Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 03:45 pm
I've always wondered if that wall thing would work. Great story. Will there be more? I forgot to see if it was complete or not. It does stand alone, but more would be wonderful.
Author's Response: Hee! I can't say whether it would really work or not in RL, but in fanfic anything is possible! This is a one-shot, but we'll see if more bunnies come talk to me later.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 02:00 pm
~OMG....I just love this. Very well written. I love how Draco sees Ginny.~
Author's Response: thank you!
Name: Rashonda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 01:19 pm
I really enjoyed the word-play in this, you provided excellent descriptions and allowed to me visualize it. As always, Harry is a deluded little ass but I still love him, he had to find a way to purge himself. Great job.
Author's Response: Poor Harry gets so abused in this corner of the fandom. He does tend to be a bit self-absorbed, though. Thank you for the review!
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 12:15 pm
That was really excellent. I loved the play between the magical weather and Ginny's emotions--it heightened the tension beautifully. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories (both smutty and not!) from you in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you! I liked the idea of the ceiling in the Great Hall being almost sentient.
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 11:50 am
I thought you did a great job. Congratulations. I like how Draco yelps when he hears the thunder coming from the enchanted ceiling. The fact that he reacts to something unexpected makes him seem more human.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 10:43 am
Very well done. It was written beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 10:10 am
Really well done! I love that Draco purposely assigned the student duty that he was clearly afraid of doing. I love that Draco wasn't mentioned as the Slytherin Sex God, but as the god who would receive the sacrifice. I love how there was no meantion of the littlest Weasley/Weaselette. I especially loved this line: "she growled her approval, a roll of thunder rumbling in tandem." I also like that he pushed her underwear to the side instead of sliding it off, that's more like real life. The only thing I could see fault with is that Ginny didn't complain of the stone wall behind her, it couldn't have been so smooth against her naked back. I can see this as a stand-alone, but I would LOVE if you continued on with this story. Great job, well written!
Author's Response: Wow! What a nice review! Thank you so much for being so specific about things you liked, and areas where you think I could have done better. I appreciate the thought you put into it.
I may have a follow-up to this story at some point, but for now I'm just going to call it a one shot. We'll see if the plot bunny comes to visit me again.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 09:54 am
Loved it! Only wished that Harry caught them in the throngs of passion to know what it felt like!
Author's Response: It was tempting to have Harry come in, but I wanted this to be something just between the two of them. I'm sure Ginny would figure out a way to let Harry know that something had happened. She's like that.
Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 09:42 am
I liked it and I wish it wasn't just a one-shot. I almost thought that Harry would come after Ginny to explain and accidently find the two lovers entwined, but that would be too cliche.
Author's Response: I was very tempted to have Harry walk in on them, but I didn't want to ruin their moment. This way it will be a good memory of an illicit evening with Draco, rather than a memory of a huge fight with her boyfriend that would undoubtedly get back to her brother.
I suspect I overthink these things a little.
Thank you for the review!