Reviews For Not Quite Fate
Name: Esus reviewed Schemes and Confessions on Nov 03, 2006 05:28 am
Chapter 6

OMG!
Now I’m feeling so sorry for the review about last chapter. If this one wasn’t already written, I could have thought you read into my mind. That was exactly what I thought when I said to you that there was something wrong about the plot. Instead, now, everything make so much more sense: Pierce finally was able to twist Draco’s mind as he wanted, and he even managed quite easily to know where he could find Ginny when he needs her. I think Draco will spend so much time in the Greenhouse and in the Potion lab…
I liked his argumentation about Draco’s emotions and his suggestion about how the Slytherin could wind over Ginny. Maybe he just forget about Weasley’s stubbornness, but probably he couldn’t tell to Draco he was to have a bad time with his enemy, or he wouldn’t even persuade him into this crazy plan.
So, as you could easily guess, I *loved* this chapter. And I was so intrigued by Ginny and Draco’s interaction in DADA class. It was amazing how Draco could actually feel Ginny gaze over him: they are too conscious of each other and they still don’t see it. And the scene about the bag? Priceless! I can easily understand why Ginny made him fell down the desk: after being humiliated during class and because she wasn’t able to stuff all her belongings into her bag, at least she got her little revenge.
But my heart went out to her when she spoke with an oblivious Harry. I can fell her loneliness so strongly that I could almost touch it. Poor girl. But this is the right state of mind to make her so desperate that she could even accept Draco’s offer of friendship. Otherwise, she wouldn’t ever let the Slytherin come near to her.
But I still have the feeling that this candle thing won’t bring anything good. She’s becoming too dependent from it. Sure, being something found in Hogwarts, it shouldn’t be dangerous, but… I really hope she’ll regain her sense soon and see that she’s not really alone.
Name: Esus reviewed The Idea on Nov 03, 2006 05:28 am
Chapter 5


I don’t know what actually thing of this chapter. After reading it, I understood why it was so hard for you to write.

And, don’t take offence here, but I think you didn’t managed the result you were looking for.
Not that you did a bad job here: I enjoyed your writing as usual and your style didn’t lacked of anything. Descriptions flowed well and get along perfectly with the narration; the characterizations were good as usual and your characters evolved as expected, with their good sides and their bad ones. You gave us some new elements about Pierce and about Hogwarts’ atmosphere. A lot of elements I have to think of to understand what’s happening and to imagine what it’s waiting for us in the future.
What disappointed me was how Pierce found out how he could finally act with Draco: the little scene with McGonagall and Ginny immediately after seemed a bit forced, as if you had to put them here to make your plot work. Maybe, it would have been better split the two moments in two different chapters… even if I can see why you have to put them both here, just to give us the idea of Pierce’s sudden idea (I almost heard him yelling “Eureka!”, LOL). Sure, you gave us enough hints before but I still have the sensation you rushed the action here. Maybe, you could put more evident proves before, so Pierce had to put the pieces together not and blame himself for being so stupid.
On the other hand, I found interesting how Pierce was able to make Draco doing what he wanted. From a certain point of view, it’s almost unbelievable Draco fell for the trick: he was able to sense more subtle attacks and instead acted like a unaware kid in this occasion. But, on the other hand, Pierce finally worked on the right thing: Malfoys’ massive ego. And, even if Draco is really good at fighting and sensing manipulations, he’s still a teen. But, maybe, you made us believe too easily that he was so good, that now his failure seems a bit odd.
What I fear is how much, instead, Ginny is blinded about Pierce behaviour and how much she “trusts” him. After Draco little show, I expected that she could be able to see through the façade and sense the danger. Instead, she seems very much oblivious… maybe it’s related to her Gryffindor nature, but I really hope she’s going to open her eyes soon, before actually spoil anything.
Still, I find the chapter good, even I dare say it could have been improved. I hope you don’t mind what I said, because it’s just my personal opinion and surely you had your reasons to write as you did. But I can’t wait to read next chapter!
Name: Aalyah reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Nov 01, 2006 03:02 am
That is the best fanfic that I ever read. And that's a big compliment from a person that criticises everything she sees - from herself, to the weather outside. I really, really, really like it. Please post more soon, I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. And how many chapters are there?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments, and I'll try as hard as I can to get out an update. Things are just crazy beyond belief right now. As to how many chapters, I have absolutely no idea. I write as I post, and outlining that extensively hinders my writing more than helps, so your guess is as good as mine, really.
Name: Esus reviewed Conversations on Oct 31, 2006 07:25 am
Chapter 4



Malfoy said, “Ginny and I were just talking, Professor.”



