Name: sandalaris reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Oct 26, 2013 08:10 am
I don't know if you answered this in any of the A/Ns (I've only been reading about every other one) but why is it that Ginny saw bits of Harry's life before seeing Harry in the presant but Draco went straight for the now? At first, I thought that it was just a "first use" thing, but now that Draco's used it, I don't know what to think.
Name: serinah reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Apr 06, 2009 09:05 am
thinking that draco will even promise taking the Mark without following through hurts. he won't really do it, will he?
Name: Sky Dragon reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Sep 29, 2008 10:27 pm
What happened to that whole "flashing though their life thing" with the candle in chapter 2? I'd figured you hadn't bothered to mention it with the rest of the times Ginny held it but why didn't it do it for Draco?
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Jan 04, 2008 07:38 pm
OMG! THIS IS GREAT!
Name: Katze reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Jun 01, 2007 04:48 pm
OMFG im obsessed awesome work
btw thats one evil cliff hanger lols
Name: Matt reviewed
Deal With the Devil on Jun 01, 2007 12:29 pm
Its so freaking good.
Name: Pingpong0601 reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 30, 2007 08:51 pm
Excellent as usual! I look forward to your next update!
Name: Elena reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 30, 2007 05:07 pm
Oh my god please tell me you are already writing the next chapter. You can't leave us like this. I absolutely loved everything about this chappie. Draco and Nott together, Ginny and Naomi (paying the price for loving those slytherin hotties but who can blame them) and I also really liked the little scene with Snape, Pierce and Ginny (Pierce being his usual charming self) but your chapters have the cruelest ending (do you do that on purpose?). Meh I hope Draco doesn't have to take the dark mark but he will still be good even if he does take so I am not too worried. Thank you also for giving us a nearly naked Nott lol. But if he ran into someone on the way to his common room wouldn't they notice his dark mark if he has no clothes on? Please please please update as soon as you can your story is soooo amazing. Thank you for writing it.
Name: Michelle reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 30, 2007 03:10 pm
Awesome and amazing! One of the best written fics I've read in a while! Please continue writting!!
Name: felicitas reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 30, 2007 09:54 am
NO!! Not the Dark Mark!! What is he thinking? You got me clinging to my screen... And BTW, Naomi is my favourite character now. I just love her wisdom so much.
Name: Kalira reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 05:26 pm
lovely chapter as always. I love Nott's character, he's fascinating. I do hope the next chapter will be up sometime soon. Good luck with the writing!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 03:07 pm
woww...oh my gosh..this is getting so intense!!! please update fast!!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 02:14 pm
~Dont take the mark. dont dont dont.~
Name: imelda reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 07:26 am
That was a great moment with Nott there at the end. I love that you develop every single character in this fic, canon or no, and that I'm interested in every single one of them.
I was so happy to see this chapter! I reread the whole fic yesterday, and then moaned in agony for about an hour, dying for an update. Teehee. And today it came!!
This chapter was good, though it advanced the story a bit less than I'd hoped. I love the irony of Ginny and Naomi in a cell together. I actually thought of that at the end of the last chapter--the love interests of the 2 Slytherins, both 'hired' because they serve as the weaknesses of their men. And Pierce not realizing any of it. It's fantastic!
I hope we get to see a bit more of the Trio, especially Harry, but obviously, this is not their story. I REALLY hope that you can update soon again--I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Name: Indiainksky reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 03:12 am
suspense!!! Clever interlude between Ginny and Naomi...I never thought about the fact that they have much in common. Except I like to think Draco is a bit less cruel than Pierce.
Name: joey101 reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 29, 2007 01:54 am
its so good...pleaz update faster!!!
Name: ForeverAnAngel reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 09:59 pm
Very cool chapter :D
Name: sarina reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 09:42 pm
omg, i didn't see that coming... but he has the freakin maps, why don't he just uses them?? gnaahhh... anyways, that was fast! very cool. i liked it, obviously!
good luck for your finals!
Author's Response: Oh, haha no, he's not going to Pierce because he doesn't know where the dungeon is. Sorry, that "for a tour" bit must have been confusing. No, he knows WHERE it is - he's been there - it's that he can't just walk into the house without someone noticing and kind of...you know...asking what the heck he's doing there. Not while he's still all exiled and jazz.
Name: Mare reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 09:24 pm
Oh no! Not the Dark Mark. He was doing so well without it. ahhh! Maybe there's still hope yet, yeah? Thanks for the quick update.
Name: jujubinha reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 06:19 pm
I'm so glad to see the updates! I love that Nott's working with Draco, because I was hoping for something of the sort - I love the way you play him. Also it's interesting to see where things will go from here - both Draco and Pierce thinks they are playing each other. Hopefully, with Draco knowing it was Pierce who took Ginny, Pierce's plans of making him believe that the Order is responsible for her demise will fail, and we won't see a damaged beyond repair Draco. Oooooh... I can't wait for more!
Name: Melissa reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 06:09 pm
This story is so amazing. I absolutely love your writing. That said...Draco can't get the mark! And where was Snape taking Ginny before she made a run for it? Update as quickly as you can!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 05:04 pm
No!!! No mark!! Draco's supposed to be untouchable. I like the whole skirt scene. Honestly, how do you forget that you're wearing a skirt when you're a guy? Poor Gin. Although, at least she has company.
Name: arabela reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 04:19 pm
NOHECANTTAKETHEMARK!HESNOTALLOWEDTO! He better have a plan, dammit.
but WHOA you updated fast. ...doitagain!!!!
Name: Megan reviewed
Deal With the Devil on May 28, 2007 04:17 pm
Yay! I'm glad you updated so soon! Can't wait for the next chapter.