Name: jarofseashells97 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2006 02:14 pm
wow, that was fast! and poor draco! this is going it=n a completely different direction than i imagined, but in a good way. i kinda thought your first chapter would have made a great one-shot, but continuing in the same direction would have made for a pointlessly drawn out story. i applaud your decision to shift gears, even if it was a little abrupt.
Name: new moon reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2006 01:39 pm
she needs to be with draco!!!
not steve DRACO!
that is all
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2006 12:01 pm
Aww so bittersweet. Very nice. Update when Real Life allows.
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2006 10:08 am
Wow what a twist in the story... Is Draco going to make a reappearance? Is Annabelle truly Steve's kid?
Author's Response: Yes, Draco will make another appearance and yes, Annabelle is truly Steve's kid.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2006 09:24 am
Well, it certainly wasn't simple at all ;) lol The last few hours that D and G had together was so bittersweet--the pretending and the snuggling. I'm surprised that Draco took it laying down instead of fighting with Ginny to be with him. Good job, I look forward to th e next installment!
Name: LadyMarmalade reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 08, 2006 05:18 am
I liked it. yeah it could be a onshot but I'm looking foward to more. And if theres a guy like Steve...he definantly needs to be sent my way lol. Really cute! good job
~Ashley
Name: WG13 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 07, 2006 09:54 am
Damm she made it too easy for him... most women would have killed a guy for saying stuff like that to them...
Looking forward to seeing where u are going with this.
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 07, 2006 06:05 am
Oh man I cant believe she's back with him, he was so cruel. URGH. And this Steve guy sounds great! A Harry with blue eyes. Hehe.
cheers!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 07, 2006 03:00 am
That was good. Feel sorry for steve though..lol! Well good luck! :)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 06, 2006 07:41 pm
AGHG! It was wonderful! Really Really wonderful. I felt SO SO terrible for Steve. If I wan't married I'd ask for his number... WOW! SO powerful. I think I have to say, my favourite line was
"no matter how much she cared for Steve, she would cherish that pain more than any amount of love he could ever give her"
I love the imagery - the 'cherish the pain' bit - WOW!
I can't wait for more! ;)
Name: Nameless reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 06, 2006 05:18 pm
It's really good so far. Just reading this chapter, it sounds like it could be a one-shot.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 06, 2006 05:16 pm
What heartache and pain! I was sad and glad and in denial about their relationship, why can't he ever make it through a relationship without hurting her!? Great short story, I loved it!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 06, 2006 04:55 pm
~WOW. Such an amazing start. I just love it.~