I wasn’t sure of which sentence quote, ‘till I found this one.

This guys is going to give me a heart-stroke!

Not only he actually talked with a Weasley, not only he wasn’t annoyed by the fact of her hearing that conversation (well, I have this weird feeling he was just worried about the fact other people can know what now she knows), but he actually calls her with her name?!

I can only imagine Ginny expression in that very moment and her thoughts gave out a lot about it.

Why he looked for her after, instead of simply waiting for her and saying everything immediately? Why she can’t see he changed, if I’m not sure if for good, and why she can’t simply listen to her wise mind and go away as soon as she has the possibility?

And, why… WHY that idiotic Pierce has to show up in every wrong moment? It’s like he has a sort of radar for this! Really, really annoying.

And how comes Draco offered to actually help him? Unless he doesn’t want to have a close look at the man, just to see what he actually wants from him.

And I think Pierce now is going to really understand that Ginny is the solution to his problem. But, what the man doesn’t know is that his clever plan is going to come back straight to his head instead of working as he hoped.



“So, Draco, do you enjoy Defense Against the Dark Arts?”



He actually called Draco with his first name?! I don’t know, it isn’t a bit weird? Usually, professors call students with their last name… just to show a little of respect to the poor guys and to underline they aren’t friends. I can understand Pierce is trying to act friendly, as I said before, but you aren’t going a bit too much out of character’s role?

Moreover, he seems a bit too unprepared, for being the best emotions player among Death Eater ranks. He should remember Draco is a Malfoy, he’s more Slytherin in his own soul than all his other house mates all together. I have the feeling Pierce is underestimating this a bit too much.

But, maybe, he’s starting to understand how to really catch Draco’s attention. Sometimes, honesty can be more helpful than people actually think (I’m referring about when he said somethin about “molding young minds”). Instead, as he revealed some lines after, I knew for sure he resented challenges. He doesn’t sound the type you know… he’s a too much closed mind to actually enjoy them. Differently from Draco: he is a true Slytherin. That’s why I wonder again how someone like Pierce was set into Slytherin… apart from his strong will and his questionable ability of handling people emotion, he doesn’t fit that house at all.
Or maybe he just had a lucky catch and he can’t really realizes what he did of good to make Draco smirk.

And it’s just funny to see that a simple kid can actually make him mad!



And can I say that… Draco just rocks! LOL

Okay, it was quite lame. But Pierce had to work harder to actually figure out the boy. Lucius actually did a good job with his son :p!
Name: Esus reviewed Slytherin Ethics on Oct 31, 2006 07:24 am
Chapter 3


OMG!

I was so delighted by the small scene at the border of the Forbidden forest! What make me wonder is why Draco actually cared enough to show his point to Ginny about professor Pierce.
And I’m so proud of him and of his cunning brain… he didn’t fell to the little act of the Professor, as instead did Ginny, and it’s a good thing.

Even if I dare say that even Pierce should have known that. So, why he still act all friendly and buddy-buddy with students? Unless he knows something we don’t know.
And it was amazing to see how Draco wrapped Ginny around his finger, without actually trying it. Everybody would have seen he was acting, just to show her that Slytherin can be good actors, but she actually believe him. Maybe because he mentioned Harry and her brother (and how comes he knows just this much about who Ginny hangs on?), so her guard was a bit off?



And, I think Draco’s reasoning about Slytherin was quite brilliant. And I can tell you that this is what I think too about that house. Maybe Slytherin aren’t the best person around: they are vicious and cruel, but at least you know they are honest. And before you disagree… they are honest being always what thy are: plotting, vindictive and cruel. You know always what to expect from them and that they follow only their personal goals. And you always know that the most important thing to the is just… themselves.



And then she repeated again, “You’re not one of them.”




