traitor). I think that Narcissa seemed much more deserate in the 6th book but only Draco's life was truly on the line. As of now, there's still space to be rational. Great job!
Name: Rashonda reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 24, 2007 07:11 am
What, I find most disturbing is that Narcissa was ignorant of what her sister had done or what she was capable of doing. How could she delude herself into believing that Bella didn't commit any crimes. What did she think Bella had done to become one of Voldie's most faithful confidants? Perhaps in her mind it was better not knowing what her sister had done so she could have kept up the facade that Bella was somehow coaxed into this lifestyle she chose to lead. I did enjoy her conversation with Gin though. She does have a right to be angered, but at the same time knowing what she does now, she should at least be able to empathize with the situation that Gin is now in. Maybe she will eventually once she gets over her anger towards her. As for Draco, I wish he would talk with Gin about the choices that he had to make during the war, it'll be hard for her of course to see the reasons behind his decisions, but it's better to see and hear the reasons behind those actions before writing him off altogether. Great job as always, I enjoyed.
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 23, 2007 06:31 pm
Oh my goodness, your story is addicting! I finally got through it all! You have to update soon. This story is amazing.
~Freckles
Name: SnowAngel reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 23, 2007 04:31 pm
Ok so first i was just going to say that this is an awesome story and under not cercumstances should you abandon it. Then I read your profile thingy to see if you had any other stories and found out that you are French. I have to say I love you and your story even more. (I have a slight obsession with all things French, just in case you didn't pick up on that).
Author's Response: lol thanks :) It's increasingly rare to come across people obsessed with all things French--in a favorable way, that is.
Name: ronlover reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 22, 2007 12:30 pm
Love it! Please update soon. Best story ever!!!!!! lol.
Name: Jordanza reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 04:51 pm
great chap! it was slightly depressing but it was still extreemly well done! can't wait for the next chap!
Name: abby reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 04:33 pm
Update! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: sweetness150 reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 12:45 pm
this was a great chapter once again, i wondered how you would start it and the way you did was genius. just have a question, what is the tim difference to when she was taken back to the manor and when she revealed her true self to the public?
Author's Response: good question. I'm thinking a few days, because Draco is not one to make the same mistake twice. He'd bind her to him is quickly and tightly as possible, and revealing her true identity was one of the ways to do just that. I'll work on a more precise chronology when I rewrite the story. Having a pregnancy and the evolutions that entails (as well as the timeframe it imposes, because, magic or no magic, Ginny can't be pregnant for two years!) has definitely posed a few difficulties, and I apologize for that, but, like I said, I'll work on it once this is finished. Thanks a lot for your review and question :)
Name: CCC reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 12:25 pm
I'm glad that there might be some hope for them.
Name: bloomingauthor7 reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 10:59 am
i love this story! i'm so glad you've updated! don't make it 3 months again, please. your characters are so believable and your metaphors are awesome.
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 10:08 am
I am so glad that you were able to update again. I have missed this story so much. Another wonderful chapter that leaves so many questions unanswered. Is Narcissa upset because she had started caring for Ginny as so much for than just a daughter-in-law. I hope that Draco and Ginny can actually sit down and straighten some of the unanswered questions about what happened the night that the Weasley's died.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 08:02 am
So glad that you finally updated!!! Good Luck with it all! Can't wait to read more! :)
Name: MK Richie reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 06:27 am
What a lovely surprise! I was so excited to find that you updated, and even more excited to find that this chapter is just as good, if not better, than the rest! This story has taken a more interesting turn as things begin to fall into place, and your characterization of both Draco, Ginny, and Narcissa are consistent yet develop believably throughout the time line. All the mythology and the arts that influence this story only add to its elegance. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! But by the way, how many chapters are you planning on making this story? : )
Author's Response: Let me put it this way: I was planning on making this story 10 chapters. 20, tops. Now I'm leaning towards 30, but I don't really like stories with endless chapters, so I'll definitely be wrapping this up--eventually. Then I had kind of planned on abandoning this, but two plot bunnies attacked me and so I might stick around a bit longer. Thanks for your review. I really appreciate the depth and precision of it!
Name: Ana reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 01:49 am
Oooh it feels as if this story is coming to an end - I kinda want it to, because I want Ginny and Draco to be happy together, but I kinda don't want it to - because then the pleasure of reading it will end. That notwithstanding, please update soon!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 20, 2007 12:04 am
very dramatic... worth the wait, but I want more already! Seeing Draco's emotions again is comforting, and you're subtley introducing a genuinely kinder side to his personality... I think... with his concern and general amazingness, anyway... I really can't wait for more!
Name: felicitas reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 19, 2007 11:22 pm
I´m so happy you updated!!! This chapter brought hope back to me!!! That was all I was asking. The wait was worth it, really. I hope you´ll have some more time to keep such a wonderful work. LOL
Name: lilyburns reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 19, 2007 07:16 pm
you use certitude way too much -- otherwise great chapter
Author's Response: LOL I'll be sure to look into that!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 19, 2007 05:23 pm
wow..this was incredible! please update fast!!
Name: Anonymous reviewed
24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Apr 19, 2007 04:47 pm
pleasee please please please please please please update sooner!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!
Author's Response: Hmmmm... I'll do my best... It's finals weeks for my betas and myself, though, so I wouldn't hope too much. Thanks for what I take to be enthusiasm, though :)