Name: b1elliot reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Feb 05, 2014 11:19 pm
Finally know what happened to Luna. Good chapter.
Name: Rhianna reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Feb 22, 2011 11:22 pm
Geez!!! Could you put a Kleenex warning on these kind of chapters in the future! I was already feeling emotional with how downright cruel Draco was at the end of Chapter 7 - then this! Tears were literally running down my face. Well written chapter - but very painful to read.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Your concerns about kleenex warnings have been duly noted. =P
Name: Golden Dove reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on May 01, 2007 11:50 am
It may have just been me ( what else is new? I always get confused by the simple stuff!) but this chapter was a bit confusing, lol. What I did understood though, I loved!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I know the chapter was confusing, there was a lot of jumping between dreams and points of view and even a flashback. But I felt like they needed to all be together. *shrug*
Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 25, 2007 08:54 am
write more ill love you for ever.
Author's Response: Oooh. I feel the love. =P
Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 23, 2007 10:03 am
write more it is so good. i wana no what happens next
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 18, 2007 06:39 pm
Wow, this is such a good story! I love how you incorporated D/G while following JK's plot. Also, Draco's not helpless and weak, and he's no knight in shining armour either (though that scene when he held her was definitely something). Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! It sounds cheesy, but I've always kind of thought Draco is like a cornered animal - he doesn't really have anywhere to go, so he lashes out to get what he needs to get done. Now he has a bit of room to move, and well, this is how I think he would play things.
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 18, 2007 05:56 pm
great story so far!! i can't wait for more so hurry! and get some d/g action in! (next time ginny stumbles into him, he brushes his lips against hers?)
Author's Response: Good idea for he first kiss...we'll have to see. I'm not sure how I'm going to get there yet. =D
Name: arabela reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 17, 2007 05:23 am
ahhhh, no, you have to update *cho*
gah, I knew I shouldn't have read this until you were finished with it! =(
I *love* this story, and I really hope you get a chance to update soon.
=)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'll try to have the next one out to the proofer soon. =D
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 03:48 pm
omw. update now. not even kiddinng. omw.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: search4inspiration reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 02:07 pm
It's stories like this that keep us mediocre writers humble. As a rule I try to avoid fics rated higher than "sortof naughty"... but this was so highly reviewed that I thought I'd just read the prologue and see if it was any good. An hour or so later, here I am, completely enthralled by your work! I love the emotion in this story... it's different from J.K.'s writing and yet still in character and completely believable. No wonder it's so highly reviewed. Haha. And your story-line is riveting, too... I'll be looking for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the completely and totally flattering review. The rating is just precautionary measure, as I'm not entirely how far I'm going with it (still!) As of yet, it could probably be rated a bit less, but whatev.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 12:16 pm
~Really Great Chapter. I am such a big fan of your work. I cant wait for another update.~
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 08:27 am
brilliant, that's all i can say really. loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 07:09 am
ARG, heartbreaking. I like the detail where she realises she changes back because Luna must be dead. I wonder why Luna did it though. And your intimation that Draco was involved thickens the plot. WhoOOH! I am very excited for the next installment! Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Thank you! You know, I've always had the feeling that Luna just *knows* things. Hopefully I'll have more of that sorted out later. =D
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 05:30 am
Oh my gosh. This was perfect. I was near sobbing. From start to finish, Luna saying that quirky remark and then saving Ginny. Draco casting the repelling charm. The twins. Everything was perfect.
Why do I do this to myself? I get myself in love with WIP? WHY?
Anyway - lovely chapter. Thank you for the update! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I promise not to abandon - is that helpful at all? haha.
Name: Hajra reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 04:58 am
This was really good! I found it extremely moving...Ginny's nightmares are really quite distressing...i'm just a little confused, about the scene Draco was seeing..was it a flashback or a dream? X
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =D The answer to your question is both - I realize that this chapter is a bit confusing - it jumps back and forth quite a bit and yet, I feel like it all needed to be together. The intent was that like in Chapter 3 (and yes, it has been quite awhile since Chapter 3 was posted), the dreams aren't really dreams but memories. I think I missed it a bit - but I'm not quite sure how to fix it.
Name: V_is_for_Violet reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 04:12 am
i really liked this chapter :) although am sorry bout luna.. will wait patiently for d rest of d story..
V.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sad about Luna too, but I will say that she went out with a bang - because I've always privately thought that Luna just *knows* things.
Name: kellbell930 reviewed
Chapter 8: Haunt on Mar 16, 2007 03:16 am
Oooh, very nice chapter. I loved the way Malfoy didnt really know what to do at first, very slytherin like. And I wonder what the dreams mean? I'm guesssing they have some significance...hmmm...very well written! cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you. I can't imagine Draco knowing how to react to such an outburst - to me, Slytherins are much more into the little things... they wouldn't pitch a huge fit where anyone could possibly see. The dreams were meant to be 'flashbacks' - like Draco's dream about what happened in oh...Chapter 3 - Nightmare. =D