Name: Niraerlinn reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 01:06 pm
I really like this, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm thinking that I'm going to post the entire store here. I have chapters 1-14 written so far, and am not yet finished with the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 12:49 pm
Good start. I'll be checking back for more.
Isn't it odd, that stories creep into your head when your sick. I think the antibiotics are partly to blame.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it so far. You know, I wouldn't be surprised if you're right about the antibiotics.... Oh well, whatever brings about plot bunnies!
Name: ablaze reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 12:35 pm
ohhh write more! sounds so good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Don't worry, I have more written! It's just a matter of editing and submitting all the written chapters thus far :).
Name: Britannia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 09:43 am
Ooo, i love it so far, PLEASE WRITE MORE! :D:D
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, there will be more....if you're really anxious to check out the other chapters look at ff.net. Otherwise the others will hopefully be added shortly!
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 06:17 am
ooh, I love the fact that you are posting this here too! Know I get to read it from the beginning while you update it here=) I love this story, the humour is so good, can't wait for the update at FF.net;)
Author's Response: Hahha! Wow! Thank you! Yeah, I'm working hard on the next chapter, but writing is going fairly slow....*sigh* I'm trying my best!
Name: nappy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 05:50 am
Brilliant start. Keep it coming! *huggles*
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm working on editing and submitting the other chapters!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2006 02:50 am
Great start off point. I think I will add this to my favorites.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm flattered! I hope to have the other chapters added soon :)
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2006 09:06 pm
That is good monaloge. I generally dislike monologes because I don't like Ginny to seem stupid, and often it makes her seems somewhat so. Or maybe I just think that your normal schoolgirl is stupid. I really don't know. But, anyway, you'Ve done a pretty decent job of it. I actually did find it amusing. Keep it up - that way of making the monalog seem more like an intelligent human being and less like a really giddy school girl. ^_^
Author's Response: I agree with you- monologue can be a bit annoying sometimes if it's done poorly. I'm glad you found mind sort of funny! Thanks a lot for the review!
Name: l'istesso reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2006 07:10 pm
Oh you're going to post over here too? Cool :D
Author's Response: I figured I might as well! This is one of my favorite sites to READ fiction, so I was like "it'd be awesome to post here..." :)!
Good hearing from you!
Name: die Loreley reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2006 07:07 pm
*swoons* Draco and Ginny moments! Can't wait for more! Is it all supposed to be in italics? Don't worry if it isn't, I have formatting problems too! :P
Author's Response: *hangs head in shame*
No, not it's not supposed to be in italics..... I suck at formatting. Can you tell?
Thanks for the review!