Name: Incognito reviewed
Chapter Five on Jul 16, 2009 03:27 am
Oh my stars! this is my favourite chapter. Ron and Tracey arguing over who will deliver the baby, and Malfoy diving in front of a spell so that he would no longer be indebted to Hermione -- I was laughing my arse off! It literally fell off from all the laughter. Ginny trying to slap Malfoy awake was a nice touch too! :P
My favourite line from the next chapter is when Draco wakes up and asks Ginny what happened and she tells him he saved Hermione's life. His response:
“I did? Oh, thank Merlin,” he breathed, shutting his eyes momentarily. “We’re even, Granger.”
Priceless! --Now for me to read the rest.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you liked this chapter; it was a lot of fun to write!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter Five on Jan 18, 2008 01:21 am
Oh no... Carina's gonna die isn't she? I really like her but I'm guessing it's a necessary plot point.
Name: Kiiraena reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 20, 2007 12:34 pm
Haha. I love how you characterised Tracey. Like, I love some of her lines, particularly the one about being cowardly Slytherin. And Draco! Ha! It's so him to dive in front of a curse so that he wouldn't have to be indebted to Hermione anymore. Can't wait til the next chapter comes out. Hopefully it won't take too long this time?
Author's Response: Yeah, that just struck me as really funny, that Tracey and Ron would both rather fight Death Eaters than deliver a baby. I can hardly blame them, I think I'd rather fight DEs than deliver a baby! Next chapter should be up soon!
Name: arabella reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 20, 2007 07:13 am
“Meaning of the two of us here, you’re the courageous one,” Tracey said grimly. “So I will be the cowardly Slytherin and hold back the Death Eaters, and you, being the brave man that you are, will deliver this baby.”
I LOVE THIS LINE!! keep up the awesome witty writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you liked Tracey then, she took over this chapter just a bit.
Name: abby reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 20, 2007 04:26 am
wahooooo...and off we go...poor Ron! well update!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Ron! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: abby reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 17, 2007 04:46 pm
Ohhhhhhh, MAN!!! I love it! Its the best...UPDATE!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter should be up soon.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 17, 2007 07:57 am
~OMG...I need more.~
Author's Response: Lol more should be up soon! In the meantime, you can check ou my lj for cookies.
Name: ronlover reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 16, 2007 12:15 pm
Yah! OMG. Must know what happens. :) Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it... next chapter should be up soon!
Name: kellbell930 reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 15, 2007 09:54 pm
hmmm very interesting...cant wait to see what happens with the baby! this is 8 months after the last chapter right? cant wait for more! update soon!
Author's Response: Hmm let's see... it's about five months after the last chapter; Carina was about three months pregnant in the last chapter. Thanks for reading, next chapter should be up soon!