As I thought… the poor Pierce isn’t really a perfect Slytherin. That’s even why he didn’t like the dungeons so much and he still doesn’t like them. And so, I ask you again: why is he a death eater? Does he really believe in a side with a master with such a silly name?

And, how could he really kill his mother?! I’m so shocked about this!

This man is really strange. He’s not emotionless, not like Malfoy senior, and he can’t out aside his guilty feelings. But he still want to be with the dark side. Why? What does he want to prove?

He’s not evil, he has a conscience. And he isn’t able to come to terms with it. In this way, he’s going to be destroyed by it… how can’t he realize this?

Btw, I love this character. There’s more to him than I thought at the beginning, even if I still think his behaviour is too odd to be believable in certain moments. And… a smiling Slytherin?! I’m still shocked!



“If you were anyone else, I would be forced to use an Unforgivable for that mouth.”



*gasp*
Snape, doing exception? Okay, he did all the time with Slytherin, but this is another matter altogether.
And… what does he mean?!
And, why he is asking him to actually do something with Draco? Snape really wants him to join the dark side?

Btw, he’s as clever as ever… and his suggestion about giving to the boy something to care for? Why I have this weird feeling about this?



Snape’s eyebrows furrowed over a deep frown, and he was quiet a very long time. “It’s a dangerous game you play,” he said finally.

“And what game would that be, Severus?”

“Advancing so high in his ranks when it’s painfully obvious you hold so little loyalty for him.”br>


I love this exchange. Because you give us more hints to understand what’s happening. And I can almost see why Snape has this strange behaviour with Pierce. What I can’t really understand is why the two of them are so near, since they are going only to lose by this partnership: Snape was a double agent (and I think he’s still one of them), and Pierce is… well, I don’t know. He doesn’t believe in Voldemort, but he still follows him. Quite a twisted mind, let me say that!

Yeah, they are friends. And Snape actually cares for him… so much that he’s still trying to teach him something. What is going to happen if Pierce learn the lesson?



And… yeah, you gave us some explanations. But, I have even more questions now!
Name: Esus reviewed By Candlelight on Oct 31, 2006 07:24 am
Chapter 2


Merlin, how did he get himself into this mess?



I don’t understand the man. In the prologue, he seemed happy of being in the rank of the Dark Lord, even if a bit disappointed by all that ‘hiding and escaping’ thing. Instead, right now I have the impression I wasn’t a Death Eater for a full and conscious choice, but because he just had to do it.

I don’t want to think he is a double agent too, because it would have been such a easy solution. But I think the guy has still something left of his soul, enough for question his choice of life. Maybe he’s going to surprise me?



And… I was right! Pierce was the one that turned the corner. Even if I don’t think a half-drunken teacher can really be so intimidating. But, if he wants to gain Draco’s trust he doesn’t have to act all happy and kind… on the contrary, that would only make the boy more wary.


I liked how you described the different reactions of the two students: Ginny, being a Weasley and the very sister of her mischievous twins, hid immediately her wand. Instead, Draco seemed just bored, even if I dare say that he was a bit worried about being discovered arguing with a younger witch, and with his wand raised. It’s not like people weren’t looking for a reason to kick him out of the school!


I think you’re doing a fine job with Pierce… he’s more cunning than I thought, a fair enemy to Draco’s intelligence. And the idea of punish them both was just amazing. Pity for the teacher that this will cost him his mission, since I have the feeling the two students are going to became friends spending all that time together (well, I think there will be MORE than one detention, am I right?).


And I liked even how you make the two accepting the detention: Ginny being the understanding one and Draco being utterly pissed off. They are so true!
The only thing that didn’t convince me is Pierce behaviour with Ginny, the morning after. He’s still a professor, you know, and instead he acted like a student. Okay, he has to appear friendly (it’s not like McGonagall is going to accept another Snape, without proper references), but I have the sensation he is too much friendly. Are you sure Draco is going to accept someone that acted like that? But, on the other hand, I think it’s just amazing how you made Ginny and Draco interact immediately after. They actually talked, without saying a single word! Yeah, Ginny wasn’t happy at all about it, but I think this is just a prelude of the deep understanding they are going to have.


