Name: die Loreley reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 05, 2006 12:55 am
Argh! I hate the cat and mouse game that Draco and Ginny are playing. But it makes them getting together so much better... right? I loved you describing Draco as "cat-like". He's such a graceful boy. *sighs wistfully*
The Alopecia Extremis hex made me smile. Because Draco isn't a white knight, but who really wants one, really? He's a perfect best friend and Blaise is very lucky to have him. Ginny cornering him after detention was cute too. I'm glad she decided to give him another chance.
Author's Response: I almost aspirated Diet Coke reading your first comment. Next chap is more snake and bird but I think you'll really, really, enjoy it, and yeah, the harder they fight falling in love, the deeper you sigh when they do. :)
Name: jess10 reviewed
Dancing with Faeries on Dec 04, 2006 07:33 pm
Hehe! I loved Luna's "Matchmaking and faeries and Harry...Oh my!" line and Lorelai's "prancing" quip. They made me giggle. Love this story!
Author's Response: Couldn't you see her walking and saying that faster and faster? :D Teachers have their 'personality conflicts' just like students, don't they?
Name: arabela reviewed
Dancing with Faeries on Dec 04, 2006 05:59 pm
*claps* I do believe in faeries! I dooo! =P
another great chapter!! gah, but most certainly not enough DG =P although I definitely love Blaise, she's cool...And Terry, too. And the nickname Terry-Boy CRACKS ME UP, hahaha.
Author's Response: Thank you for saving a faery's life. ^_^ If saying you don't believe makes one drop down dead, then saying you do believe saved one like Tink, on the brink of death! Next chap, there will be enough D/G. *cackles*
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Dancing with Faeries on Dec 04, 2006 05:14 pm
You have to clap your hands :-) I am, that was a wonderful chapter! "he sauntered up to walk beside the girl he secretly called Freckles." that's my favorite line. My boy friend teases me about my freckles some, I don't know it just made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I can't wait for the next chapter, as always.
Author's Response: Yay for you having freckles! In a future chap, Draco tries to give a kiss for each one--hope your guy does too! ^_~
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 03, 2006 10:49 pm
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(Yeah...was rendered incoherent by a swoon-worthy, drool-worthy chapter. Last! Scene! So! Hot! I'm Using! Too many! Exclamation points!)
Author's Response: If you think that was hot, wait until chapter 9, *cackles, then breaks off and looks at calendar- the beta has had 8 for a week, better email!* :D
Name: arabela reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 03, 2006 11:15 am
agggghhh, gah, i went to go to the next chapter and...alas. thats it. =P this is SO FUNNY! I love Blaise, she's great. pleeeaase update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I will definitely send my beta an email, maybe 'double check' to make sure she got the chap. ^_~
Name: Kaija reviewed
Black Knight on Dec 02, 2006 04:58 pm
WHOOHOO. I love the last scene. So hot. :) Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks--neither can I. =] There's dancing with faeries, and the chap after that...well, it's been 6 days since I sent ch 8 to the beta, so I may have to email, lol.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 04:45 pm
"Do you have the same dreams I do, Red? Ones where you and I are a lot more--friendly--and wear a lot less clothing?"
I DO!
Love the Black Knight! Brilliant! ;) I even lovehow he praised Crabbe and Goyle! Love him! ;)
Author's Response: Ta, Thanks! Crabbe and Goyle will grow on you, like fungus, maybe, but by the end of the story you might be mentally patting them on the head, saying, 'that'll do, boys, that'll do' too! =]
Name: jess10 reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 09:35 am
Oooooooh! I love Draco. *sigh*
Author's Response: I'm glad you love Draco...Harry/Ginny shippers will be very unhappy with this story. LOL
Name: cornishpixie reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 29, 2006 06:21 am
Wow, what incredibly bad timing on the part of Hermione. I thought the matchmakes had finally done it, but I guess I was mistaken. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Got to make our couple work for that first kiss! *cough*ch9*coughcough* ^_~
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 11:05 pm
ooh, and I just read your review reply...
Chapter 8??? I am jumping already... ;)
Author's Response: Yay for jumping! (or floating, on faery dust ^_~)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 11:03 pm
ooh finally!
I was a bit worried that he would never do anything. This is such a good chapter!! Can't wait to read more...
Oh, by the way, did you see the BBC version of this? It wasn't original Shakespeare language, but I thought it was quite good...
Unless you're not from England, in which case, never mind.
Author's Response: I watch BBC America on occasion, but I didn't see that. I love the Branagh/Thompson Benedick/Beatrice film version, though!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 08:37 pm
Oh..and now I want more, damn you.
Good job. I love how you're working the Slytherin and the more human girl into Blaise. It works well. And I like you're Luna. Sometime's she's completely conherant, and sometimes, she just decides to drift off. It's a really interesting portrayal of her.
