Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 5 on Feb 17, 2007 07:47 am
Chaos. The demons sounds interesting. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yep, loads more of it to come too. Glad you find the demons interesting. There is still one more you get introduced to. That will be in the next chapter, which should hopefully be done soon.
Name: gorram reviewed
Chapter 5 on Feb 17, 2007 07:40 am
This thing between the Ron you have created and Hermione is making blush all types of red...please continue ..I love the way you have written Ron!!!
Author's Response: lol I didn't think it would make anyone blush, but I'm glad it did though. I love Ron as well, he is fun to write and I enjoy making him something other than a raving lunatic.
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Feb 16, 2007 07:42 pm
I loved it, as usual. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, next one should be up soon, more of Voldemort, Lucius and Sage and of course the brothers and the demons. It's going to be filled with a lot of action.
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
Chapter 5 on Feb 16, 2007 05:37 pm
this is utterly brilliant!! please continue!! it is fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I plan on seeing this story till the end, glad you like it so much.
Name: SGenevieve reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 16, 2007 02:27 pm
i like how the plot is woven and that you have to pay attention as a reader to get everything. this story is really good! i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter should be up soon. Yes, there are things that the reader needs to remember from the beginning because they are crucial to certain parts of the plot later on.
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
Chapter 4 on Feb 11, 2007 04:22 pm
oooh! i love this story!! please continue!!
Author's Response: Glad to know you like it. I am continuing, the next chapter should be up in a week or so if all goes well :)
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 4 on Feb 08, 2007 01:45 am
I'm so mad at myself for not reading this before the site went down. This really is one of my favorite stories. It is so original and full of adventure!
That curse Sage used was really discusting, I flinched when I read about it. I really like this Sage Weasley, is he Arthurs' brother? One minor thing: Shouldn't the deatheaters call Voldemort 'the Dark Lord'?
Kiara and Cassie are really funny when they are drunk. And I can't say it enough, I LOVE RON, in this story!!!
Can't wait for the next update=)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. They refer to him as the Dark Lord when in his presence, but amongst themselves, not so much. As you may have noticed the DE's talking about him aren't all that loyal at this point in the story. It's good to see you finally having something positive to say about Kiara and Cass; they aren't all bad :) Sage is Arthur's brother, he is a canon character, we just don't know his name or whereabouts. Ron will continue to grow as a character, you'll see a lot more of him in the near future. Thanks for reviewing.
Name: rae_grace reviewed
Chapter 4 on Feb 01, 2007 09:47 am
This is great! I can't wait for more. Sage and Lucius are mystifying me and I can't wait to see what happens to the guys! Plz update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Next one should be up soon :)
Name: WG13 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 31, 2007 03:13 pm
WOW - hats off to your imagination. I can' tell u just how much I am enjoying your story as well as ur writing skills.
I don't know how on earth I hadn't read this before, but I'm hooked all right now.
Love the fact that u portrayed Ron as something else besides a raving idiot. And yay for Pansy and Harry. LOL I had better stop gushing now.
Author's Response: Thank you! You've made me blush. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much. I noticed you picked up on the Harry/Pansy yay! At least you aren't repulsed by the idea.
I have never been a fan of Ron the raving idiot so I try my best not to write him as such. His temper while legendry is not his only characteristic.
Thank you for your compliments :)
Name: sillysun reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 31, 2007 09:13 am
This story continues to intrigue me - plus, anytime Blaise pops in is always a bonus! Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: Yes, Blaise is always a plus and I enjoy writing him. The next chapter should be up soon, glad you are enjoying it.
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 31, 2007 05:46 am
That chapter was great. I can not wait to find out who was the old Brotherhood and how Sage & Lucius play into it. I also want to know how Ginny & the diary play into the plot.
Author's Response: You'll learn more about the Brotherhood in the next two chapters, and also about Ginny and the Diary. I'm glad you are intrigued.
Name: kitten_1234 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 31, 2007 12:22 am
I adore this story, it is rapidly becoming one of my favourites! I'm still loving Ron (please put more Draco in or I may have to transfer allegiance, it's that well written!) I'm trying to stop myself looking it up on ff.net! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad it's enjoyable for you. You will see more of Draco soon, he is part of the brotherhood and the brotherhood is the central plot line. I'm glad Ron has been taken to so well, I enjoy writing him as he is.
Looking it up on ff.net won't work anymore, I took it down. The story has changed so much from what it was, the spoilers would've done nothing but confuse the readers.
