I really enjoyed this fic, so please don't stop writing it. It's been a while since you updated, hope you will do it soon. It's my one and only favotite so I want to keep on reading.... Thanks
Author's Response: I haven't abandoned the story, I do plan on finishing it however I'm not quite sure how soon that will be. I'm glad you are enjoying it though.
Oh, thank you so much for continuing this! I cheered when I saw it post. I'm anxious to see how everything weaves together.
Author's Response: You're welcome, sorry it took me so long. You'll see the weaving soon enough :)
Don't want to be a pain , and rush you but please more!! The ships you have going on are the best I have read. Question, what gave you the inspiration to write Ron the way you did? More to the point do you have other Ron stories with the same characterisation? lol!!
Author's Response:You are not being a pain, glad to know the story is still being read. I've been hit up with some computer issues plus work which is why there hasn't been an update lately. I'm back now and my beta has the next chapter so it should be up soon. The story has not been abandoned, and will be completed.
I like Ron as a character in the books, and I think he gets the short straw in many of the stories out there. He is smart, and he has a lot of heart. He also has a lot of people in his life who are well known for one thing or another and he gets overlooked - I didn't want him overlooked.
Sorry, this is the only story I have written which is posted. Maybe one day I'll fix my older work and post it :)
i like how the plot is woven and that you have to pay attention as a reader to get everything. this story is really good! i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter should be up soon. Yes, there are things that the reader needs to remember from the beginning because they are crucial to certain parts of the plot later on.
Your writing is good though it seems to be lacking. There's no plot set up, you just dive right in, I'm not sure I approve of the original characters and I think the characterization of Blaise and Draco are a bit off, though your description of Blaise is perfect. I don't think Draco is one to pout though I do beleive he'd have sneered.
Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to give me concrit. All I can say about the plot is, it unfolds as the story goes on, by having a back story it would all become lengthy and redundant. It seems my OC's have two categories -- love them and hate them. Although Sage Weasley is not an OC he is a canon Weasley brother, we just don't know what his name is (hence Sage) or anything else about him for that matter. We don't see Draco interact with his friends all that much in a relaxed setting, so there is no way of knowing if he pouts or not. He is a spoilt rich kid who is finally growing up, in light of that, I'm trying to keep him from sneering too much.
Very original, I love it. It definitely has me interested to see what's going to happen. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Glad you like it :)
I love this story. I read it over at FF.net. I love your Ron, he's fabolous (?) Is this one slightley diffrent? I love it anyhow=)
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes . This story is different as I'm sure you've noticed from the start. The plot holes from the original idea have been fixed and of course my beta is making it flow better. The one on FF is getting pulled off once I get the chance.
Interesting story line. I will be checking back for more. I can't imagine Ron's reaction to working with 2 Slytherins. That should be fun.
Author's Response: I think you 'll be surprised by Ron in this story, he is slightly different from how he is generally portrayed in fanfiction.
Interesting chapter. I enjoyed the start off & I look forward to seeing where this story will go.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :)
Great start! I cant wait to read more. The sooner the better :)
Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Whoa, straightforward!Ginny! I love the whole dragon-brotherhood idea. Tis terribly sexy!
Author's Response: Yep, I think Ginny is a strong character and she deserves to be portrayed as such. Let's hope that you like the other characters I bring in just as much.
I am so intrigued! Please keep going, I believe I may become addicted!
Author's Response: I have the next couple of chapters written up, just getting fine tuned.
Great start! You have me completely intrigued - can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers - sweetp
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it.
Oooh. Very interesting. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Next update should be soon.
I'm hooked. Which is saying something 'cause it normally takes more than one chapter to have me hooked on a story. Wonderful job - I can't wait to see where you take this. (Though, I must say that laughed when I read that Ron was the fourth member of the brotherhood. 2 Slytherin's, a Ravenclaw that might as well be a Slytherin and a Gryffindor. This should be good...)
Author's Response: Glad that one chapter has managed to get you hooked. I'm hoping it's some what of an original idea and as for Ron amongst my Slytherins, well , you'll see how he can definitely hold his own. :)
please update!!! its just the first chapter and already i'm hooked! i cant wait for whats to come next!!! :D love the story! lol... :D
Author's Response: Glad you like it :)
Ooo... I read this on another site, it's just been a long while. And I LOVED it then! So yay for it coming here! :) I'll most definitely be rereading it as you post ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It is being taken down from FF.Net and this version is slightly different. Also this version is much easier to read, have a wonderful beta who painfully goes through my work.