Author's Response: I really do see Luna as a sharp witted Ravenclaw...just a quirky and eccentric one, hee. I'm so glad you like Blaise, since she's virtually an OC, and they're not always popular, lol.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 07:29 pm
Bwah haha. I loved this chapter the first time, and loved it even more the... whatever this time was! Thanks for the regular updates... they are tres amusing, and it is nice to re read an old favorite without having to read the entire thing in one go (like I did the first time!)
Cheers!
Natasha
Author's Response: Fifty chapters in one go! You rock! Some people may never go back and edit a story, but I think if you love it, it's worth it, and I hope you think the story shinier this time around because it's polished! :D
Name: Cocoa reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 06:20 pm
Hurrah! Another wonderful bit of writing. Although I'm strictly Neville/Luna, i think the Luna/Harry you've thrown in is cute. Congrats on another great addition!
Author's Response: Merci! ^_^ Luna/Neville- never read one of those. Is it misfits who see each other as more? In this story, each girl has a different kind of romance. Blaise experiences coup de foudre, falling hard and fast, Ginny falls--and fights admitting it--just as hard while Luna dreams of one boy, until another one proves reality is so much better. ^_^
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 03:40 pm
hahahahhahaha lol that was a great chapter! update real soon! lightning fast! sry a bit hyper at the moment!
Author's Response: Hyper, to me, is another way of saying 'energetic' :D. Thanks!
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Black Knight on Nov 28, 2006 03:05 pm
Ah!! This chapter leaves me wanting so much more! It's getting interesting, but is antagonizing the way this story is moving so slowly towards its destination--you are evil! ;) Give Luna some luv! Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: I sent ch 8 to the beta last night, so I'm crossing fingers it will be polished up in a few days! Next chap is when the romance gets off the ground, so to speak, with Dancing with Faeries! ^_^
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 19, 2006 09:41 pm
argh! I just chanced upon your story today and I love it! I really hope there's more of this great story coming really soon! I generally prefer Blaise as a boy, but I think u've done a great job with her. totally love it! looking forward to an update soon pleeeeeeeease :)
Author's Response: I don't blame you for preferring BZ as a boy, since he is one in canon! :D Just think of mine as the other Blaise, or an exception to the rule, since I did start writing the story before the HBP and Girl!Blaise fits this story--which will span the entire school year and into the summer, so I'm thrilled you want more!
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 19, 2006 08:24 pm
Have I told you lately that I love your Draco?
Awesome as ever! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! *hums 'Love is the sweetest thing' from James and the Giant Peach* :)
Name: die Loreley reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 19, 2006 04:26 am
*shivers at Draco's laughter* Good for Terry! Make him worry. *glares* But poor, poor Ginny. Just because Draco's insecure... *shakes head*
*laughs at Hermione* Your boy really doesn't have a clue. But then again, I should talk...
Well done! And can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Don't you find that what irritates you in a character- or what you laugh at- reflects something in yourself? Makes reading fun, lol. :D
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 17, 2006 04:28 pm
Well done! You are developing the characters slowly and believably .. I can't wait to read what happens next! More L/H please their small interaction was adorable!
Author's Response: Terry and Blaise may have fallen hard and fast (at least on her part, lol) but Draco and Ginny are going down swinging, :D. As for Harry, he may be Luna's Mr. Right, or he may be Mr. Right Now. ^_~
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 17, 2006 09:39 am
i love this story! its simply amazing! update soon!
Author's Response: I pinky promise to update as fast as my beta allows. *wishes she had a non-grammatically challenged house elf* :D
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 17, 2006 08:31 am
aaw
poor blaise, draco is quite nice...
but he is also vair mean... can't ginny make him jealous?
You said she would, but does it have to be colin?
vair vair good. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: He'll be jealous of someone more impressive than Colin, don't worry! *cough*chapter8*coughcough*
Name: Kisou reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 16, 2006 09:41 pm
I'm a litle confused about why Blaise and Draco are both angry at Terry. I mean, he didn't help her, but was he really in the position to do so. And besides, was it really that bad. I mean, I guess I really don't know. I am, according to many of my friends, devoid of any normal feelings of embaressment, so perhaps I'm not one to judge normal human behavior. But, I don't think Blaise is one to be that way either. And I don't see Terry as anything but brave. I mean, how many guys can go up to a girl at what? 17? and tell her they love her without stammering or all that crap. The potion didn't work that time, right?
Well, besides that problem, which probably comes from a lack of human feeling on my side, I think this is still coming along very nicely. Keep it up.
Author's Response: They're teenagers, Slytherin teenagers, :D, In Draco's case, vengeful when offended--but it works out well, because Terry is brave, and a good guy.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Oh gods, a Gusher on Nov 16, 2006 06:11 pm
"You had quite a conversation with yourself, shaking your head yes and no and yes again." I have SO done that before! :) Great update! ;)
Author's Response: Yay for you doing that too! I had a mental image of Buttercup doing that in the Princess Bride, so thank you, Princess Buttercup! (please tell me you've seen the film, I get very sad when people haven't, lol)