Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Sep 20, 2009 07:03 pm
i get the urge to watch romeo and juliet [the leo/claire danes version]. my kingdom for leo dicaprio ::sigh::
Name: Olivia reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Aug 08, 2009 08:17 am
evil boot. pfft, blaise should dump him!
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jun 08, 2007 07:27 am
Aww -- I'm an ardent admirer of alliteration, as well. hehe Well done! :)
Author's Response: And an able alliliteration user as well! Aw, I heart you for that! :)
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Mar 24, 2007 03:15 pm
Ahh, I love this story... I think this is the third time
im reading it... I love a good Shakespeare refference, and this is full of them :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for re-reading it...and if you read this on the original site where dialogue formatting was...less than optimal, shall we say, heh...thank you so much for not mentioning the rough edges I've worked hard to polish! ^_~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Mar 18, 2007 07:15 am
~I am not sure i like this chapter, but i love this story~
Author's Response: I appreciate the honesty! ^_^
Name: DarkSparrow reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Mar 02, 2007 09:56 am
OH I KMNEW IT!! I was like...blue eyed blond hair...Wesley...smooth talker...must me Princess...WELL DONE!!!
Author's Response: Wesley, aka The Dread Pirate Roberts was a great inspiration for a character that isn't THE Wesley (no 't', no Buttercup except, perhaps, a Ravenclaw girl in the future. ;) ) I'm glad you liked him!
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Feb 23, 2007 04:02 pm
Woa, the Wesley connection rocks!
Author's Response: Thank you! Are you a Princess Bride fan too? I think the real 'Dread Pirate Roberts' would grin to think a character was inspired by his roguish charm and wit! ;)
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 14, 2007 05:21 pm
That was an amazing chpter. Simply put.
Author's Response: Simple like diamonds, shiny and perfect! Thank you!
Name: GinNDray07 reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 08, 2007 01:56 pm
lovely story. do continue please
Author's Response: Thank you, I will. My beta's been on vacation, but I'll double check the next chap myself if I have to. ^_^
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 05, 2007 04:21 pm
Another nice chapter! However, sometimes I find myself confused by the paragraphs when you suddenly switch to someone else's thoughts or voice and I have to go back to reread. This subtracts slightly from the great idea you've got here. Your very creative, don't get me wrong! Also, the story gets a bit draggy when you keep going back to the same arguments.. I feel like I've read about the same dancing fiasco for the last three installments! Maybe try making your chapters a littler longer, even if it means you can't update so soon. Please keep going and continue the story, you improve with each chapter.. in fact, this is one of my favorite D/G shakespeare reworks. *hides from glares and hopes she isn't hated*
Author's Response: All concrit is welcome, and the chapters do get longer as the fic goes on. This site doesn't support page breaks, but when you see double paragraph spaces marked with dashes, that signals change from one pov to the next and the first line afterwards tells you who the pov person is and I stay in that pov until the next change marked with another set of double paragraph spaces. Only Draco, Ginny, Luna and Blaise have povs and they revolve in order depending on plot, which will have events from time to time that characters respond to and deal with the consequences from, like real life but more dramatic. ^_^
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 04, 2007 08:45 pm
"...as you wish." When I first started this story I really didn't like that you made Belize a female. Though, I made myself continue, oweing to your creative license. I am so thankful that I did as I have enjoyed and loved every minute! You use and understanding of Shakespeare has been incredible and my favorite stories always include a snarky Draco. I look forward to every update. Please continue quickly and know that your readers find you and your work, fabulous. ~~Kristine~~
Author's Response: Since I find reviewers fabulous, you made me very happy saying that! Thank you, especially for giving Girl!Blaise a chance. If I had started a D/G story after the HBP I wouldn't have created an alternate character, so I'm glad I wrote it after OotP! :D More Shakespeare to come from all sorts of sources, since there's too much too limit to Much Ado.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 04, 2007 12:09 pm
i knew the name Wesley Roberts sounded familar! haha sweet! loved it! great story update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think of him as a 'dead sexy pirate' of a boy. :D
Name: blissfulxsin reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 03, 2007 12:39 pm
rawR. I hate Terry for trying to harm Draco. He needs to learn to get along with his girlfriend's best friend.
Author's Response: Draco is one of those guys that you might jinx for being naughty, but you don't want anyone else doing it! :D He and Terry will learn to get along....but not for a good long while, LOL
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Affection and Aftermath on Jan 03, 2007 12:14 pm
"Don't mind me. I'll just sit here with the door opened, playing chaperone, leafing through Horrible Hexes for Randy Roommates. I'll be fine, as long as I hear no suspicious sounds."
Love, love, LOVE!
I've been hanging out for this to return from its holiday hiatus. Hurrah!
Heh. I love aliteration.
I'd been wondering if Terry Boy was going to try and retaliate after Draco and co. set him up the first time. I'm not sure Draco's really going to listen to Ginny's warning though.
Loved the 'two houses' line, also!
*Does first review dance*
Author's Response: *Throws leftover New Year's confetti* Huzzah for you being the first reviewer! :D I'm an alliteration addict also, amiga, ;) so I couldn't help poking fun at myself.
Yay you like Wesley!