Last, I found the story about the candle a bit odd. Too much near the story about Harry’s Mirror of Erised, but it was till fascinating. Moreover, I have this weird feeling someone is going to find her using that candle… and it won’t be a happy meeting!


And now… chapter 3!
Name: Esus reviewed Things Change, Life Goes On on Oct 31, 2006 07:23 am
Chapter 1


I think your description of how things changed after Dumbledore death was quite realistic. In fact, Hogwarts as itself didn’t changed at all, but the atmosphere is utterly different. Moreover, I agree with your choice about McGonagall as the new headmistress, it is the more believable one.

It’s just weird to imagine less student than before, even if I appreciate the nice touch about the laugh on the platform: young people can suffer but they still have faith into the tomorrow., And so, it easy to see there’s still something into them that allows to laugh.

I found interesting Molly’s reaction to the Trio departure and her suggestion to Ginny to move on from Harry. What makes me wonder is Ginny stubbornness about Harry: from the end of the sixth book, I saw the open window they left over their relationship in the future, but I noticed even that Ginny desire something more, that Harry can’t actually give her. She accepted the break up quite easily, agreeing with him, and I had the impression she somewhat woke up from her infatuation and saw how the real Harry was. And even if she still love him, I think she is ready to find something new, more suitable to what she is really looking for. She is a Weasley woman, you know, and she need someone near her that look at her before than everything else and that cares about family and her more than other people. And Harry won’t ever be able to do so, because since he was a little boy he had to care about others before himself (well, with the Dursley he really didn’t have the possibility of being a spoiled, self centered child, don’t you agree?). Instead, I always thought that Molly would have been the last one to dissuade her daughter from loving Harry… unless, you know, with Dumbledore’s death she changed completely her mind. Quite plausible, especially since she wants her daughter to be happy.


This time even Ginny’s quiet exclamation joined the surprised whispers erupting through the room. If she didn’t think he looked like the type to be defending against any Dark Arts, he certainly didn’t look like a Slytherin of all things. He was smiling, for Merlin’s sake!


This line is just amazing! I was stunned by the choice too! You know, a thing is knowing Pierce is a bad guy, another is believing it after the description you gave! And he is SMILING! *LOL*

I can see how all the people around were stunned by that news. What I still wonder is how he could apply for the position and how he managed to make McGonagall to hire him. There’s someone working behind we don’t know of? Or Snape told to the woman everything and so she acted according to the plan to see where things were going to? Something Dumbledore would have done…
And Ginny’s reaction to Draco… that was just stunning! I was able to feel her rage as it was mine. What I can’t possibly understand is why she’s the only one this angered about Malfoy’s presence in the school (not that I mind it, you know *grins*). Is it possible the e was the only one complaining about it? Also, I loved how you make Dean act with here: his “passive” behaviour was the right move to fight her raising temper.

So, Draco bought is way back to school. Why am I not surprised? I’m still a bit sceptical about the lack of reaction for the other students and I wonder why McGonagall didn’t say a single word about Malfoy’s presence at school. And, how comes that Dean and Colin understood immediately what was the matter, while her roommates simply ignored it? It seems as if Ginny was in a parallel dimension, were only a few people actually know what happened.

But since we all know that Draco wasn’t there because he bought his way back, but because he didn’t want to join the Dark side, I almost pity him. The poor guy came back, even knowing everybody would be against him, especially the last Weasley left at school. And when he met her, he thought of acting coolly and just ignore her… come one, that was the worst action ever! That was the best way to ignite her temper again!

Btw, I liked how you described their “meeting” and how shocked was Ginny, both by his mere presence and by his odd behaviour. I absolutely adored how you describe Draco’s rage raising and how Ginny, too busy into screaming her rage, didn’t noticed it. And I’m ready to bet that the third unknown person, breaking the stall between them, was Professor Pierce. Am I right?

Okay, that was a stupid question. I’m going to have my answer immediately, with chapter 2! Btw, I really like your style and how you can portray emotions and actions in such a realistic way. And, more important thing, I think you’re doing a great job with the characters: they are quite IC till now and so I can see that Draco and Ginny’s interaction won’t be easy at all, but that they are going to spend even too much time together.

