Name: Megan reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jan 12, 2007 01:14 pm
Ohhh...I would've denied Draco kisses. Or...well, probably not. My will-power would be nonexistant where Draco is concerned, but I would at least TRY to deny him stuff until he said "I'm sorry." I don't blame Ginny, though. Since, I mean, it's DRACO we're talking about, here.
Author's Response: Willpower around him would be a problem. *wink
Thanks for the review.
Name: Labelle reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jan 12, 2007 01:13 pm
eeeeeee. good story. i was waiting for some fight to go on between them becuase draco, being arrogant and cold [yet sexy], did something...well arrogant and cold.
i loved it.
Author's Response: He does have sort of a personality disorder, doesn't he? I think Ginny will sort him out.
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jan 12, 2007 01:07 pm
when will he get his devil cat back...set it to attack blaise...hehehe...he needs to learn to apologize for real not just that he will see that it want happen...keep it up cannot wait for more...
Author's Response: The cat will come back in the next chapter. I think he'll apologize for real before it is all over.
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jan 12, 2007 12:45 pm
Draco stared at her for a moment. “You know what? I am going to go back and be with my friends. When you are being rational again, we can talk.”
That is a very nice line.
"I am not happy either, you jealous, insecure girl.”
That is extremely true, if nothing else could be said for your Draco it'd be that he tells it like it is, fortunately a lot more could be said for him, he just wouldn't be Draco otherwise.
I'll appologize for being too harsh in my last review, but I will say that your writing is lacking the passion it started out with. You need to find a way to bring that back, another arc perhaps?
I'm extremely fascinated by and wary of the relationship between Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy and I'm anxious to see how it progresses.
In my opinion, Ginny wouldn't have walked away in tears, in fact lately she seems to be in tears over nothing, I think the cannon Ginny and the Ginny from the beginning of the story would have barged in and demanded an explanation. I have to say I much prefer that Ginny.
Author's Response: Thank you for saying something nice before you mentioned your objections. They are much easier to take that way.
I think Ginny is mad when she has tears in her eyes. When I get mad, I tear up. It is incredibly annoying.
I do recognize that the story has shifted from a funny fic to more of a romance, but I think it is unavoidable. I'll try to add more funny stuff as I go along.