Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jan 02, 2008 05:38 pm
loved it! loved it!
Name: Anonymous reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 14, 2007 07:15 pm
omg!!! Made me cry, again!'

You're a seriously awesome writer
Name: Anonymous reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 06, 2007 06:58 pm
please please please please please please update another chapter soon thanks!
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 06, 2007 02:11 pm
Great chap (and tidbit on the blog)! I liked the Persephone bits throughout the chapter. Update really soon!
Name: Mey reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 05, 2007 05:26 pm
this chapter made me cry, especially at the end! :`) please update soon
Name: muggle17 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 04, 2007 06:55 pm
I couldn't wait for you to post on the other site. I love this story! You are such a brillant writer and I love the footnotes. I am officially a fan of draco and ginny stories. Thanks!
Name: ronlover reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 04, 2007 02:05 pm
I'm so happy Draco decided to show her his memories. I love this story. Update as soon as you can. *grins*
Name: felicitas reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 03, 2007 07:30 am
He didn't know! You're the best! I didn't see that coming but I knew Draco wasn't all that bad. Ginny is going to forgive him and she already kissed him! I'm so happy... The cookie was a great treat but the whole chapter was fabulous!! Thank you for the update. LOL
Name: RachelR82 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 03, 2007 03:26 am
Oh my goosness I love this story! I've read it a couple times, and like it more each time. Hurry up and finish!! :)
Name: kcc852 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 01, 2007 07:29 pm
I love this story... it is amazing and well written with a good plot but... she forgave him just like that? Wow if i were her I would have been PISSED

Author's Response: Well... she didn't forgive him, really... not yet. And she WAS pissed: why do you think she got married to him in the first place? To figure out what he cared for, and destroy it. (Sadly, she became what he cared for... and that made her endeavor all the more difficult) Thanks for reviewing :) I'm happy you like the story.
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 01, 2007 03:08 pm
So good, as usual! I loved it.
Name: Coldplay reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jun 01, 2007 09:51 am
There's hope for them!
Name: Daniela1 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 08:25 pm
Bloody Brilliant, as Ron would say. I always enjoy your writing. It is well researched and lovely to read.
Name: Dex reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 07:59 pm
Love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's so believable how you wrote them.

PS. I really want to know what they're going to name the twins.
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 01:04 pm
That was really good!! We know Draco's motives! I'm seriously crossing my fingers here for Draco and Ginny to overcome this and be a happy family. At least now she knows why. And Draco spent time with the Weasleys? Was this mentioned earlier and I totally forgot? Anyway, wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response: Arhem... This WAS mentioned earlier... In a fictive world where I actually published these scenes! (If you want to read about them, it's on my Blog) As I said, it's part of the rewrite I haven't posted yet. Sorry! And thanks for the review!
Name: anonymous reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 12:43 pm
i didnt feel like signing in...i was THAT excited about the update...heehee.

anyway, superb writing. i love how you entwined greek mythology with thier relationship. very clever, that was.

I hope this isnt THE last chapter...is there like a epilogue with the twins being born and etc? a lil smut...? *eyebrow wiggle*

lol. whatever you do, just know that i absolutely ADORED this story.
Name: MK Richie reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 09:27 am
Another great chapter. Though in the beginning it felt a bit rushed, I understand you wanted to get to the pensieve as fast as possible. Once inside, the images were powerful and appropriate. I liked seeing a more vulnerable Draco for once, if only for a few scenes. Back towards the beginning with the Wuthering Heights quote...well, you just made my day missy, because that is one of my favorite books ever. Ever. And thanks for picking a quote other than, "my love for Linton...," after all, the book does have more than one memorable line. As always, I find the mythology both enlightening and creative, and you are able to send your message home through other pathways beside common narrative. Just a few questions. Exactly how far along pregnant is Ginny? And have you decided a definite ending to this story, chapter wise? Thanks again, I adore your unique and intelligent voice.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 09:21 am
Oh...I loved the way you related D/G to Persephone! This was a great chapter!
Name: wlfgrl reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 05:34 am
i can't wait until the next update! keep writing!!!!
Name: Moonyk reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 04:32 am
"Smoothly and swiftly, like a shadow following the body that casts it"

Liked that line alot, dunno why. And omgosh what a development! I smell a change in the wind! -sniff sniff- I don't know what I feel about this chapter but major step occurred here and it's like coming full circle, story wise and different versions of what happened and how I wish that Pensieves were real so that people could finally stop fighting and learn to start forgiving. Theres nothing but pain in war. NOTHING's fair, in love and war.

-claps- Brill. Cheerio!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 03:53 am
Great chapter. I am glad to see that in the long run given time that she can/will forgive him. I don't think that I could. I cannot wait for her to have them boys. That could be interesting. You have her being petite-ish so that could cause problems with her having them. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Post it soon please and thanks.
Name: Mare reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 02:13 am
How awful! Poor Draco. I knew it was something like this, but I hope she can forgive poor Draco. Lovely update!
Name: Jordanza reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 12:43 am
Great chappie! can't wait for more!
Name: sweetness150 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 12:36 am
sorry just wanted to add, although some people think that they can't work it out, honestly i think they can. he didn't know it was her family, and althought he would still do it again had he known it was to save his mother, and ginny of all people should understand that since she has to great lengths just to seek her revenge. they have come to far, there married and she's preganant, and as much as she would like to deny that draco doesnt mean anything to her, he does. when she was just pretending she was falling for him, like when she found out that he was with serafina at the partys.

i would really like if you adress how draco treated her once he found out it was ginny weasly , he treasted her very badly not that they were bitches to eachother.

just outta curiousity now that im adressing the past, how comes ginny so easily slept with draco, i mea nwouldnt she have dreaded it a little, or did that just show that she was falling for him and never realised and she just started to have mixed feelings with revenge and al that other stuff..
Name: sweetness150 reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on May 31, 2007 12:26 am
with a mass of red hair resting on his lap. "You were awake?" Ginny asked

oh my gosh, they knew eachother more than outside the halls of hogwarts. they have more history than i thought, draco should have recognised her even with blond hair since he had been staring at her when she sleeped, guess he really did have a lot on his mind! i really love how you just bought that in, i was like ooh twist until i read the rewrite which is fantastic btw. i c y ginny would feel even more betrayed, as every1 thought she was dead in the attack aswell. seriously though, im glad we have seen dracos side of the story now

does that mean we are coming to an end, or are you going to adress this whole only purebloods are allowed to do magic and the rise in squibs being born. and now im thinking what if ginnys boys are squibs, i hope not but i gues we'll see

once again fantastic chapter, my faviourate story btw

but this deserves the oh my god moment, she kissed him, she said in due time. yay u give me hope :)
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