Last thing and then I leave you. I can’t believe you actually write such a long chapter! It doesn’t happen so often and I’m so happy for it, especially because you let the narration flow with the right rhythm, without rushing thing to get straight to the end and to the important episode of the chapter (which is the closing meeting, I think). I was never bored and I think you left here and there enough detail of what it is really happening inside people and what’s waiting for us next. It is interesting that Ginny blames Draco more because of Harry disappearing than Dumbledore death. Sure, it is always the first thing she mentions, but I can easily see she is so angry basically because now she’s alone, she doesn’t feel protected and she doesn’t know what to expect from the future, especially because of the darkness coming from outside.

Btw, I can’t turn off my eyes from my monitor, you have all my attention! I’m lucky there are so many pages before I have to start and beg you for the new chapter!
Name: Esus reviewed Things Change, Life Goes On on Oct 31, 2006 07:18 am
/* Prologue


Oh, I love the prologue!

The descriptions follows well the narration, giving a not too much defined setting: we know the Death Eater are into hiding and that they are obliged to move continuously from a place to another. There’s a new addition to the dark side rank, Pierce, and I imagine he will be an important character in the future, especially because of his task.

I liked how you described Lucius reaction about Voldemort’s plan: he was utterly pissed off by it and he had a hard time hiding it. So, he was so disappointed because the Dark Lord preferred someone else to him, or just because he cares for his son (his only heir… maybe it was just that, but I’m not sure)? Well, right now it doesn’t matter, since he was put out of the scene by Voldemort choice. What makes me wonder is… Snape isn’t going to warn Draco about Pierce? Or you think he now has betrayed the Order and will obey only to his old master? You know, I have the feeling Dumbledore knew about Draco’s task and it’s easy to guess that he ordered to Snape to help the boy… as if the unbreakable vow wasn’t enough for the poor man.

So, you said events will follow HBP, so I think the big event Voldemort refers to was Dumbledore death, wasn’t it? So, we both agree that Snape won’t be punished for being the one that actually killed the man… and we both agree over the fact that Draco won’t be killed because of his lack of action.

Actually, you’re the first person that thinks the same as me over this. Basically everybody claim Draco as death after his failure, which can be a bit stupid. I don’t think that Voldemort really expected that Draco would have been successful into that task, especially since the Dark Lord himself failed in it more than once.

What surprise me it that Draco is still alive after showing his intent of not joining the Dark side. How comes that? He was “ready” to kill his headmaster, but now he changed his mind? Or he agreed to that plan because of other reason (as I always suspected, btw)? And he’s going to go back to school?! Well, since you made Voldemort ask to Snape about his job… Pierce is going to replace him?

But… Draco is really coming back to Hogwarts?! And you expect him to go though the year alive?

That’s weird… *mumble*


Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 11, 2006 05:58 pm
Long live the energizer bunny! Great chapter. I'm enjoying the relationship between Draco and Ginny. They're developing a good rapport.
Name: saucy reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 05:26 pm
Congrats on finally seeing the energizer bunny, and I loved the chapter!
Name: Blair reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 04:59 pm
Bravo! I adore this story, I truly do. You write a very believable Draco and the dynamic between him and Ginny is impeccably done. I wait patiently for the next chapter.
Name: marquesa reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 09:39 am
hah! its excellent I was smiling the whole time I was reading it. especially when Ginny wouldn't give Draco his broom back, I really liked that, don't know why..liked the whole feel of the chapter actually, I think confused Ginny is really amusing and I like Draco annoying her too. I dont care what peirce is up to anymore just keep writing more scenes like that!
Name: creamy_heart reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 07:43 am
Like Ginny at one point in this chapter, curiosity is EATING me alive!!!! What happened with Malfoy over the summer?? Please! aargh! *clears throat* Anyway, fabulous story; I'm addicted. Do keep updates coming frequently please... yeah? :)
Name: Moonyk reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 04:12 am
First off, I don't know WHY you're apprehensive! Great awesome pure DG interaction! So what's Draco trying to do now?! All friendly and teasing and oh I'm scared for him!

This has GOT to be one of my fav chapters so far. It's all about them you know? And I love how Draco got them into the Restricted Section. Pure Slytherin.

