Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Eighteen on Sep 17, 2009 07:49 pm
This was the most beautiful chapter so far!
I loved their reunion
The queen of all cliffs finally got me back up on my feet and got to stop worrying about what would happen to Will and Gin and Draco
I loved this!
For a sec i was so worried when Gin woke up, i thought it was an illusion, tthat everyone was polyjuiced then i was so happy everything was real, i was hanging for most of the chapter, but when they hugged, it was magical, i had tears on my eyes
This was brilliant, beautiful, perfect!
I can't wait to see them going back home with Will
Thank you so ery very much for posting this!
I loved it!
It was worth be up until 2 am!
=D
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
You're a terrific writer!
Please write more soon!
kisses
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the reunion scene, it was super hard to right because I wanted it to be just right ;) Wow, that would have been creepy if everyone was polyjuiced, though it's an cool idea! Anyway, thanks for the review :) Next chapter should be up tomorrow.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter Seventeen on Sep 16, 2009 10:12 pm
where is the rest of this story... i need to know, what between between the death eatter, draco, will, and the rest of the lot.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter Nine on Sep 16, 2009 08:37 pm
these last couple of chapters, so far. i read this story on another site. i'm lovin' thsi plot, all over again. great job!!!
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed
Chapter Seventeen on Sep 15, 2009 01:04 pm
DAMMIT!! lol i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!! please update soon!!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Seventeen on Sep 15, 2009 12:17 pm
Queen and royal master of all cliffs!
You are amazing!
I repeat my early statement you should definately get published!
I mean, not only the plot is amazing and keeps us wired, but the cliffs are just OUT OF THIS WORLD AMAZING!
Seriously, i have never seen any author, fic or book, write such amazing cliffs.
I mean to look into a lunatic's eyes and see only craziness, then have to support yourself on a face that looks so much like one you trust but that you know is quite the opposite?
That was GENIUS!!!!
in the beggining i was ansious to read and around the middle i was wrapped up around the whole Draco situation, i thought i was never gonna end!
And then this ending!
Just WOW!!!
Really really incredible!
All hats off for you!
Please tell me the next chater won't take so long to vome out, i'm already going crazy with anticipation!
Thank you so much for posting such an amazing story, i don't even have words to describe it.
kisses
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Prologue on Sep 15, 2009 11:11 am
=)
Thanks!
I already had my hands in my heart as i was reading the new chapter1
You really are an amazing writer!
i mean if it wasn't for the wizrding world and all that belonging to J.K. rowling you should definately get published!
Congratulations on your skills, you're amazing!
;D
kisses
Name: kcc852 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 08, 2009 11:27 am
I just started reading this story today and read the whole thing through. It is fantastic! I love how you show their inner thoughts and have a very well thought out plot. It is so well written. I was almost crying at the end of this chapter! I cannot wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the plot and reading all their thoughts/feelings; sometimes I worry I get too into all that haha. Next chapter is up now :)
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 03, 2009 08:12 am
I think I'm going to cry, Elizabeth! What an emotionally charged chapter. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, Carrie :) Glad you liked it.
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 02, 2009 11:09 pm
wow i cannot wait for the next chapter since the prologue ive been hooked. great job!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is up now :)
Name: sunshine_jolly reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 02, 2009 09:30 pm
great fic ... I found it a few weeks ago and it has me captivated ever since. I've even read the original version. You did a fantastic job.
To the fact of having sex after Will was taken away, I can assure you, it is a pretty "normal" way to react.
There are even scientific studies which say that people in trastic situations, such as wars or near-death-experiences, almost always have sex. I don't know exactly why, but I think your explanation of Draco and Ginny's reason is one of it. Please keep going, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yeah, that's what I was thinking, about the sex. I've heard of people having sex in sometimes tragic situations. Thanks for the review!
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 07:18 pm
Hey, I just read all of this. It started off kinda slow, but it picked up after a few chapters, and I'm excited to see how it ends up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Yeah, it took a few chapters to get everything in motion - not to mention, to get Ginny and Draco to do more than argue ;) Thanks for the review!
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 07:13 pm
great story! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: star_in_the_sky reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 06:35 pm
Wow, I can't believe there aren't more reviews, this story is so awesome! I can't wait for an update. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is up now :)
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 04:30 pm
I felt ripped apart with Draco at the end. In a way I want him to realize his feelings for her but I think him coming to grips with his past and his parentage first is actually a better idea. I guess the idea is that he has to reach absolute rock bottom before he can make a life with her and Will. And the scene where they slept together was perfect. The despair they felt was palpable. As a reader, I want to see them have their happy ending, but I appreciate the difficulty of the journey to get there.
