Name: reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 28, 2006 11:39 am
Nice......right storiess.
Name: WolfStar reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 30, 2006 03:41 pm
BTW, *soars. But other than that, it's pretty interesting. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks, it took me a little while to figure out how to edit it. :)
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2006 05:37 am
That was lovely.
The only thing I will say in terms of consructive criticism is that eagles do not "sore" they "soar." You should use "soars" instead of "sores" in this case.
Name: pens82 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2006 05:19 am
cute
Author's Response: Thanks!