Cheerios!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 02:39 am
I think this chapter shows them working starting to come together on their thinking. I liked it. I can not wait to see where it will go from here.
Name: die Loreley reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 10, 2006 12:07 am
If you want to make the 'candle-maker's (I personally liked that touch -- but I understand (from my sister) that it gets really annoying when I express cleverness in other languages :P) name, you might consider changing his first name from Henrik to Heinrich. Henrik reminds me of Ibsen... I think Ibsen was Norwegian, but anyway...

*And* (sorry... tell me if it gets annoying) die Wichtigkeit is concern/importance/meaningfulness/interest in German -- if you want, 'candle of concern' would be (die) Kerze der Wichtigkeit.

Come to think of it, I haven't seen the energizer bunny in ages either. Will watch out for it.

I want to yell "just snog already!" to Draco and Ginny, but they're obviously not up to that stage yet *pouts*. But... soon? I also want Ginny to go back to have a squiz at the candle, but I understand her not wanting to. I like them talking, and even if they find odd reasons to keep talking, and just spending time together, I'll be happy. ^_^

I'm sorry for my odd tangents and I know they get really annoying, so just tell me to shut up if they do. :$
Name: Rashonda reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 09, 2006 10:02 pm
Things have yet to come full circle. But, I really like the progression that you've taken in there budding relationship. They've come an exceptionally long way, since he manhandled her twice in this chapter and she didn't hex or threaten him, but actually listened to what he had to say. Draco is so moody, one moment he's being somewhat carefree and the next he's shooting daggers at you. Right now Ginny still has preconceived notions of what/who Draco is, and what she believes his family has molded him into but he's surprising her when he does something unDracoish. Only thing that surprised me there was no Jon in this chapter, I was looking forward to them possibly having a follow-up convo. But all the same, it flowed great together. I enjoyed it, and look forward to the next chapter. Nite.
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 09, 2006 07:02 pm
Darco is just soooooo complex. I mean, how can he NOT occupy her thoughts?
Great chapter. I like how he's slowly evolving into someone less... evil? Mean? Snarky? Into someone she might be able to care for, It's gradual, but it's there. Well done.
Name: Embellished reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 09, 2006 05:32 pm
I loved Draco in this chapter--you really captured him in all his annoying, pratish glory. And I kind of like that Pierce didn't appear at all. That shows that Draco and Ginny can manage to make things progress without him. Thanks for the update!
Name: Ada Achlys reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 09, 2006 05:20 pm
I totally LOVED this chapter. Great interactions between the two of them. I think it is great that the romance is developing slowly and believably. Can't wait for your next!
Name: arabela reviewed Answers...Sort Of on Oct 09, 2006 03:48 pm
hahaha, I saw the energizer bunny on TV the other day, too, and had exactly the same reaction =P

ooo, I've been waiting for some sort of breaking point! PLEASEKEEPGOING! I love this story!

I think it's brilliant how he got them in there, LOVEDIT. I'd totally do that, too.

And I like what he said, a lot, too. Just the way you worded it was really cool.

can'twaitformore!

Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed Found Out on Oct 01, 2006 08:50 pm
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm so happy. Looking forward to reading more. I'm really enjoying this story. Good luck on your classes.
Name: ithinkthereforeiam reviewed Found Out on Oct 01, 2006 06:58 pm
wow, i didn't think Draco would actually find out he'd been drugged! I like that he did, though, it makes this story stand out from others. This plot is original, and I just wanted you to know that you're doing a fantastic job with this story. :)
Name: Embellished reviewed Found Out on Sep 30, 2006 07:27 am
The title of the chapter had me thinking Draco would figure out more about Pierce than he did. Ah well. It is probably too early still. He needs to be fully caught up in Ginny first. Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter, expecially Ginny's role in Draco figuring out what had happened the night before. Thanks for the update!
Name: arabela reviewed Found Out on Sep 29, 2006 06:28 pm
heyagain!

hehe, love this chapter, really illustrates the title, same as the last one - Not Quite Fate. meh =P really cracked me up, though, when Ginny hit the nail on the head. Lord knows she'll be back to wonder wtf actually went down, lol.

gah, now i remember why i hate reading works in progress, updatesoon!!

You must login (register) to review.