Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2006 05:26 pm
Okay, I'm an idiot. I didn't realize until after I left that last review that there was a second chapter. The story is more satisfying as a whole than just the first chapter was alone (surprise, surprise!), but I still don't think it will be one of my favorites. Though I do like the bits from the unnamed Auror's point of view--that helps give a fresh perspective. And some of the little details (like Draco forgetting how cold England can be) give the story life. Once again, thanks for posting!
Name: new moon reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2006 04:11 pm
you cant be done it needs to continue its sooooooo good!!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2006 03:37 pm
Ok, I have tears in my eyes. The reaction to his son really got to me. Good job. I'm a sap.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2006 03:08 pm
awwwwww that was really really cute, it was like a two chapter one shot.. haha.