Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Chapter 14 on May 11, 2008 05:47 am
AHHHH, I love this type of bonding and a nice Lucius & Narcissa, tis as it should be.
Name: lavenderab reviewed Chapter 14 on Feb 28, 2008 04:11 pm
aww i think i like the cookie idea
Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 23, 2007 03:15 am
Oh, I like the nice Malfoys!!! It makes me kind of sad that Lucius ever cheated on Narcissa!!! I hope Draco asks Ginny to the party. That would be fun.
Name: Sub reviewed Chapter 14 on Aug 10, 2007 08:22 am
Wow, I have been reading on and on, just wanting to know how it continues and without reviewing.... *shame* I just wanted to say that it is a pleasant change to see Lucius and Narcissa somehow nice, rather than Totally Evil. I admit it feels a bit... unknown, but pleasant nonetheless.
I still like your story, the humour and the obvious attraction between D/G.
Okay, I am off to read on. :)
~ Sub
Name: Myrthe reviewed Chapter 14 on Jan 02, 2007 10:14 am
Nice fanfiction! I hope you'll continue writing soon, because I loved reading it!
Oh and by the way; happy new year ;)

Author's Response: Thank you. I will update as soon as I get more back from Dima. Happy new year to you too.
Name: dangalltheway reviewed Chapter 14 on Jan 01, 2007 05:40 pm
Woohoo!!! Great story - do you have this many chapters on the hpff.com? Cause I noticed your story here and it had double the chapters and I was like 'Woah... where did those come from?' lol I LOVE this story - it's acctually a good, grammatically correct (usually all the ones I read are those terrible ones with no descriptions... don't know why but I hate those!) so I love this one. Hope you make it a long story... and more stories after this!

Aubrey

Author's Response: Thank you. I have been adding to HPFF, but I started at a later date. It's just easier to update at this site for some reason. I do try with the grammar, but I need a beta for the commas. They are evil in my opinion.
Name: lurvhp reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 28, 2006 09:12 pm
more more more

Author's Response: I will post as soon as my beta gets back to me. I promise. :)
Name: gryffindorlady89 reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 25, 2006 04:31 pm
i love it! i usually write my reviews after i finish the entire story, so don't think i've been leaving you out in the cold ok. i thought i would never see the day when pansy and neville are going out. keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought Pansy deserved someone nice for a change.
Name: Dex reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 14, 2006 08:35 pm
I LOVE this story. it's fantastic. I really want to know what Ginny gets Draco, and how Ginny handles getting a broom. (I can just imagine Ron blowing his top over some imagined innuendo, or simply because Ginny has a better broom than him.) I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm not sure what Ginny is going to get him yet. Hopefully inspiration will strike.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 13, 2006 02:08 pm
awwww i love those two. gin and draco... to be young and in love... haha jk update soon

Author's Response: Oh to be young and in love or lust?
Name: Labelle reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 13, 2006 08:28 am
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i loved it.
and im REALLY REALLY happy lucius is kinda sweet adn cool. all the fanfics he's always really evil amd like beats him and cissy alot. i like his good side!!!

Author's Response: I don't really like the evil side of the fanfics. I prefer humorous fluff myself.
Name: Aphrodite reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 13, 2006 07:08 am
Been reading from the start haven't reviewed till now but I absolutly love it along with all your other stories your a really talented writer

Author's Response: Thank you so much. : )
Name: CrookshanksG reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 13, 2006 06:12 am
Very nice, short, but sweet. I'm curous to see what ginny gets draco for christmas. maybe something small, that he carries around with him....

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. The next chatper is really long, and as soon as my beta gets it back to me, I will post it.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 02:10 pm
~Wonderful Chapter. Thanks for the update.~

Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: SilentOcean reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 01:35 pm
Thanks for the chapter, and so soon too!
All of the parents seemed a bit off to me, I would have expected them to react a little les...calmly. My mom would make more of a fuss if I came home and told her I was dating anyone, even if its not someone she holds anyting against.

Author's Response: I like to think that Ginny and her mum have a special relationship because she is the only girl. I actually talked to my mom a lot about the guys I dated, but that was just me.
Name: imelda reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 12:50 pm
Lovely chapter!!

Speaking of "lovely," it was a bit jarring when Draco said "that would be lovely" to his house-elf. Very, very out of place.

Otherwise, I was surprisingly pleased with the way you showed life at Malfoy Manor. Of course, it followed the typical fanfiction lines of being both too stilted and warm, but I can see how you wouldn't want to make it too complicated for the sake of the story. This is not a dark fic.

The Burrow was nice, too. Ron was really funny. For that matter, Draco was really funny too-- "Which has a higher alcohol content?" LOL! An unusual rapport between him and Lucius.

I'm only worried about their gifts...Ginny's going to get him a Quidditch book, and he's going to get her a top of the line broom! I bet that'll be awkward! I almost don't know if it'd be better or worse for her to just bake him the cookies.

Thanks for updating so regularly. Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you. I agree, Draco's life is not dark in this fic. I like a Draco who is nice to his house elfs and a Lucius who is not evil. I like the fluff, what can I say?
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 11:02 am
cute and sweet...love it...cannot wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you. I will update asap.
Name: WolfStar reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 07:41 am
Too cute for words. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you : )
Name: ronlover reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 06:16 am
Great Update!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you : )
Name: miz_dust reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 12, 2006 02:09 am
continueeeeee!!!

Author's Response: I will asap. I promise.
Name: Lynda reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 11, 2006 11:58 pm
Great chapter as always. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. : )
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 11, 2006 10:12 pm
she's eating a slug!!!!!!!!!
aaaaaw. that's lovely! And he must be too, as that is the law of all things straight and must be obeyed. Fabulous chapter, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I like that Harry helps Ron with his denial.
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 11, 2006 09:50 pm
I can't wait for them to exchange gifts *grins*

Author's Response: Hopefully it will go well. I still don't know what she'll get him.
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 11, 2006 08:51 pm
Awww I really liked this chapter. It was all warm and fuzzy. haha Yay for Christmas! (Sorry - I've been in a very 'happy holidays' mood lately...) Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Cookies and candy canes for everyone. That is my motto. You don't have to apologize for xmas spirit. Thank you for the review.
Name: pens82 reviewed Chapter 14 on Dec 11, 2006 06:24 pm
great chapter loved the eating slugs bit the was great

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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