Author's Response: I agree, Draco's got a lot to deal with, in terms of his past, etc., before he can really allow himself to love Ginny. Or rather, realize he loves Ginny haha. Anyhow, thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Name: erinem reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 12:09 pm
I loved the end. Draco's conflicted loyalty toward his father and unable to accept his betrayal until the next morning... And then breaking down like that at the end. Very good writing and everything felt very real.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Draco's definitely dealing with a lot right now. Thanks for reading :)
Name: grumpirah reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Sep 01, 2009 12:56 am
geez wasn't expecting that. personally i would have turned Daddy Dearest in ages ago but if draco wants to be a glutton for punishment....to each his own.
Author's Response: Haha yeah, that probably would have been the smarter decision. But then, I think Draco's a little blind when it comes to his dad, seeing as he practically hero-worships him and all.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Sixteen on Aug 31, 2009 02:24 pm
WOW!
This is the first time i'm going to say this and i hope it's not the last
This fic REALLY has a plot!
I mean, usually it has some plot but i'm more concerned abut romnce and kisses and all that smut and all...but this is AMAZINGLY well written!
I mean, i've actually read everything, i've been paying attention, i worry about other characters such as evil Lucius and it's simply amazing!
never i was attracted to a fic's plot before!
I have to gve it to you girl: You're incredible!
All hats off!
Congratulations!
and thank you very VERY much for posting this!
kisses
Author's Response: Thank you! I can honestly say this has to be one of the best reviews I've ever received :) I'm glad the plot has been interesting, it took me a while to fully develop everything. Thanks for reading!
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
Chapter Fifteen on Aug 29, 2009 03:16 pm
NOOOO!!! how could you? worst (or best) cliffie ever. please do hurry up and upload the next chapter. i really like this story and your style of writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it! Next chapter's up already :p
Name: WHITEWITCH3 reviewed
Chapter Thirteen on Aug 17, 2009 06:00 am
I'm looking forward to reading this so much as I've heard nothing but good reviews! I'll review when I've finished. Have you started the sequels?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're excited! I have the first couple of chapters sketched out (meaning very rought draft) for the sequel, but otherwise all I have is a plot outline. I'm looking to start it as soon as I'm done with this one, however.
Name: chiara13 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 16, 2009 01:51 pm
Beautiful chapter! Loved the new developments and how the characters are getting progressively more flashed out and complex. Please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the characters seem more complex :D
Name: smileATtheSUN reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 13, 2009 01:09 am
yay! there was actual conscious romance between the two. I loved how charged and vulnerable their conversation was just before the kiss, and how they both knew what they were doing. I'm not expecting a complete 180 in their relationship, nor do I want it, but it's lovely that it's changing. great chapter. I'm glad Ginny's getting most of her memories back. please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you get why it's slow. A little more progresses between them each chapter.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 12, 2009 01:06 pm
this is a really good story. i just started reading it and now its stopped jjust wen d and g got together. so PLEASE write more. its fantastic
Author's Response: Glad you like it. The next chapter took a little longer than I expected, but it's up now!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 07:13 pm
WOW!
THat''s all my mind allows me to say right now...WOW!
This was really great you know?
The memories, the walk everything was brilliant, the muggle way he had to carry her because they didn't have their wands, it was all great
but the kisses?That was incredible!
I do hope they do this again in the next chapter, although you jumped from the first contact right to a few hours later, and i would prefer if you had described the kiss better and spent more time with the kissing scene, but still it was amazing.
=D
Congratulations and thank you for posting this!
=)
kisses
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 06:38 pm
AMAZING STORY! I'm falling more in love with every chapter! And I think the relationship between Draco and Ginny is perfect for the story (though the kissing scene was fantastic!!)!
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter Fourteen on Aug 11, 2009 04:22 pm
I think this was the perfect time for the kissing - first she needed to let go of Blaise, to grieve for what was lost, to remember what had been forgotten - then things could inch forward between them. I'm looking forward to Draco's POV - I think there's a lot of depth to his feelings for Ginny that we don't see from her POV. All in all, an excellent chapter! Oh, and bonus points for mentioning 'Bones' in your Author's Note!
Author's Response: I agree, I think Draco's thoughts and feeling are, in a way, even more complex than Ginny's. And I love Bones! :)