Reviews For The Enemy of Souls
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Oct 03, 2009 03:18 am
=(
pity
i really like complete scenes
i just about go nutters when they just jump like a week, month, or anything!

but it's nice to know it will be up later this week!
=D

i can't wait to see how this goes!

kisses
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Sep 27, 2009 02:02 pm
Anyway, point is, don't worry, because there's still lots to happen for them in the sequel!
Can the sequel be like one of those tv shows?where it will pick up where it left off?
or at least one of them relives the memory of this day?
that would be grand because i love when things like that hapen!
=D

Anyway, i hope it doesn't take too long!
I really do enjoy your writing and it would be sad to go too long without it!


kisses

Author's Response: Nope, it's not going to pick up where it left off, but seriously, it's not a big deal. I mean, this day they spend toegther isn't that special. There will be plenty of scenes like that in the sequel, which should be out later this week.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Sep 26, 2009 10:45 am
YES i did!
I loved it!
=D

I was trying not to be too happy about the reunion, the polyjuice was kinda too much, but i didn't wanna get my hopes up!

YAAY!!!
I'll be checking the site every 5 seconds so i don't miss when the chapter comes up
;D

thank you!

kisses
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Sep 15, 2009 11:11 am
=)
Thanks!
I already had my hands in my heart as i was reading the new chapter1
You really are an amazing writer!
i mean if it wasn't for the wizrding world and all that belonging to J.K. rowling you should definately get published!
Congratulations on your skills, you're amazing!
;D

kisses
Name: Incognito reviewed Prologue on Jul 16, 2009 11:32 am
Oh and I think I know who Harry's Secret Keeper is! *grins* I shan't give it away, but I can bet my hat that it isn't a Gryffindor or Draco.
Name: Incognito reviewed Prologue on Jul 16, 2009 04:09 am
Ron is alive! I know it! Maybe Harry saved him ...somehow. :P

Also, are we ever going to find out where Harry went and who this Greengrass person is and what she was doing snooping around? It'd be kinda neat if we discovered that where Harry was hiding all along was *inside* the Ministry. Of course you would have to be able to explain *how* he could hide in the Ministry, undetected...

Keep up the writing! :)

Author's Response: All I can say, don't count Ron out! As far as I'm concerned, anyone whose body has not been found could still be out there somewhere... ;) We are definitely going to find out about Harry and Daphne - where they've been, what they've been up to. It won't be for a little while, though, in fact, it may not even be until the sequel of this fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Prologue on Feb 17, 2007 02:32 am
~This is going to be intresting.~
Name: shalita reviewed Prologue on Feb 16, 2007 05:18 am
Oooooo.... a baby born at 34 weeks should delivery fairly quickly. (I currently work in the OB unit as a student nurse.) I hope Ron's ready for this. ;) I'm so happy you continued this story! It's really quite good and hopefully you'll have more time now that you're used to the swing of college life. :) Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Oh, good, that's what I thought (about the baby being born) but I wasn't entirely sure I was right about that. I hope everything else is realistically correct; I tried to do my research. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and I'm glad you like it!
Name: V_is_for_Violet reviewed Prologue on Feb 16, 2007 02:02 am
i really like this story..can't wait to see where it's going..
Name: Black Alnair reviewed Prologue on Sep 04, 2006 06:15 pm
I am sufficiently intrigued. Ready to read the next part!
Name: Kisou reviewed Prologue on Aug 31, 2006 10:47 pm
I had a hard time telling the difference between the fic and the AN at the first. You might want to put a bar either at the top of your fic or the bottom of the AN as well as a few more spaces for clarity.

Other than that, this seems good. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks about that; I noticed it too and fixed it. Thanks for reading!
Name: WG13 reviewed Prologue on Aug 28, 2006 04:11 pm
Great start... love the fact that Harry isn't some deranged, love sick ass... as for bringing in Daphne Greengrass, fab move... her character is hardly used at all.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I quite like Harry, so I try to stay true to his character as much as possible. I love to use Daphne; unfortunately, her character isn't in this fic or the sequel much, but I love to develop her character. I see her as this small little blonde girl with a lot of sass!
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