oh no!! poor draco

Yay update!! I got very excited upon seeing another chapter, I'm totally into the whole Nott thing now. I figured him for not being totally evil and having some other intentions, but what? Ahhh cliffhangers are evil. ;) ;) Anxiously awaiting the next installment!!

I love the parallels between Draco and Pierce in this chapter, but at least Draco has some sense of just what kind of hold Ginny has over him. I'm looking forward to finding out whether or not Pierce can actually follow through with his plan. Thanks for the update!

Let me take a moment to WARGH!!! I added this story on my favourites but for some reason, it's not showing up there and because of that, I almost missed your latest update cos alot of ppl were updating their fics at the same time and it was only cos I was bored that I happen to check your fic again and there was suddenly a new chapter and I am so irritated that I almost missed it!!! Again, WAAARGGGHH.

I'm sorry.

Now my real review. So, we find out what's Nott's deal yes? The friendly interest was just that, friendly. I can't help thinking that Nott works for the Order. There MUST be some benefit! Urgh! And that stupid Pansy idea, should totally disregard that stupid cow. BLEARGH.

And I don't know but I don't trust Naomi. Maybe I feel like you're trying to psycho us and I'm doing a reverse psychology thing and whoa, I put way too much thought into your fic than what is deemed the healthy level.

Hahaha gosh Im sorry I will stop rattling on now.
Cheers!

omg looka the quickness! ThanksforupdatingsoFAST!!!

anyway - AAHHHH!!!!! Ginny kiiiissssed himmmm! I'm so excited. Moreplease. And get Naomi back here, I don't trust her. ...that, and she'll stop Pierce from hurting Ginny. Unless she's working for someone. Whoknows. Maybe someone's going to try and use his own tricks against him.

Christ!! Draco, shut UP!!

Oh, dear. The story's really picking up steam, and I am so, so scared. You've made me care a lot about these characters.

This chapter was fantastic. It was nice to begin with some D/G, and I was so relieved that Ginny told Draco about Nott. Not that it solved anything, but...I have been internally begging her to do that for the last 5 chapters.

But much more importantly...the kiss! Ohh, Ginny. Does she know what she's doing? It was such a sweet kiss, and obviously we know she likes Draco, but does she know? And how much does she like him? Such a mysterious girl, our Ginny. I can't really figure her out. But I do love her, the way you've written her. Almost as much as I love your Draco.

The Draco-Nott scene had me, literally, on the edge of my seat and biting my nails. I wanted for Draco to best Nott and get him to slip up somehow, but Nott is really smart. Too smart. I'm inclined to trust him a bit more after that conversation, but I still couldn't guess either way.

Also, I totally trust Naomi. I don't know if I should. I mean, I don't know how to feel about her--if she's a spy, should I like her for messing up Pierce's game? Or should I dislike her for betraying him? But if she's being honest, should I be annoyed that she's NOT helping D and G? Or should I be happy because she and Pierce are in wub?

As you can see, this is all very confusing. You've done such a good job of hiding the secrets of this story, and drawing your readers along and developing the plot and relationships. It has been such a pleasure reading this story.

Also, as if this review isn't long enough, I liked some of the descriptions you used in this chapter--like a sunny but cold day being "Mother Nature's favorite trick". That was well put, and cute.

Best of all, though (besides the kiss) was Pierces' moment of guilt. Whoa. I did NOT think he was capable of that. That alone makes me happy that Naomi is around, whatever her ulterior motives are. I hope we see more instances of Pierce doubting himself and his mission. Because, really. You can't destroy these kids.

This isn't going to have a sad ending, is it? I don't think I could stand it.

Anywho, I'm off to reread this chapter, now. It's just that entertaining.

Thanks, as usual, and PLEASE update soon!!!

Noooo! Why did Pierce have to come at that exact moment? Gah, and Nott is very creepy still, so good job doing that, hehe. And thanks for giving me a reason not to study for my chem exam :D.