Name: chiara13 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 16, 2009 01:51 pm
Beautiful chapter! Loved the new developments and how the characters are getting progressively more flashed out and complex. Please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the characters seem more complex :D
Name: smileATtheSUN reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 13, 2009 01:09 am
yay! there was actual conscious romance between the two. I loved how charged and vulnerable their conversation was just before the kiss, and how they both knew what they were doing. I'm not expecting a complete 180 in their relationship, nor do I want it, but it's lovely that it's changing. great chapter. I'm glad Ginny's getting most of her memories back. please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you get why it's slow. A little more progresses between them each chapter.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 12, 2009 01:06 pm
this is a really good story. i just started reading it and now its stopped jjust wen d and g got together. so PLEASE write more. its fantastic
Author's Response: Glad you like it. The next chapter took a little longer than I expected, but it's up now!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 07:13 pm
WOW!
THat''s all my mind allows me to say right now...WOW!
This was really great you know?
The memories, the walk everything was brilliant, the muggle way he had to carry her because they didn't have their wands, it was all great
but the kisses?That was incredible!
I do hope they do this again in the next chapter, although you jumped from the first contact right to a few hours later, and i would prefer if you had described the kiss better and spent more time with the kissing scene, but still it was amazing.
=D
Congratulations and thank you for posting this!
=)
kisses
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 06:38 pm
AMAZING STORY! I'm falling more in love with every chapter! And I think the relationship between Draco and Ginny is perfect for the story (though the kissing scene was fantastic!!)!
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 04:22 pm
I think this was the perfect time for the kissing - first she needed to let go of Blaise, to grieve for what was lost, to remember what had been forgotten - then things could inch forward between them. I'm looking forward to Draco's POV - I think there's a lot of depth to his feelings for Ginny that we don't see from her POV. All in all, an excellent chapter! Oh, and bonus points for mentioning 'Bones' in your Author's Note!
Author's Response: I agree, I think Draco's thoughts and feeling are, in a way, even more complex than Ginny's. And I love Bones! :)