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 30, 2007 07:11 pm
You have no idea how much I love this story. With every chapter's end I find myself wanting more. I love Ron in this. Normally, I'm not a big fan of his but you've given him backbone and power. I love that. And I must admit I'm highly intrigued when it comes to Lucius and Sage's parts in this show. *standing ovation* Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, it's good to see that there are others who like this story as much. I'm not a huge fan of fanon Ron, which is why I have him as he is. I don't think that he is the raging idiot he is portrayed as so often. Lol, I didn't think I'd have any converts, but I suppose that is a good thing. In the original Lucius and Sage were not such integral parts of the plot, in the re-write, well, I couldn't help it.
Name: slygal reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 30, 2007 07:02 pm
Yeah, things seem to be moving... I like that Ginny finally stood up for herself with the girls! I hope she continues!
Author's Response: She will, Ginny isn't the type of person I see in the background. She'll definitely continue growing as a character.
Name: yalingster reviewed
Chapter 4 on Jan 30, 2007 05:43 pm
XD I love the "Moldy-Voldy" nickname. AHAHA that was funny. :D
Hi :D I'm a new reader. *scratches my head* I think so *nods* ^^
I love Sage. 8D Such a cool Weasley and boy oh boy oh boy, the relationship between Lucius and Sage is just so cute!!! And so is the scene between Ron and Hermione. 8D Oh gosh I just wanna run around the room and giggle now!
Such a good chapter! I can't wait for the next. *sits and waits* ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and that you like the friendship between Sage and Lucius.
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 19, 2007 11:27 pm
Conratulations you have reached just shy of perfection. Continue at this rate and you may have one of the best story written.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it.
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 19, 2007 07:40 pm
Your writing is good though it seems to be lacking. There's no plot set up, you just dive right in, I'm not sure I approve of the original characters and I think the characterization of Blaise and Draco are a bit off, though your description of Blaise is perfect. I don't think Draco is one to pout though I do beleive he'd have sneered.
Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to give me concrit. All I can say about the plot is, it unfolds as the story goes on, by having a back story it would all become lengthy and redundant.
It seems my OC's have two categories -- love them and hate them. Although Sage Weasley is not an OC he is a canon Weasley brother, we just don't know what his name is (hence Sage) or anything else about him for that matter.
We don't see Draco interact with his friends all that much in a relaxed setting, so there is no way of knowing if he pouts or not. He is a spoilt rich kid who is finally growing up, in light of that, I'm trying to keep him from sneering too much.
Name: blissfulxsin reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 19, 2007 06:30 pm
nice chapter, I can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, the next one should be up soon.
Name: slipin88 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2007 09:42 am
Very original, I love it. It definitely has me interested to see what's going to happen. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 18, 2007 05:56 am
Like I told you on FF.net (my penname is Cirolane) I love the part with the boys. I can't wait for more on that part. Still, I'm not all that fond of reading about the demon-girls. I'll just have to trust in you that it'll all have a purpose in the end:p
But overall, this is a very cool and original idea=)
Author's Response: Yes, you mentioned you like the boys and how much you dislike the girls. All I can tell you is that they are and will continue to be important to the story. I hope with time you can tolerate them :)
Name: kitten_1234 reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 18, 2007 04:22 am
This is great, please keep updating! I love your characterisation of Ron, it's not so OOC to be unbelievable, but he's not going as red as a tomato with rage every page!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I figure if the guy is smart enough to beat a huge chess board at aged 11, there has to be more to him than just juvenile rage. I'm not a fan of raging Ron.
Name: Dex reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 19, 2006 12:29 pm
LOVE IT! Excelent writing. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you, hopefully I won't be keeping you waiting too long.
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 15, 2006 10:15 pm
Have I mentioned yet that I'm postively hooked with this story? Great job. Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Well I'll be happy to provide you with a fix on a bi monthly basis :) I'm glad you enjoy reading it.
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 15, 2006 02:16 am
I love the last part. But I can't for the life of me understand why or how Ginny is friends with those two girls. It doesn't seem like they like her. And why anyone would tolerate that kind of bullshit from someone who's supposed to be your friend?
I love Ron, but like you can tell, I don't like Cass and Kiara!
The rest of the story and plot is great!
Author's Response: lol, I know you don't like Kiara or Cass. You made that clear to me before as well. Let me see if I can explain them to you. Both are Slyhterins to the core, they don't trust easily if at all and have so many skeletons in their closets that it would make a graveyard seem empty in comparison.
Understand this, they are not flawless, nor are they indestructible. Just have a few perks thanks to questionable genes. The next chapter explains why Ginny was with them and why she put up with their crap.
I'm glad you love Ron, I wasn't sure how he would be received. Thanks for the feedback :)
Name: Corinne85 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 14, 2006 07:41 pm
A little confusing as of, but im looking foward to the chapter.
Author's Response: I know everything is a little unclear at the moment, however things do get explained starting with the next chapter. I'm happy that you are still interested though :)