Yay! Sun, sea, lotion and a house all to themselves! What ever will they do?
its really good so far, but it bugs me that you always spell practice wrong, it's not with an s (practise) example: “You can practise on the boys.”
Author's Response: I didn't just take my neighbor's word for it, I googled London children practising their singing and found "allow time to practise" at www.standards.dfes.gov.uk
its really good so far, but it bugs me that you always spell practice wrong, it's not with an s (practise) example: “You can practise on the boys.”
Author's Response:I'm a Yank, but I use UK spelling, and since an English neighbor of mine said she spells it with a 's', I did too. :)
~Really Great Chapter.~
Author's Response: Merci, merci! ^_^
Hahaha... I should be doing english right now - but I just finished health and it's a reward system. Anywho - what I like about this chapter? Lots of things. I'm looking forward to Spain and I'm impressed with all the risdual traits of the different houses running rampit amongst the characters. Beautiful
Author's Response: You know the song 'I'm every woman'? I think every student could probably sing "I'm every House' LOL because doesn't everyone have bits of each House 'traits' just waiting to come out? :D
Encouraging the "passionata" tree and books.. adorable. Can't wait for the holiday in Spain!
Author's Response: I'll get moving and put the chapters into the queue. I put two in last time. (and didn't have any corrections to make *blows on knuckles, rubs them against shirt*) This time I'll shoot for three! :]
Author's Response: I'll get moving and put the chapters into the queue. I put two in last time. (and didn't have any corrections to make *blows on knuckles, rubs them against shirt*) This time I'll shoot for three! :]
They're going in Easter, right? I want to know what Harry and Ron will think!! Hermione's a bit annoying in this story... but I don't mind! Fabulous, fabulous, I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: It's all point of view. Even Ron and Harry find her annoying in the books, lol. It's that Know-All attitude. If you're the one she's defending with it, you like it. If you're on the receiving end...you don't. She loosens up a few buttons by the end of the story, though. :D