Name: saucy reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 05:01 pm
Holy shnap! What an epiphany that would be! Your hope is fulfilled, you did the scene justice, at least by my terms! Its absolutely fabulous!
Name: MyEscape reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 03:26 pm
Wonderful!
Name: Blair reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 03:10 pm
I am completely and utterly in love with this fic. Its beautiful, realistic, sticks to canon, and contains one of the greatest original characters I have ever seen in a fanfic. They character development and the development of Draco and Ginny's friendship, Draco's falling in love is all very believable. I very eagerly await the next chapter.
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 01:33 pm
Justice?! Justice?! That chapter was beyond words great. I think that has got to be one of the best chapters I have read. Can not wait til you update again
Name: ScarletXBegonia reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 12:32 pm
Believe me, justice was done
Name: imelda reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 09:51 am
Justice? It was WONDERFUL. Ohmigoodness. I love that you waited for them to have their first fight before Draco came to any sort of realization. You're continuing the slow pace of their relationship's development, and it remains completely believable.
And beautiful. The scene with Hogsmeade down below, twinkling under the stars...wow. I don't know why no one's ever thought to include Hogsmeade in the view from Hogwarts' towers. I've never read that in any other fic, and this time I was like--duh. And it was gorgeous.
Poor Draco though. Shit. And he's in for so much more grief, isn't he? I almost feel like stopping here, because I can't bear to see it all go downhill.
Can you tell me now--is there any chance of a remotely happy ending?
Oh, and I have to tell you, when Pierce first told Draco that he was in love, I didn't believe him. Like, I though Pierce had gotten it wrong, and had misstepped. Of course, he was two steps ahead of me, as usual. Because it IS plausible that Draco's in love already...and he is.
Sigh. Every time I finish a chapter I just want more and more and more of it. Yet I'm glad that I'm reading this while it's being written, so that I have time to digest it, and don't devour it all at once.
That being said, I still hope that the next chapter will not be too long in coming!!!
Name: CCC reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 08:54 am
I think you did a great job. I'll be looking forward to more updates.
Name: Mandy reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 08:29 am
MORE MORE MORE! That scene was great! Now it's time for them to get together! Good chapter.
Name: Lottie reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 08:25 am
Aw! It's going to be interesting to see what he's going to do about it!
Name: Megan reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 08:07 am
YAAAAAAAAY! OMG I'm so excited! Draco finally admitted his love for Ginny! Ohhhh...I hope you update soon. I'm dying to know how that little realization will change their relationship. Wonderful chapter! I loved every word of it.
Name: Mars reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 08:00 am
I think you definitely did the scene justice. I was actually waiting for them to kiss or something but it's better this way. It fits the story better. Congrats on another brilliant chapter :).
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 07:54 am
Mmm -- that was quite wonderful! It actually seems /natural/, which is tough in many bits o' fanfic. Great job! :)
Name: pingpong0601 reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 07:49 am
Oh my GOD! This was a great chappie! I wish the two of them would just admit their feelings for eachother already but at least Draco's finally admitting it to himself. Poor Draco, I'm getting frustrated with all of the games people are playing to. UPDATE SOON!
Name: snowfelon reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 07:07 am
Loved it! all the other fics that i've been following have suddenly turned rather alarmingly bad, so i'm very glad that this one is still nice and with a good standard of writing. yay! he loves her! haha :)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 06:07 am
oh no!! that means Pierce will be carrying out his plot soon!!
on the other hand, DRACO's IN LOVE!!! aaw. It was worth the hard work, and I am very touched... I love how you've built the whole thing up so it's plausible (at least in the wizarding world). Can't wait for more :)
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 05:30 am
WOOOT! Oh my goddess! That was amazing you did do the scene justice. So much justice that we will have to now appoint to the Supreme Court. Well that was amazing and I will be looking forward to the next update we might actually be getting to the Draco-Ginny physical romance! It is so exciting.
Name: Embellished reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 05:07 am
You did justice to the scene. It was very nicely done, and the flow of emotions was very believable. I am very much looking forward to finding out what Draco ends up doing with his sudden realization. I am also getting more and more curious about Nott, and what his motives are. Among all this, I am dreading what will happen when Pierce's plot comes to fruition. But I have a little bit of hope that the line, “The thing about the beginning is that it always changes by the end. I already said we’ve built a lot of history these past months. I don’t know where you stand, but for myself, things are different now,” is actually a bit of foreshadowing on your part, and that things won't end up quite the way he expects. Thanks for the update!
Name: Moonyk reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 04:59 am
GAH. Omg. -head spinning- Can I babble incoherently??? I'm just gonna ignore the fact that it was just admitted out loud that Draco IS in love with Ginny and ask this question instead.
What is up with Nott? Dodgy but I think you're making him be like this Blaise-kind of character. Or is he somebody totally opposite of that?
Great chapter. I held my breath at that last line. Damn dont make us wait for the next one too long!
Cheerio!
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 04:55 am
“It’s just like her perspective, only higher up.” - Best one-liner ever!
Oh, you more than did it justice. Phenomenal! Draco's denial was hilarious, and I loved the Firewhisky. Pierce is so very, very awesome.
Still one of my very favourites!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
The First Move and an Epiphany on Jan 21, 2007 04:49 am
Oh! It was fantastic! I absolutely loved it! Denial is so Draco, and people telling him that something was so wouldn't do any good... he'd have to come to the realization by himself. Great chapter!