Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 19, 2007 11:27 pm
Conratulations you have reached just shy of perfection. Continue at this rate and you may have one of the best story written.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it.
Name: blissfulxsin reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 19, 2007 06:30 pm
nice chapter, I can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, the next one should be up soon.
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 18, 2007 05:56 am
Like I told you on FF.net (my penname is Cirolane) I love the part with the boys. I can't wait for more on that part. Still, I'm not all that fond of reading about the demon-girls. I'll just have to trust in you that it'll all have a purpose in the end:p
But overall, this is a very cool and original idea=)
Author's Response: Yes, you mentioned you like the boys and how much you dislike the girls. All I can tell you is that they are and will continue to be important to the story. I hope with time you can tolerate them :)
Name: kitten_1234 reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 18, 2007 04:22 am
This is great, please keep updating! I love your characterisation of Ron, it's not so OOC to be unbelievable, but he's not going as red as a tomato with rage every page!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I figure if the guy is smart enough to beat a huge chess board at aged 11, there has to be more to him than just juvenile rage. I'm not a fan of raging Ron.