Name: kcc852 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 08, 2009 11:27 am
I just started reading this story today and read the whole thing through. It is fantastic! I love how you show their inner thoughts and have a very well thought out plot. It is so well written. I was almost crying at the end of this chapter! I cannot wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the plot and reading all their thoughts/feelings; sometimes I worry I get too into all that haha. Next chapter is up now :)
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 03, 2009 08:12 am
I think I'm going to cry, Elizabeth! What an emotionally charged chapter. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, Carrie :) Glad you liked it.
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 02, 2009 11:09 pm
wow i cannot wait for the next chapter since the prologue ive been hooked. great job!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is up now :)
Name: sunshine_jolly reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 02, 2009 09:30 pm
great fic ... I found it a few weeks ago and it has me captivated ever since. I've even read the original version. You did a fantastic job.
To the fact of having sex after Will was taken away, I can assure you, it is a pretty "normal" way to react.
There are even scientific studies which say that people in trastic situations, such as wars or near-death-experiences, almost always have sex. I don't know exactly why, but I think your explanation of Draco and Ginny's reason is one of it. Please keep going, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yeah, that's what I was thinking, about the sex. I've heard of people having sex in sometimes tragic situations. Thanks for the review!
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 07:18 pm
Hey, I just read all of this. It started off kinda slow, but it picked up after a few chapters, and I'm excited to see how it ends up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Yeah, it took a few chapters to get everything in motion - not to mention, to get Ginny and Draco to do more than argue ;) Thanks for the review!
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 07:13 pm
great story! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: star_in_the_sky reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 06:35 pm
Wow, I can't believe there aren't more reviews, this story is so awesome! I can't wait for an update. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is up now :)
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 04:30 pm
I felt ripped apart with Draco at the end. In a way I want him to realize his feelings for her but I think him coming to grips with his past and his parentage first is actually a better idea. I guess the idea is that he has to reach absolute rock bottom before he can make a life with her and Will. And the scene where they slept together was perfect. The despair they felt was palpable. As a reader, I want to see them have their happy ending, but I appreciate the difficulty of the journey to get there.
Author's Response: I agree, Draco's got a lot to deal with, in terms of his past, etc., before he can really allow himself to love Ginny. Or rather, realize he loves Ginny haha. Anyhow, thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Name: erinem reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 12:09 pm
I loved the end. Draco's conflicted loyalty toward his father and unable to accept his betrayal until the next morning... And then breaking down like that at the end. Very good writing and everything felt very real.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Draco's definitely dealing with a lot right now. Thanks for reading :)
Name: grumpirah reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 12:56 am
geez wasn't expecting that. personally i would have turned Daddy Dearest in ages ago but if draco wants to be a glutton for punishment....to each his own.
Author's Response: Haha yeah, that probably would have been the smarter decision. But then, I think Draco's a little blind when it comes to his dad, seeing as he practically hero-worships him and all.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Aug 31, 2009 02:24 pm
WOW!
This is the first time i'm going to say this and i hope it's not the last
This fic REALLY has a plot!
I mean, usually it has some plot but i'm more concerned abut romnce and kisses and all that smut and all...but this is AMAZINGLY well written!
I mean, i've actually read everything, i've been paying attention, i worry about other characters such as evil Lucius and it's simply amazing!
never i was attracted to a fic's plot before!
I have to gve it to you girl: You're incredible!
All hats off!
Congratulations!
and thank you very VERY much for posting this!
kisses
Author's Response: Thank you! I can honestly say this has to be one of the best reviews I've ever received :) I'm glad the plot has been interesting, it took me a while to fully develop everything. Thanks for reading!