Name: girlMalfoy reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 26, 2009 09:30 pm
Let me start by saying that this is a really good story. ^^ Your plot is well thought out, and you know exactly what you're doing. I love the the little mysteries that you leave unsolved at the end of a chapter. Like a good suspense novel you know how to keep your readers guessing ;)
Your writing style simply blows my mind; you have an effortless way with words that completely bowls me over. Your characterizations, I think, are spot on. I adore your Lucius. I think he's my favourite Lucius ever written and you've written him remarkably well for a supporting character. Actually, I've seen main characters with less depth. You keep them true to the Malfoy characterization (Draco and Lucius) while imbuing them with heart and hidden facets to their personalities. ^_^
I love your D/G and the adorable way they refuse to call each other by their given names. It reminds me of Anna's bodyguards in Chasing Liberty -- how they'd flirt on a last name basis, lol!
I'm pretty much a sucker for any story involving children, but you've brought Will to life for me and made him a very tangible force for keeping D/G together.
Ginny's character is a delightful balance between stubborn and impetuous, and I always look forward to her POVs (not that Draco's are lacking in any way ;P). I love how you turned her Gryffindor recklessness into an admirable trait ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my Lucius; he can be difficult to write, but I love to make him interesting and not stereotypically evil. And I am also very amused with how they call each other only by their last name; I haven't heard of Chasing Liberty, actually, but now I want to check it out! Thanks again for your wonderful review.
Name: paisley reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 20, 2009 07:04 am
yes, there is a sequel!!!!
Author's Response: Yep, and since this fic is just about done (or, will be tomorrow probably), I am hoping to start it next week!
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 18, 2009 09:24 pm
o yay!!! please tell me they finally start calling eachother by their first names soon! lol such a good chapter again! update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, I am actually so glad you noticed that, because when and why they start calling each other by their first names is something I've been very deliberate about. To me, it really means something as to how they subconsciously feel about each other. You might've noticed that Draco already thinks of Ginny as 'Ginny' though he doesn't often use that name when he talks to her yet. Anyway, enough rambling, I'm just kind of happy someone picked up on that :) Thanks for the review! Next chapter should be up tomorrow.
Name: erinem reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 18, 2009 12:22 pm
Yay!! This chapter is so excellent. The entire scene in the Riddle House was perfect, and I remember thinking that the person in the death eater mask was Draco, but then obviously it wasn't... But now I'm sure I know who it is. And I'm delighted by that little twist. If I'm right, anyway.
Great job! Thanks for the read. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :) Well, when we find out for sure who the Death Eater in the mask is, you have to tell me if you were right! We don't find out in this fic, but in the first couple of chapters of the sequel, which should be up as soon as this fic is over.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 17, 2009 07:49 pm
This was the most beautiful chapter so far!
I loved their reunion
The queen of all cliffs finally got me back up on my feet and got to stop worrying about what would happen to Will and Gin and Draco
I loved this!
For a sec i was so worried when Gin woke up, i thought it was an illusion, tthat everyone was polyjuiced then i was so happy everything was real, i was hanging for most of the chapter, but when they hugged, it was magical, i had tears on my eyes
This was brilliant, beautiful, perfect!
I can't wait to see them going back home with Will
Thank you so ery very much for posting this!
I loved it!
It was worth be up until 2 am!
=D
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
You're a terrific writer!
Please write more soon!
kisses
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the reunion scene, it was super hard to right because I wanted it to be just right ;) Wow, that would have been creepy if everyone was polyjuiced, though it's an cool idea! Anyway, thanks for the review :) Next chapter should be up tomorrow.