Name: starrysky94 reviewed
Black Knight on Apr 08, 2010 05:16 am
Lorelei is German folklore about a maiden on the Rhein river. :D
Was that deliberate or just random?
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Black Knight on Sep 20, 2009 12:40 am
love the homage to JKR. she is the qyeen afterall
Name: serinah reviewed
Black Knight on Aug 17, 2009 11:11 am
Well, now that's not good. Terry got cursed with the loss of hair, so now what is his promise good anymore? I would really want my knight to act chivalric because he loves me, not because the fear of hair loss is wreaking havok in his subconsciousness.
Name: Olivia reviewed
Black Knight on Aug 08, 2009 06:58 am
Bloody Hermione.
Name: StormyBliss reviewed
Black Knight on Oct 21, 2007 03:59 pm
OK, I know I'm only on Chapter 7 but I just have to get this out of my system... I CAN'T STAND BLAISE! Grr she seems like such a tease. Who does she really want? What was up with the tickling Draco thing??? You only do that to guys you like unless you are a... ya know. And, until the end of this chapter, Ginny seemed like such a loser. Draco was annoying too. What a jerk to do that to Terry! And why would Blaise let him??? I'm not trying to be a troll - I love your writing style and it is a mark of your great writing and characterization skills that I feel as strongly as I do. Hopefully I will change my mind. I promise to read more of the story before I leave another review. :)
Author's Response: Blaise isn't a tease, she's a girl who until recently could have been mistaken for a boy, ^_~, so it's kind of a rush for her to show her feminine side. As for the whys and wherefores of plot and characterization, if you keep reading, I think you'll see the characters in a different light, even though Draco will always be snarky and Slytherin!
Name: Sujeetha reviewed
Black Knight on Jun 14, 2007 12:01 pm
Stupid Hermione,y...y?They were so close.:( *cry cry*
Author's Response: They deserve a better first kiss than against a wall...under a table is much more romantic! :D
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Black Knight on Mar 18, 2007 04:57 am
~The best chapter yet. WOW. I love it.~
Author's Response: Ta, Thanks. I hope you'll say that on a regular basis. ;)
Name: die Loreley reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 05, 2006 12:55 am
Argh! I hate the cat and mouse game that Draco and Ginny are playing. But it makes them getting together so much better... right? I loved you describing Draco as "cat-like". He's such a graceful boy. *sighs wistfully*
The Alopecia Extremis hex made me smile. Because Draco isn't a white knight, but who really wants one, really? He's a perfect best friend and Blaise is very lucky to have him. Ginny cornering him after detention was cute too. I'm glad she decided to give him another chance.
Author's Response: I almost aspirated Diet Coke reading your first comment. Next chap is more snake and bird but I think you'll really, really, enjoy it, and yeah, the harder they fight falling in love, the deeper you sigh when they do. :)
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 03, 2006 10:49 pm
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(Yeah...was rendered incoherent by a swoon-worthy, drool-worthy chapter. Last! Scene! So! Hot! I'm Using! Too many! Exclamation points!)
Author's Response: If you think that was hot, wait until chapter 9, *cackles, then breaks off and looks at calendar- the beta has had 8 for a week, better email!* :D
Name: arabela reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 03, 2006 11:15 am
agggghhh, gah, i went to go to the next chapter and...alas. thats it. =P this is SO FUNNY! I love Blaise, she's great. pleeeaase update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I will definitely send my beta an email, maybe 'double check' to make sure she got the chap. ^_~
Name: Kaija reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 02, 2006 04:58 pm
WHOOHOO. I love the last scene. So hot. :) Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks--neither can I. =] There's dancing with faeries, and the chap after that...well, it's been 6 days since I sent ch 8 to the beta, so I may have to email, lol.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 04:45 pm
"Do you have the same dreams I do, Red? Ones where you and I are a lot more--friendly--and wear a lot less clothing?"
I DO!
Love the Black Knight! Brilliant! ;) I even lovehow he praised Crabbe and Goyle! Love him! ;)
Author's Response: Ta, Thanks! Crabbe and Goyle will grow on you, like fungus, maybe, but by the end of the story you might be mentally patting them on the head, saying, 'that'll do, boys, that'll do' too! =]
Name: jess10 reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 09:35 am
Oooooooh! I love Draco. *sigh*
Author's Response: I'm glad you love Draco...Harry/Ginny shippers will be very unhappy with this story. LOL
Name: cornishpixie reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 06:21 am
Wow, what incredibly bad timing on the part of Hermione. I thought the matchmakes had finally done it, but I guess I was mistaken. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Got to make our couple work for that first kiss! *cough*ch9*coughcough* ^_~
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 11:05 pm
ooh, and I just read your review reply...
Chapter 8??? I am jumping already... ;)
Author's Response: Yay for jumping! (or floating, on faery dust ^_~)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 11:03 pm
ooh finally!
I was a bit worried that he would never do anything. This is such a good chapter!! Can't wait to read more...
Oh, by the way, did you see the BBC version of this? It wasn't original Shakespeare language, but I thought it was quite good...
Unless you're not from England, in which case, never mind.
Author's Response: I watch BBC America on occasion, but I didn't see that. I love the Branagh/Thompson Benedick/Beatrice film version, though!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 08:37 pm
Oh..and now I want more, damn you.
Good job. I love how you're working the Slytherin and the more human girl into Blaise. It works well. And I like you're Luna. Sometime's she's completely conherant, and sometimes, she just decides to drift off. It's a really interesting portrayal of her.
Author's Response: I really do see Luna as a sharp witted Ravenclaw...just a quirky and eccentric one, hee. I'm so glad you like Blaise, since she's virtually an OC, and they're not always popular, lol.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 07:29 pm
Bwah haha. I loved this chapter the first time, and loved it even more the... whatever this time was! Thanks for the regular updates... they are tres amusing, and it is nice to re read an old favorite without having to read the entire thing in one go (like I did the first time!)
Cheers!
Natasha
Author's Response: Fifty chapters in one go! You rock! Some people may never go back and edit a story, but I think if you love it, it's worth it, and I hope you think the story shinier this time around because it's polished! :D
Name: Cocoa reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 06:20 pm
Hurrah! Another wonderful bit of writing. Although I'm strictly Neville/Luna, i think the Luna/Harry you've thrown in is cute. Congrats on another great addition!
Author's Response: Merci! ^_^ Luna/Neville- never read one of those. Is it misfits who see each other as more? In this story, each girl has a different kind of romance. Blaise experiences coup de foudre, falling hard and fast, Ginny falls--and fights admitting it--just as hard while Luna dreams of one boy, until another one proves reality is so much better. ^_^
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 03:40 pm
hahahahhahaha lol that was a great chapter! update real soon! lightning fast! sry a bit hyper at the moment!
Author's Response: Hyper, to me, is another way of saying 'energetic' :D. Thanks!
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 03:05 pm
Ah!! This chapter leaves me wanting so much more! It's getting interesting, but is antagonizing the way this story is moving so slowly towards its destination--you are evil! ;) Give Luna some luv! Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: I sent ch 8 to the beta last night, so I'm crossing fingers it will be polished up in a few days! Next chap is when the romance gets off the ground, so to speak, with Dancing with Faeries! ^_^